From Eclipse!!! :D

Thx a whole bunch for everyone's comments, that's the most I've ever gotten and probably will ever get! ^_^


*1 week later...*

"Lala, are anda ready for your bath?" I asked her as I rose up from the dipan, sofa in my living room.
She had been membaca a children's book full of illustrations quietly - another quirk, she preferred a book over a toy.
She looked up at me with a bright smile - I was the only one she seemed to open up to over the past week.
"Bath?" she inquired in her childish voice that always makes me smile.
"Yep, it's time to get clean!" I said, picking her up and taking her to the bathroom....

Hip hip hooray!!! Grand ol' Ch.10!!! ^_^


*Karim's POV*

She had been saddened oleh something, I was sure of it, but I'm glad to see that she has come out of it.
This sweet, beautiful girl did not deserve any level of sadness atau pain.
Then I noticed the small foto that she was holding and I grew extremely curious.
"What is that that you're holding?" I asked, pointing to it and she gazed down at it.
"Oh. . . just a picture of my mother," she softly replied.
"May I see it?" I asked tentavely, and she gazed back at me.
"Sure. . ." she murmured, seeming distracted about something, and handed me the picture....

Not really much to say... other than I hope anda enjoy it! ^_^


*Bella's POV*

I can't believe all the tears I had shed. . . they were lebih than I had ever shed in a very long time.
Edward began comforting me, which I graciously accepted, but now it was time to finish my story so I could pindah on.
"The worst part of it was. . . I never got the chance to tell them goodbye before they all passed away, never got the chance to let them know that I was alive, that I wasn't killed, just taken against my will." I took a deep, calming breath. "But then I figured, maybe I did die. The old, mortal Bella that...

I will write a chapter of Undying cinta later for anda guys! ^_^


*Edward's POV*

In all of my existence I have never seen someone in so much pain. Who has lived through unimagineable pain, and is still existing to this day.
Bella angsa, swan has, and now she was sharing her story with us. A story of how she came to become an immortal being, which in fact transpired vampires. . .
It was a story that took on a forbidden-like quality. Children taken from their families oleh these cruel, unforgivable scientists who experimented on them. . . on Bella. I might not can read her mind - for it has become inaccessible...

WOW, my 30th chapter!!! I want to thank anda guys for all of your wonderful komentar that makes my hari even when I'm feeling sick:( I mencuri a lot from the book Betrayed in the HON series, I cried my eyes out and while menulis this, I cried my eyes out too!


Previously on Ch.29:

"In all my existence, I would have to say that dying from the Change as a child would have to be the worst possible death - partly because anda never expected when your body would reject the Change." My voice dropped, and my eyes fell to my hands that were on my lap.
"Which brings me to how I met a girl named Addy."

Now, Ch.30:...

Here's part two! I hope I don't disappoint ya'll!


Previously on Ch.28:

This was the part of my memory I'd rather choose to forget.
Edward saw my hesitation and put a comforting warm hand on mine.
"What did these people do to anda and the other children Bella?" he asked, an unnameable emotion burning in his golden eyes.
"They experimented on us."

Now, Ch.29:

"They WHAT?!" Both Edward and Alice asked at the same time, both shocked and furious.
I ignored their emotions and settled into my own.
"The scientists wanted to create a vast army of immortals so that they could rule the world. Immortality only lied...

So sorry this came out late, but I was gone yesterday with a friend of mine for Halloween, here's chapter 7 in Karim's POV! ^_^


*Karim's POV*

I ventured out of the kastil, castle at nightfall and headed to the same place where I met her. My someone.
While I had been away from my unknown beauty I missed her deeply so; as if I have known her forever. . . But I suppose that's just how that vampire trait works.
Once when my brother Alfred - who has found his someone - had to be away from his beloved vampire bride, he would mope around like a zombie throughout our old castle. His personality is outgoing, rather...

Hey! So I was suppose to actually put a part of this in the last chapter, but totally forgot to!:P So now, this chapter is extra longer... And I dedicate this chapter to my little brother, Cody, who passed away February 10, 1998.


Previously on Ch.27:

"We need to take Bella back yo our house before she wakes up, then she will. . . explain her story to us," Alice spoke after coming out of her vision.
I nodded, and, ignoring Rosalie all together, I picked my cinta up into my arms and ran straight halaman awal with my family close behind.

Now, Ch.28:

"Her wounds are healing at extraordinary speed," Carlisle...

Sorry about the wait but I'm working on lebih chapters of Undying Love, and my project. Enjoy! ^_^


*Bella's POV*

I was lying on the forest floor in my own blood, disgusting really, but it simply could not be.
They know my secret.
Parts of my left side had been brutally scarred oleh the dragon's claws when I completely dropped my guard after seeing the Cullens right there on the battleground. My battleground.
And then the dragon released its fury upon them with an angry burst of flames and I just ran to them, not even thinking about my actions. In fact, the only thing I was thinking was, You must protect...

Here is part one of the big discovery!!! ^_^


Previously on Ch.24:
*Alice's POV*
"Fine," he said, walking away from me."I'll go ahead and take everyone home. See anda later."
"See anda later," I berkata back, and made my way to Bella's truck.

Now, Ch.25:

The door was unlocked so I hopped in and threw Bella's homework for the hari on the passenger seat.
The keys were in the ignition - just as I had predicted. It wasn't very smart to leave your keys in the ignition but then again, who would want to steal this?
Smiling to myself, I started the vehicle and drove out of the parking lot.

On the way to Bella's home...

Sorry for the wait! Enjoy! ^_^


*Karim's POV*

I raced back halaman awal with her in my mind.
"Whoa! Where's the fire?" Alexis asked as soon as I ran through the front doors of our castle.
I looked over at her, she was sitting on our creamy-white sofa looking at a magazine with our mother beside her.
"How was your hari dear?" Mother asked as she smiled her 'welcome back' smile that everyone loves.
"It was great mother," I answered her, she had brilliant rocket-fire straight hair that went slightly past her pale shoulders, and then she had brilliant sapphire-blue eyes. She was the mother of all vampire alike....

Sorry this one's short but it leads up to some soon-to-be LONG chapters in which they find out Bella's true identity, an immortal being... but for now, plz enjoy this little bit! ^_^


*Bella's POV*

Why hadn't I put those relics up? They had just brought up my past even more, and then I had to lie about them to Edward! Though it wasn't completely a lie. . . part of it was true.
I swayed when the pain of the gars poison-like-venom came back to me - something no kind of medicine could ever completely vanquish.
I raced up to my room - which wasn't that big - and collapsed unto my twin-sized bed. I curled...

Okay here's my detik story and I hope everyone will read and like it. It's not a Twilight saga fanfiction - it's something I totally created. I got the inspiration to write it from membaca ashesandwine's Forbidden Love, and she so kindly let me use "Lovers..." for the preface. cinta you!

Lovers...

Embraced in the middle of nowhere... Nothing but themselves, surrounded oleh the unknown, oleh forgotten fear and overthrown grief...
The forgotten pain waiting in the distance (not as fair as it should be) for a new opportunity, awaiting for an inopportune moment that makes it come back! There's no change,...

Thanks so much for all of your amazing komentar and ratings! Enjoy! ^_^


Previously on Ch.17:
*Bella's POV*
I carefully raced to my truck and almost ripped the door off in my rush. I retrieved my daggers from the secret department I made underneath my seat, and shut the door.
Being careful of anyone seeing me, I slipped into the nearby woods and let the rain hit me as I ran at inhuman velocity to the monsters that I would slay.

Now, Ch.18:

It was a few miles from the school where the gars lay in wait. It would of only took them three menit to get to the school full of innocent children and slaughter...

Yay! I have 100 fan on my profil page! ^_^ And I thought I'd celebrate oleh giving ya'll another chapter!


*Bella's POV*

Gars, and lots of them were in the woods outside the school. In a matter of minutes, they would all swarm the school and kill and eat every single human being here. I could not let that happen.
"Would anda please excuse me for a few minutes?" I asked all of them as I got up, my posture rigid.
"Bella -" Edward murmured but I was already walking away, and out the door and into the dangerous outside world.
Before I could swiftly escape at inhuman speed to the threat, Alice and Edward...