Chapter 1:
Third Person POV:
*Bell rings*
you: "FINALLY."
*you pack all of your classroom belongings, and head out of the classroom. anda go home, plop on bed, and decide to go for a walk. As anda walk, anda see your good friend Jake, anda don't feel like talking to anyone, you're just not in the mood. anda begin to turn, but it's too late.*
Jake: "Y/N! Hey!"
You: "Oh! Jake, hey."
Jake: "I've been trying to get a hold of anda for a while..."
*you turn getting concerned....*
You: "Jake- what's wrong?"
Jake: "You see, I've been wanting to ask anda a question...."
You: "Yeah?"
Jake: "I was wondering.... If anda would consider me... as anda know... lebih than a friend?"
You: "Jake, of course! We've talked about it before! You're like a br- OH."
Jake: "Oh?"
You: "Uhm..."
Jake: "I KNEW IT. I JUST CAN'T COMPARE TO THEM."
You: "Listen. Ja-"
Jake: "NO. HE can do it, HE can do it- EVERYONE EXCEPT ME can do it!
You: "JA-"
Jake: "FORGET IT. I'M SORRY I EVEN TRIED."
*He begins to turn and run. anda grab his hoodie, spin him around, and ciuman him.*
(at that moment, anda heard something falling from behind. anda lightly push Jake away and turn. On the ground anda see a bouquet of bunga oleh 2 dress shoes. anda look up and-)
You: "OH MY-"
Him: "Y/- Y/N?"
You: "I- I- I-"
*you see the depression in his eyes, then when anda turn, anda see Jake anxiously waiting for anda to accompany him oleh walking away from him.*
Jake: "Y/N. Common. Let's get outta he-"
You: "But- I- I-"
*you dont know where to go, so anda run. anda run to your best friend Elena.*
Elena: "Y/N! WHAT HAPPENED?!?"
You: "HE'S BACK ELENA. HE'S BACK."
Elena: "What do anda mean HE'S back?!?"
*you look to her with the most hurt eyes anda have ever expressed.*
*Elena simply just stands and walks away. She walks to where anda left Jake and him.*
*as she gets near, she hears yells and groans and such- she runs to see whats going on. When she gets there she pushes Jake of him and settles them*
Elena: "JAKE! GET OFF HIM!!"
Jake: "What have I- Oh my-"
*Jake confused and angered runs off. she helpa him off the ground, he brushes off the dirt and fixes his hair.*
Elena: "You alright, Harry?"
Harry: "Yeah... I-I'm fine."
Elena: "GOOD."
*She lifts her hand and slaps hims- straight across the face!*
Elena: "WHY WOULD anda DO THAT?"
Harry: "geeze- LET ME-"
Elena: "YOU LEAVE HER PREGNANT AND EXPECT HER TO COME BACK TO anda LIKE THAT?!?! SHE lost HIM. anda KNOW THAT!?!? NO. anda DON'T."
*he freezes dead in his tracks*
Harry: "She- she- she WHAT?"
Elena: "SHE WAS 16 WHEN anda GOT HER PREGNANT. SHE WAS 16 WHEN anda LEFT HER jantung BROKEN. NO. GET. OUT. DO NOT. COME BACK. anda RUINED HER LIFE. I'M NOT LETTING anda DO IT AGAIN."
Harry: "Elena...- I didn't-"
Elena: "OUT."
*at this point he was on the ground. he slowly and hesitantly arose and began to walk off. Elena returns to you*
Elena: "Harry's gone Y/N.... He's not coming back..."
You: "Wh- wait. Harry is here too?"
Elena: "What do anda mean- TOO? Y/N, who came up to anda today...?"
You: "HE CAME BACK ELENA. HE came back!"
*Elena stood up and walked away as anda sobbed.*
*Elena walks to a pier. On the end was a person looking off into the sunset*
Elena: "You could have called anda know..."
***END OF PART I***
This is my first one! So tell me what anda think! :) THANKS! <3
Third Person POV:
*Bell rings*
you: "FINALLY."
*you pack all of your classroom belongings, and head out of the classroom. anda go home, plop on bed, and decide to go for a walk. As anda walk, anda see your good friend Jake, anda don't feel like talking to anyone, you're just not in the mood. anda begin to turn, but it's too late.*
Jake: "Y/N! Hey!"
You: "Oh! Jake, hey."
Jake: "I've been trying to get a hold of anda for a while..."
*you turn getting concerned....*
You: "Jake- what's wrong?"
Jake: "You see, I've been wanting to ask anda a question...."
You: "Yeah?"
Jake: "I was wondering.... If anda would consider me... as anda know... lebih than a friend?"
You: "Jake, of course! We've talked about it before! You're like a br- OH."
Jake: "Oh?"
You: "Uhm..."
Jake: "I KNEW IT. I JUST CAN'T COMPARE TO THEM."
You: "Listen. Ja-"
Jake: "NO. HE can do it, HE can do it- EVERYONE EXCEPT ME can do it!
You: "JA-"
Jake: "FORGET IT. I'M SORRY I EVEN TRIED."
*He begins to turn and run. anda grab his hoodie, spin him around, and ciuman him.*
(at that moment, anda heard something falling from behind. anda lightly push Jake away and turn. On the ground anda see a bouquet of bunga oleh 2 dress shoes. anda look up and-)
You: "OH MY-"
Him: "Y/- Y/N?"
You: "I- I- I-"
*you see the depression in his eyes, then when anda turn, anda see Jake anxiously waiting for anda to accompany him oleh walking away from him.*
Jake: "Y/N. Common. Let's get outta he-"
You: "But- I- I-"
*you dont know where to go, so anda run. anda run to your best friend Elena.*
Elena: "Y/N! WHAT HAPPENED?!?"
You: "HE'S BACK ELENA. HE'S BACK."
Elena: "What do anda mean HE'S back?!?"
*you look to her with the most hurt eyes anda have ever expressed.*
*Elena simply just stands and walks away. She walks to where anda left Jake and him.*
*as she gets near, she hears yells and groans and such- she runs to see whats going on. When she gets there she pushes Jake of him and settles them*
Elena: "JAKE! GET OFF HIM!!"
Jake: "What have I- Oh my-"
*Jake confused and angered runs off. she helpa him off the ground, he brushes off the dirt and fixes his hair.*
Elena: "You alright, Harry?"
Harry: "Yeah... I-I'm fine."
Elena: "GOOD."
*She lifts her hand and slaps hims- straight across the face!*
Elena: "WHY WOULD anda DO THAT?"
Harry: "geeze- LET ME-"
Elena: "YOU LEAVE HER PREGNANT AND EXPECT HER TO COME BACK TO anda LIKE THAT?!?! SHE lost HIM. anda KNOW THAT!?!? NO. anda DON'T."
*he freezes dead in his tracks*
Harry: "She- she- she WHAT?"
Elena: "SHE WAS 16 WHEN anda GOT HER PREGNANT. SHE WAS 16 WHEN anda LEFT HER jantung BROKEN. NO. GET. OUT. DO NOT. COME BACK. anda RUINED HER LIFE. I'M NOT LETTING anda DO IT AGAIN."
Harry: "Elena...- I didn't-"
Elena: "OUT."
*at this point he was on the ground. he slowly and hesitantly arose and began to walk off. Elena returns to you*
Elena: "Harry's gone Y/N.... He's not coming back..."
You: "Wh- wait. Harry is here too?"
Elena: "What do anda mean- TOO? Y/N, who came up to anda today...?"
You: "HE CAME BACK ELENA. HE came back!"
*Elena stood up and walked away as anda sobbed.*
*Elena walks to a pier. On the end was a person looking off into the sunset*
Elena: "You could have called anda know..."
***END OF PART I***
This is my first one! So tell me what anda think! :) THANKS! <3
Here's what anda could have won...
diposting by: 3am13/12/10
08:55 am
.Tags:
x factor,One Direction,stop, look, listen,oh no, it's another X Factor story.
Although we’re pretty pleased that Matt Cardle won The X Factor – as is he, with all the pussy he’s going to get – listening to what would have been the new One Direction single is a bit sad. We can still see their disappointed little faces now.
It took about three menit for the boys’ cover of Forever Young to get leaked onto YouTube, and it’s already racked up 40,000 hits. And although it may cost us our jalan, street cred (it’s fine, we’ve got loads of it anyway, innit bruv), we quite like it.
What do anda lot reckon?
listen to it here: link
diposting by: 3am13/12/10
08:55 am
.Tags:
x factor,One Direction,stop, look, listen,oh no, it's another X Factor story.
Although we’re pretty pleased that Matt Cardle won The X Factor – as is he, with all the pussy he’s going to get – listening to what would have been the new One Direction single is a bit sad. We can still see their disappointed little faces now.
It took about three menit for the boys’ cover of Forever Young to get leaked onto YouTube, and it’s already racked up 40,000 hits. And although it may cost us our jalan, street cred (it’s fine, we’ve got loads of it anyway, innit bruv), we quite like it.
What do anda lot reckon?
listen to it here: link