sorry my last one suckd major...hope this can make up for it!~!

2 guards stood at the door,both soul reapers.the first wore dark warna except a layer of blue in her hair. the other had blue hair and sun-set eyes.both had their zanpaku-to at their sides.they were as sereious as they were alert.
"unaci...on guard someone approches..." the one with the dark side berkata standing as still as a statue.they both turnd to the door as sora entered.she twirled a bunch of keys slung with her finger.
"miss atasunta what're you--"
sora silenced her.
"ican see the marks on her...and i know before she was put i this cell she was healed...have anda been abuseing her?" sora asked coldly.
the 2 guards looked crushed.
"n-no ma'am.the only person who's been in here without us is captain tosen of squad 9" the blued hair girl berkata she had a perfect country accent.
sora unlocked the cell and took me oleh the hand.
"zukisaru anda look like you've been whips with the metal end of a belt...what happend to--"
"i was...kaname tosen found one and started sencelessly abuseing me.each and every single hari sora!! IT HURT SORA!!!" i cried."he would pick me up oleh my head and shake me until i lost consisnis sora!!!"
sora crouched and looked really sereious.
"zukisaru listen to me....i promise if he so much as spits withing 10 miles of anda ill do what he did to anda X a million ok" sora said.
i drew in a deep breath and half crying i nodded.

we walked halaman awal and even though regulus was there all night i couldnt sleep.but knowing i was finally halaman awal away from danger knowing sora was around i felt better...much much better....

hope this was better then the last!!if not please be honest and just tell me to redo it.