I thought I'd post this poem and try to get constructive feedback ;)
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To Know Her
She is who I see and all that I see.
Every menit with her is a menit to know her.
What does she like? What makes her angry?
What makes her laugh like no other?
I watch her pindah and learn her moods.
Her needs, I read like a book unbound.
I study her eyes as they speak to me
When words aren’t enough, when they can’t be found.
Her joy is mine, her emotions pindah me.
To be what she wants is no arduous task.
To protect her and know her – that’s what I do
So I find it amusing when she would ask:
“How is it that anda know me so well?
Sometimes it seems anda can read my mind.”
“Nah,” I smile. “I just pay attention.”
I become what she wants and needs, oleh design.
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To Know Her
She is who I see and all that I see.
Every menit with her is a menit to know her.
What does she like? What makes her angry?
What makes her laugh like no other?
I watch her pindah and learn her moods.
Her needs, I read like a book unbound.
I study her eyes as they speak to me
When words aren’t enough, when they can’t be found.
Her joy is mine, her emotions pindah me.
To be what she wants is no arduous task.
To protect her and know her – that’s what I do
So I find it amusing when she would ask:
“How is it that anda know me so well?
Sometimes it seems anda can read my mind.”
“Nah,” I smile. “I just pay attention.”
I become what she wants and needs, oleh design.
