The first fan Fiction story I ever wrote...PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE commit...ID care if the komentar is good atau bad i need to know, i can handle it. :)
Rosalie's POV
I was in my room sobbing over my old life and the the fact I will be cold and hard forever. A knock at my door broke my thoughts. I quickly pulled myself together and said, "come in." The door opened wide enough to revel Edward, my brother for all intensive purposes. Edward was tall and always looked to have a sadden, i'm going to hurt anda if anda say the wrong thing to melook on his face. His hair stuck up every which a way, people we went to school with here in Astoria say he has hair like Elvis. He slowly stepped through the doorway I looked at him and berkata "Yes Edward, is anything wrong?"
He looked at me for a menit and said, "you need to hunt, your eyes are starting to get dark and everyone's worried because anda haven't been in a while."
"Ok Edward, I will go hunting." I told him getting off my tempat tidur and following him down stairs.
When I got down stairs I saw Esme, my mother, she has light brown hair that hung in curls just below her shoulders. I call her my mother because that is what she is, she is a better mother than my old one, not that I didn't cinta her though. "We are going hunting, we will be back soon." I berkata grabbing my jaket out of the closet.
"Alright, Carlisle should be returning from hunting himself." Esme berkata in return.
I smiled at her and followed Edward out the door. As soon as we reached the edge of the woods we both began to run. Edward stopped suddenly. What could possibly be wrong i thought.
"A herd of deer." he answered the thought that was in my head. It gets really annoy that he can read my every thoughts. "Tell me about." He berkata as he went after the buck that just emerged into the clearing in front of us.
A smaller female emerged behind it and I ran after. I put broke its neck so it can't fight and it won't feel anymore pain and slowly sank my teeth into its neck. The warm blood trickled out of the wound my teeth created and down my throat.
"I'm going back home." Edward berkata as I rose from the deer.
"Ok, I'm going to hunt a little longer." I responded.
Edward started running towards home, at that time, I had no idea of the tragedy of my decision.
Rosalie's POV
I was in my room sobbing over my old life and the the fact I will be cold and hard forever. A knock at my door broke my thoughts. I quickly pulled myself together and said, "come in." The door opened wide enough to revel Edward, my brother for all intensive purposes. Edward was tall and always looked to have a sadden, i'm going to hurt anda if anda say the wrong thing to melook on his face. His hair stuck up every which a way, people we went to school with here in Astoria say he has hair like Elvis. He slowly stepped through the doorway I looked at him and berkata "Yes Edward, is anything wrong?"
He looked at me for a menit and said, "you need to hunt, your eyes are starting to get dark and everyone's worried because anda haven't been in a while."
"Ok Edward, I will go hunting." I told him getting off my tempat tidur and following him down stairs.
When I got down stairs I saw Esme, my mother, she has light brown hair that hung in curls just below her shoulders. I call her my mother because that is what she is, she is a better mother than my old one, not that I didn't cinta her though. "We are going hunting, we will be back soon." I berkata grabbing my jaket out of the closet.
"Alright, Carlisle should be returning from hunting himself." Esme berkata in return.
I smiled at her and followed Edward out the door. As soon as we reached the edge of the woods we both began to run. Edward stopped suddenly. What could possibly be wrong i thought.
"A herd of deer." he answered the thought that was in my head. It gets really annoy that he can read my every thoughts. "Tell me about." He berkata as he went after the buck that just emerged into the clearing in front of us.
A smaller female emerged behind it and I ran after. I put broke its neck so it can't fight and it won't feel anymore pain and slowly sank my teeth into its neck. The warm blood trickled out of the wound my teeth created and down my throat.
"I'm going back home." Edward berkata as I rose from the deer.
"Ok, I'm going to hunt a little longer." I responded.
Edward started running towards home, at that time, I had no idea of the tragedy of my decision.
We All Want The Same Thing!
I personal would like to just speak my mind. To all of anda don't want her to be Jane, I guess I understand. But, I like Dakota Fanning. She's a great actress and I think she'd be great. Here are some reasons why I want he to be Jane.
1. She's been in TONS of movies, so she has experience.
2. She looks the role (In my opinion.)
3. She in "Push" so I would think she has some experience with things like New Moon (and the rest).
4. She's always the good-girl. For once she should be bad.
Those are only some that I can think of at the moment.
If anda don't want her to be, I respect that. Also, if anda think that, leave a komentar saying why atau why not please!
Also, if anda actually read this:
Thanks!
1. She's been in TONS of movies, so she has experience.
2. She looks the role (In my opinion.)
3. She in "Push" so I would think she has some experience with things like New Moon (and the rest).
4. She's always the good-girl. For once she should be bad.
Those are only some that I can think of at the moment.
If anda don't want her to be, I respect that. Also, if anda think that, leave a komentar saying why atau why not please!
Also, if anda actually read this:
Thanks!
1. He tells her to stay away from him.
2. She says shes not afraid of him.
3. He lets her cry on his kemeja and ruin it.
4. He just wants her to be happy.
5. She trusts him.
6. He didn't kill her
7. When the car threatened to crush her all he could think was "Not her"
8. The lion fell in cinta with the lamb.
9. He left her only for her protection.
10. He won't end her life for her.
11. He took her to the prom because he did't want her to miss anything.
12. He feels very protective of her.
13. He risked blowing the family secret to save her.
14. He is her "Prisoner".
15. He dazzles her.
16. She doesn't care that he is a "Killer".
17. He sayed with her in the Hospital
18. He watches her sleep.
19. She always forgives him.
20. He merpati her halaman awal when she felt sick.
2. She says shes not afraid of him.
3. He lets her cry on his kemeja and ruin it.
4. He just wants her to be happy.
5. She trusts him.
6. He didn't kill her
7. When the car threatened to crush her all he could think was "Not her"
8. The lion fell in cinta with the lamb.
9. He left her only for her protection.
10. He won't end her life for her.
11. He took her to the prom because he did't want her to miss anything.
12. He feels very protective of her.
13. He risked blowing the family secret to save her.
14. He is her "Prisoner".
15. He dazzles her.
16. She doesn't care that he is a "Killer".
17. He sayed with her in the Hospital
18. He watches her sleep.
19. She always forgives him.
20. He merpati her halaman awal when she felt sick.
Distributor: Summit Entertainment Release Date: November 21, 2008
Genre: Romance Running Time: 2 hrs. 0 min.
MPAA Rating: PG-13 Production Budget: $37 million
TOTAL LIFETIME GROSSES
Domestic: $138,552,000 86.7%
+ Foreign: $21,325,749 13.3%
= Worldwide: $159,877,749
DOMESTIC SUMMARY
Opening Weekend: $69,637,740
(3,419 theaters, $20,368 average)
% of Total Gross: 50.3%
Widest Release: 3,620 theaters
In Release: 17 days / 2.4 weeks
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I got into the house.I knew that it was worse than james I held my Drink.
Edward We need to be prepared.I could train with Jasper he wasin the army before he was turned. He could train us both me and Buffy .I held my menyeberang, salib bow "Hmm"I oiled it .
I saw that my tojo blades were getting rusty
I decided to Grab all my slaying stuff.
lebih avanced Sliver stakes but doesn't work as well as holy water and api filled Cross.
I ran down to the basement.I felt pain from another.It was Jazz.He was membaca "gone With The Wind".
Oh god why "jazz please stop i can feel your hurt."
huh?
It's one of my abilities now stop felling sorry for your self and help us didn't anda hear from edward theres a new evil in town!
Edward We need to be prepared.I could train with Jasper he wasin the army before he was turned. He could train us both me and Buffy .I held my menyeberang, salib bow "Hmm"I oiled it .
I saw that my tojo blades were getting rusty
I decided to Grab all my slaying stuff.
lebih avanced Sliver stakes but doesn't work as well as holy water and api filled Cross.
I ran down to the basement.I felt pain from another.It was Jazz.He was membaca "gone With The Wind".
Oh god why "jazz please stop i can feel your hurt."
huh?
It's one of my abilities now stop felling sorry for your self and help us didn't anda hear from edward theres a new evil in town!
Okay, this might be a big-old pointless rant, but i absolutely hate when people BASH on other character (i'm not saying any names) and i'm not just talking about Jacob-hating. If anda want to bash on Jacob atau any other character for that matter go the Jacob-Hating Spot, and if their isn't one, create one then!!!! I don't mind people sharing well-though out and intelligent opinions, it's just that i'm absolutley sick of all this hating on Jacob and Jacob lovers! I hate completely and utter idiocy komentar done on this spot for Twilight pasangan IN GENERAL like "Jacob f*** sucks!" and we've all seen it and heard of it, and i doubt this artikel will make any difference but i needed to get it out of my system. anda don't see me going aroung saying things like "Edward sucks, and Bella will ALWAYS belong to Jacob." because it would seriously piss of ALOT of people. My thoughts. That's all. Don't care if someone komentar on this just to somehow piss me off.
(End of pointless-rant)
(End of pointless-rant)
Kristen, 18, recently sat down with MSNBC and dished about the book series that has everyone talking. “(I) lived with the first book. For like three months atau however long that was, and I haven’t been able to pindah on.”
She says of co-star and on-screen cinta Robert Pattinson who plays Edward Cullen, “He was so different from everybody else that came in (to audition). He’s very responsive, he sees and he listens. And that’s very important, that you’re not akting in a scene oleh yourself.”
