*Ding Dong*
"Coming!" Shouts a voice from the other side of the door. It opens slowly, and tall thin girl apears, she had short jet black hair and glowing amber eyes.
Alice.
Alice's POV
I stared at renesme shocked. What was she doing here? She looked tired, upset. Her hair was a little bit frizzy, and mascara ran down her face but it apeared to be dry. "Ness? what are anda doing here? does bella and edward know you're here???" I asked quitley. She solemly shook her head. "Can i come in?" she asked. "Sure" I stepped to the side and she walked in. "Babe? whats the matter?" Jasper asked coming out of the kitchen. He looked at renesme, with huge eyes. and quitley berkata oh. We sat down on the dipan, sofa me and Ness. "Whats up sweetie?" "Well, I want to go on a tanggal with jacob, but dad wont let me. it's not fair! He even berkata vampire and werwolfs are forbidden to date!" She angirly said. "That's not true, it was a law but no one follows it anymore vampire and werwolfs are allowed to tanggal no matter how disgusting it is..." I trailed off, knowing i hurt her feelings. "Alice! I cinta him! What do i do?" I sighed. Every teen life was hard, espically Renesme's life.
"Coming!" Shouts a voice from the other side of the door. It opens slowly, and tall thin girl apears, she had short jet black hair and glowing amber eyes.
Alice.
Alice's POV
I stared at renesme shocked. What was she doing here? She looked tired, upset. Her hair was a little bit frizzy, and mascara ran down her face but it apeared to be dry. "Ness? what are anda doing here? does bella and edward know you're here???" I asked quitley. She solemly shook her head. "Can i come in?" she asked. "Sure" I stepped to the side and she walked in. "Babe? whats the matter?" Jasper asked coming out of the kitchen. He looked at renesme, with huge eyes. and quitley berkata oh. We sat down on the dipan, sofa me and Ness. "Whats up sweetie?" "Well, I want to go on a tanggal with jacob, but dad wont let me. it's not fair! He even berkata vampire and werwolfs are forbidden to date!" She angirly said. "That's not true, it was a law but no one follows it anymore vampire and werwolfs are allowed to tanggal no matter how disgusting it is..." I trailed off, knowing i hurt her feelings. "Alice! I cinta him! What do i do?" I sighed. Every teen life was hard, espically Renesme's life.
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In my story, Edward is a smart over achiever, Emmett is in jail, and Bella is a mysterious selanjutnya door neighbor with some issues.
Edward has to decide if he's going to risk everything for Bella, atau if he's going to continue to please everybody around him and forget about her.
It's E/B AU-AH with heavy drama. I hope anda take a look at at!!
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