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I'm menulis a fanfic called "Almost Alice" about Alice, Jacob, Jasper, and Bella, and I'd really like it if you'd review. If anda like it, I can put up a link to the story (which is much farther along than the first chapter, I can tell anda that). And if you're gonna be mean about it, don't bother commenting. Thanks!
-Alice <3

Almost Alice
Chapter One: Smoke


“I win,” Alice berkata smugly, holding out her hand towards Edward. “Again.”

Edward rolled his eyes as he searches his backpack for Alice’s “prize.” I smiled. She was getting to be exactly like Jasper, always betting on something....

Mysterious love

-chapter one-



It was my first hari of 11th grade.My alarm clock went off I stayed in tempat tidur for a little while I didnt want too get up.But after a miniute atau two I just got up.I went too my closet and pick out some clothes really it was just what I seen first.After I dressed my self I went down stairs too see my father in the dapur makeing coffee.Soon he would be on his way too work, just like every day.My father is a lawyer for the town of Bartonville,Arkansas. Every body liked him thoughs who didnt did not know him very well,but he is very queit kinda like me.Him and my mother...

bella's pov

edward took my hand and we walk toward my parents

when my mother look at me her eyes got wider and my dad look surprized
edward was still holding my hand i was getting lebih nervous with each step a took foward

"Hello mother , father" my mother nodded and also my father
after a menit of silence
then my father look at edward
"Are anda carlisle younger brother Edward??" my dad ask and look at me when he berkata his name

probably remembering when i interrupt him and berkata edwards name i look at edward and he was repressing a smile probably someone was thinking something funny
my edward was...

The car is warm and as we drive off the reservation, my mind can only think of my dreams. They were so real so life like. They felt like the were really happening . My future couldn't already be set oleh my nightmares, could it?

"What are anda thinking about?" Jacob ask's me, never removing his eyes from the road. He is so good at setting the mood.

"Life, in general." I answer, not wanting him to worry. His face looks emotionless.

"I'm a good listener." he turns to me and smiles. "Really whats up?" He ask stoping the car.

"I'm just worried thats all."

"Do anda want to go se Carlisle?" His expression...

I watched my Aunt pack my bag. She barley told me that I was going to stay there a whole year. " Do anda want to take this Ipod" she asked. I didn't say anything. " anda know this silence treament won't do anda any good" She said. "Ok grab your backpack and let's go" she whispered. I followed her to the car. We arrived at the airport and she hugged me and cried." Be good and listen. The sonner anda start to talk the sonner anda get to come home. I didn't want to come halaman awal and pass oleh the empty lot that once held my home. "Bye. cinta you. anda better leave the plane to Arizona is about to leave" she...

hope anda like it if it is looking to much like twilight sorry a twist is coming promise

his car wasnt that fancy like the cars i was used to seeing atau driving but it was clean and new.and he look great driving it...i ask one of the pertanyaan to distract me
"so do anda have any family how old anda really are do anda have any powers why did anda chose to live in here?" ok i ask lebih than one question
he smile at me "calmly i will answer all your pertanyaan "he smile and started
"i am 25 years live old but my growing stop i think anda could say 18 atau 19 years old never a way to be sure right?" he look at...

this is my first hope anda like it!!!
nessie's pov
yes yes finally !!! i thought
today i would finally stop growing ,today it is like my 17 birthday.
i would be alowed to go to high school i was very excited but also nervous because my jacob can't go with me he has to stay on the reservation....
jacob my jacob jack has been with me since i was born and has cinta me since, well in different ways but ....
today it will be the hari that i would finally be able to tanggal him "officially"that means with my overprotective dad permision i chucled to myself

i started to change to my first hari to school outfit...

I'm so sorry for not menulis quicker I had some trouble with this chapter although i hope anda enjoy it and PLZ Rate, comment, and enjoy
XD Luv stepphy

Chapter 3: When everything turns upside down!!!
When I woke up my vision was a little blurry, but after I blinked a couple of times my view came back in focus.
"Hey honey, how are anda feeling" his sweet voice rang through my ears. I winced - a normal reaction - as he caressed my arm.
"Alright what happened?"
"We don't know....we were hoping anda would remember" he pleaded.
I wasn't sure if I wanted to tell him the truth. I was afraid he would be angry...

Zoe's POV
The last thing I remember is that I got shot in the betis and Collin was carrying me home. I sat up on a meja and looked behind my shoulder. I jumped up, my family scarred me. Emmet, Bella, Jasper, and Edwad were standing in the front crouch like they were protecting the rest of the family. So this means I am a Cullen now? I asked everyone. They sorta of laughed. I looked at Alice and than everyone elses, there hazel eyes all stared at me wide and in shock. I looked down and notice i wasn't standing I was floating in mid air! I could fly, I guess anda could put it that way. How do I...

Collin's POV
Dad, anda have to convince Mom to unground me! I have to get to Jacob, he is going to be really ticked at me and Zoey needs me! Tell me the truth about the hari before yesterday, where were you? I went to the pantai with Brady, Zoe, and Seth, then we went to Billy's and eat dinner. I had to take Zoey home, the Cullens left to go on a hunting trip. So I promised I just ment to stay for a little bit but then we feel asleep on the couch. Okay Dad, nothing happened. I promise. Okay, I will talk to your mom about anda being ungrounded. Go to your room lock the door and play musik from your...

Chapter 12: Monster Jakes POV
I felt like I was stuck in a recurring nightmare. Nessie had slept, almost comatose for four days straight. The excited atmosphere in the Cullen household surrounding the arrival of our child was gone. Everyone was silent; the house had a sense of malignancy lingering throughout it. Sam and Emily and my father stopped oleh and kept vigil in the living room. Emily was very helpful, she tended to Renesmee almost daily along with Bella; but she did lebih of the work because Bella wouldn’t set foot into a room that I was in and I never left Nessie’s side.
    The...

This is my first fanfiction. Enjoy. ^_^

Bella's Pov

Edward and I have been living so peacefully after the wedding and the birth of Renesmee.
We all, Edward, Renesmee and I, decided that it wa time to be one big family.
Since Renesmee has been living with Jacob for a while, I think it is time that we
have a true family life.

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In human life, today was my 30th birthday and I was proud. In human age, 30 is
a big accomplishment in life. I make my first step into real adult-hood.
As a vampire though, it is just saying that anda lived for another long...