yea i made the judul to be something a little less opinionated, and lebih open to other peoples opinon. so if anda agree, say why, and if not, give some examples of her good side! all i did was her bad side cuz thats my opinion. :)
These are from the first chapter of Eclipse.
pg. 14-Charlie to Bella"You're hurting Jake's feelings, avoiding him like this."
response: HOLY CRAP listen to your father Bella!!! anda have got a serious problem, and anda are hurting poor Jake in the process! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?!?!?!?!? GET..A..LIFE, and leave Jacob out of it
pg. 17-in Bella's mind"I wrenched the door out of my way--ridiculously eager--and there he was, my personal miracle."
response: ok Bella, anda may think he is your own "personal miracle" and all, but hey, GUESS WHAT?? he loves anda UNCONDITIONALLY. and what do anda do? OBSESS NON-STOP, NOT LETTING HIM HAvE HIS OWN LIFE, and HANGING ON HIS EVERY WORD! give him some breathin luar angkasa girl!
pg. 18-Bella's mind "It made me sad that he had to try so hard. I comforted myself with the knowledge that I wouldn't be causing him pain much longer.
response: so the part i underlined, wouldn't be causing him pain much longer???? Bella, honey, anda ARE ALWAYS GOING TO CAUSE HIM PAIN. NO MATTER WHAT anda DO, HE WILL BE IN PAIN. so dont lead yourself in the wrong direction, thinking that anda are so perfect
Yea haha so ok now im done with the very short pointless ranting. PLEASE COMMENT!
These are from the first chapter of Eclipse.
pg. 14-Charlie to Bella"You're hurting Jake's feelings, avoiding him like this."
response: HOLY CRAP listen to your father Bella!!! anda have got a serious problem, and anda are hurting poor Jake in the process! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?!?!?!?!? GET..A..LIFE, and leave Jacob out of it
pg. 17-in Bella's mind"I wrenched the door out of my way--ridiculously eager--and there he was, my personal miracle."
response: ok Bella, anda may think he is your own "personal miracle" and all, but hey, GUESS WHAT?? he loves anda UNCONDITIONALLY. and what do anda do? OBSESS NON-STOP, NOT LETTING HIM HAvE HIS OWN LIFE, and HANGING ON HIS EVERY WORD! give him some breathin luar angkasa girl!
pg. 18-Bella's mind "It made me sad that he had to try so hard. I comforted myself with the knowledge that I wouldn't be causing him pain much longer.
response: so the part i underlined, wouldn't be causing him pain much longer???? Bella, honey, anda ARE ALWAYS GOING TO CAUSE HIM PAIN. NO MATTER WHAT anda DO, HE WILL BE IN PAIN. so dont lead yourself in the wrong direction, thinking that anda are so perfect
Yea haha so ok now im done with the very short pointless ranting. PLEASE COMMENT!