I thought I'd post this poem and try to get constructive feedback ;)
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To Know Her
She is who I see and all that I see.
Every menit with her is a menit to know her.
What does she like? What makes her angry?
What makes her laugh like no other?
I watch her pindah and learn her moods.
Her needs, I read like a book unbound.
I study her eyes as they speak to me
When words aren’t enough, when they can’t be found.
Her joy is mine, her emotions pindah me.
To be what she wants is no arduous task.
To protect her and know her – that’s what I do
So I find it amusing when she would ask:
“How is it that anda know me so well?
Sometimes it seems anda can read my mind.”
“Nah,” I smile. “I just pay attention.”
I become what she wants and needs, oleh design.
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To Know Her
She is who I see and all that I see.
Every menit with her is a menit to know her.
What does she like? What makes her angry?
What makes her laugh like no other?
I watch her pindah and learn her moods.
Her needs, I read like a book unbound.
I study her eyes as they speak to me
When words aren’t enough, when they can’t be found.
Her joy is mine, her emotions pindah me.
To be what she wants is no arduous task.
To protect her and know her – that’s what I do
So I find it amusing when she would ask:
“How is it that anda know me so well?
Sometimes it seems anda can read my mind.”
“Nah,” I smile. “I just pay attention.”
I become what she wants and needs, oleh design.
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If anda are a MAJOR atau just a fan of Stephanie Meyer's most populer Twilight Saga then pay attention.
On youtube.com there is a video of Stephanie being interviewed.She is going to publikasi Midnight Sun.If anda have read her draft of Midnight Sun atau even if anda haven't then anda can right how anda think it should be.She wants to see what her fan (aka- Us)think.And she also beleives that if we have a story in us then we should write it out and tampil evryone what we're capable of.
-twilight_unite-(MAJOR fan OF TWILIGHT SAGA)
If anda are a MAJOR atau just a fan of Stephanie Meyer's most populer Twilight Saga then pay attention.
On youtube.com there is a video of Stephanie being interviewed.She is going to publikasi Midnight Sun.If anda have read her draft of Midnight Sun atau even if anda haven't then anda can right how anda think it should be.She wants to see what her fan (aka- Us)think.And she also beleives that if we have a story in us then we should write it out and tampil evryone what we're capable of.
-twilight_unite-(MAJOR fan OF TWILIGHT SAGA)