the heroes of olympus Article: Perfect

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Perfect

posted by NicoDiAngelo4

So this is my first try at a songfiction! Its Perfect, oleh P!nk, and this is for all those Lalia/Thuke fan out there! Constructive critism is appreciated:D

PERFECT
(THALIA'S POV)

I walked into the Artemis cabin, tired from a long game of capture the flag. I was going to go to tempat tidur when I noticed a packgage sitting on my bed. In neatly written cursive, it had the name thalia on it. Curious, I opened it and found an ipod in it. I put in the earphones and started listening,

Dear Thalia, I know that oleh the time anda will be membaca this, I will be long gone, but, the feelings are still there, so please....just listen to this for me...

Made a wrong turn, once atau twice
The song paused and I gasped as I heard luke's voice.
When I was leading anda and Annabeth to camp, I led anda both into so many traps

Dug my way out of blood and fire
As fun as it was being on the runn with the two of you, we had practically escaped every possible monster...

Bad decsions, thats all right
I know it was wrong to give myself over to Kronos, but...

Welcome to my silly life
Honestly, do the Gods really expect us to lead a normal life? We're fricken demigods for Zeus' sake!

mistreated, misplaced, misunderstood
Iv'e always been treated horribly, take for granet, never taken seriously, and I am just so done with it!

"Miss, no-way-its-all-good"
but yet, whenever anda come everyone relaxes a little, knowing that you've got everything under control

It didn't slow me down
When anda were a tree, it was hard to keep going, but somehow i managed...barely

Mistaken, always secong guessing, underestimated, look im still around
Being a son of Hermes is hard, nobody takes me seriosly, nobody thinks that I can do anything, besides steal things, but I can do soo much lebih than that...

Pretty Pretty Please,
Dont anda ever, ever feel,
Like your less than,
Less than Perfect
Thalia Grace, Daughter of Zeus, Lieutenant of Artemis, anda are perfect

Pretty Pretty Please,
Don't anda ever ever feel,
Like your nothing,
anda are perfect, to me-
This honestly may mean nothing to you, but anda are perfect

your so mean, when anda talk, about yourself, anda are wrong
Honestly, Thals, anda put yourself at such low standards, but when are anda going to accept that your pefrect?

change the voices, in your head, and make them like anda instead
Again, anda doubt yourself too much! anda ARE PERFECT!

So complicated
Why does our relationship have to be so complicated

Look how big you'll make it
Your an immortal daughter of Zeus, you'll go down in history

Filled with so much hatred, such a tired game
I used to have so much hatred towards the gods, and I was just so sick of doing their dirty work, and not getting anything in return!

It's enough, iv'e done all I could think of
I was so sick of it I resorted to my lst option, which I'm not proud of...

Chased down all my demons
Personally, I think I made the right choice sacrificing myself for the gods...

I'll see anda do the same
Thalia, please listen to me! I know Gaea is starting to rise! She will come after the most powerful half bloods, which means that she will come after you; as hypocrytical as this may sound, just say no...don't give in, no matter what she tempts anda with, say no, please...for me?

Pretty Pretty please,
Don't anda ever, ever feel,
Like your less than,
Less than perfect
It hasn't changed, anda are still, and always will be perfect

Pretty Pretty please,
If anda ever ever feel,
Like your nothing,
anda are perfect, to me-
No matter what anyone says, to me, anda will always be perfect.

Luke's voice paused, then said,
I know this won't mean much to you, Thals, but...I cinta you

The musik stopped and Luke's voice was gone, I tear dripped down my face. This was the Luke I knew. This was the real him. This was the Luke that I loved.

ala44, MaximumRide12 and 2 others like this

rapunzeleah123 Whoa......FRICKIN AWESOME!!!!!!!!! Constructive criticism: You may want to clarify that he's saying the words in bold, and the italics are the song. Obviously, most people know that song, but it's good to clarify just in case:) But other than that.....this is frickin amazing!!!!! You rock Haley! ;)

Starlight1o1 That was so amazing especially for your first songfic. Wait a second *Looks in a dictionary for the definition of awesome and finds your songfic there* secondly *Looks into a thesaurus for another word for awesome because people us that word too much* but hey it's true. I liked how you turned the song into a warning to Thalia. Also I liked how you included at the end that this was the real Luke since we didn't see much about what he was really like. Constructive critisim: You used the word perfect a lot but Luke was trying to get the point across and the song is called perfect so I think that should be okay. I think it would have been nice if you added a bit more of Thailia's thoughts to the songfic so we would know more about what she was thinking while the song was playing. Also in some places Luke doesn't really sound like Luke but we didn't get to know the real Luke so maybe that's what the real Luke sounds like. Seriously though I can't find anything critisize. It's just to good to find any faults. And yet again I have written way too much when I wasn't planning on doing. P.S. I would add you as a fan just because of how good this is but I already did a while back so I can't now. Also for this being your first sonfiction I'm speechless because of amazement (Not really because I just wrote all of that but you get what I mean... At least I hope you get what I mean and I really should stop writing right now...)

HecateA Wow... Just... Just wow... Aww... I feel sorry for Thalia all over again :( That was incredible, Nico! That was perfect! You nailed it! The warning was a brilliant idea, the song was perfect, and in the end that was so sad... That was great! I'll keep my eyes pealed just in case you write another one!

NicoDiAngelo4 Thanks so much everyone! Especially for the advice! i'm planning on writing/posting another songfic later, so I will try and imporve it! Thanks so much for the awesome commments!

Perseus54321 really good song fic but it makes me feel depressed, but I'm a depressing person anyways so it doesn't really matter.

NicoDiAngelo4 sorry it was depressing, and thanks?XD

Spikegilfer1997 Wow, makes me hate Luke way less for getting her killed, well your version of Luke anyways.

athena knows best

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Fireworks

posted by partypony

Carmen's voice

Hi This is partypony.
There's this song, and my friends keep bernyanyi it all day. The song is Fireworks, oleh Katy Perry. Now it's stuck in my head practically all the time. So about a week ago, I made a song fic featuring Fireworks. I didn't really plan to actually publikasi this here, but I got bored so...

FIREWORKS; oleh KATY PERRY
songfic written oleh partypony
(this is so that we know what Annabeth was feeling when she went on the mission to rescue Percy. That was in my fanfic, chapter 30, when Carmen was bernyanyi some songs).

Annabeth's PoV

Carmen, daughter of Apollo (Roman) tried to cheer us up oleh singing...

HoO<3

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HoO<3

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My Insane Theories

posted by Perseus54321

I'm going to cut the crap and get right to this, we have highly annoying prophecies. I need no lebih evidence than every piece of menulis Rick Riordan has ever produced, okay that sounds a bit gross but anyway, our Son of Neptune unfinished prophecies and clues.

'To rescue the legion's crown,
The son of Neptune shall drown,'

Okay, this is just me but I'm guessing the prophecy was unfinished SINCE IT berkata IT IN THE BOOK. Percy rescued the eagle (the legion's crown) and he drowned-er, something, mainly ghosts. Moving on,

'Wisdom's daughter walks alone,
The Mark of Athena burns through Rome,'

We know...

late birthday card for percy

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:DD

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***the mark of athena***

posted by darange

I DO NOT OWN THE PJO SIERES atau THE HOO SIERIES!
chapter 1 annabeth
we were flying through the skys on the argo 2 that morning it just got finished yesterday ow i am glad thay finished it but now there were bigger problems to face like how the romans and greeks would get along, atau if it ended badly, atau if percy is actully at this camp atau .... if percy..............forgot abought me. woa! what am i thinking? of course that seaweed brain will remember me! i hope that seconed piper came on the deck she was wearing her snow boarding jaket as usual. leo is making a iris meassage for the roman camp...

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Dissection of the Cover

posted by athena305

Hello, everybody. I feel that it is high time we have a formal discussion on the new cover. After all, when we saw the three lines that said, "Coming Fall 2011, The heroes of Olympus Book 2, The Son of Neptune," we freaked out. So, now that there is an actual cover, there's a lot of stuff to go over.

At the puncak, atas is the trademark HoO band. Whatever. The sky isn't so much of a sky. To me, it looks somewhat...watery. Like an upside-down hurricane, crashing down on the dinding of ice. If anda look at the puncak, atas of the ice wall, sections of ice have carved ridges in them. It looks like the walls of a city....

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~The Son of Neptune ~

posted by PJhero02

(one of those things before the first chapter)
Annabeth's POV

"...and he probably doesn't even remeber who he is," finished Jason
The thought of Percy not remembering me brought tears to my eyes. After all we've been through could he really forget? I guess everyone could see the worried look on my face, because Jason out his arm around me, trying to comfort me.
"It'll be alright," he said. "I'm sure he could never forget you."
"i hope so." i mumbled.
I was so busy worrying about Percy i almost forgot all the other people in the room. oleh now they were all looking at me sympathetically as if they all...