This might be bad I'm a girl so I have to think like a boy and I don't have any brothers so It's kinda hard thxs for the awsome comments
Adam's pov
She layed on the tempat tidur ,no sound came from her except her jantung beat and her breathing. Her bronse hair was in a mess tangled around her face , her black dress was torn and her feet wear beruang (Jane removed her shose she wanted them) I wanted to reach out in to mind to control her dreams .It was fun to control and change mortals dreams they never knew how it happen and it would feel like I was dreaming again. I reached out to place myself in her dream to find she was dreaming of a tall native American boy with long black hair."Jacob ?" she berkata "oh Jacob" she ran into his arm and was crushed in a beruang hug."Jacob I've missed anda so much I'm so sorry I have no idea what this must have put anda thorgh" she cryed she leaned in to ciuman him I couldn't wach I had to do something . I paniced and change this 'Jacob' person in to me
Adam's pov
She layed on the tempat tidur ,no sound came from her except her jantung beat and her breathing. Her bronse hair was in a mess tangled around her face , her black dress was torn and her feet wear beruang (Jane removed her shose she wanted them) I wanted to reach out in to mind to control her dreams .It was fun to control and change mortals dreams they never knew how it happen and it would feel like I was dreaming again. I reached out to place myself in her dream to find she was dreaming of a tall native American boy with long black hair."Jacob ?" she berkata "oh Jacob" she ran into his arm and was crushed in a beruang hug."Jacob I've missed anda so much I'm so sorry I have no idea what this must have put anda thorgh" she cryed she leaned in to ciuman him I couldn't wach I had to do something . I paniced and change this 'Jacob' person in to me