(Some characters might be OOC)
Naruto: Can someone PLEASE remind me how the heck we got into this mess in the first place!?
Gaara: Kankuro touched the portal that kakashi berkata we WEREN'T supposed to touch.
*Naruto,Sasuke,Gaara turned to Kankuro with death stares*
Kankuro: H-hey c'mon guys u can't blame a guy for being curious!*puts hands up in defence*
Sakura: UGGGH!!!! Keep away from my hair u creep!!
France: But it is such a beautiful colour.
Italy: *Goes up to Gaara* Would u like some pasta?
Gaara: No.
Italy: Would u like some pizza?
Gaara: No.
Italy: Would u like some----
Gaara: I DON'T WANT ANY OF YOUR FOOD!!!!!!*sand comes out from the gourd*
Italy: AHHHHHH GERMANY,GERMANY!!!
Germany: Vhat?
Italy: That mean boy is trying to kill me with sand!!!
Germay:....Kill u with sand?!
France: *Goes up to Sakura* Can i please cut a lock of your hair?!
Sakura: 0_o Ummmm no!
France: But why not?
Sakura: Cause it's creepy!!
Sasuke: *Goes up to Russia* So what r u doing?
Russia: Thinking about how nice it would be to live in a place with sunflowers.
Sasuke: Okayyyy.
Russia: What is dream?
Sasuke: To kill my brother & restore my clan!
Russia: Would u like some vodka?*holds out bottle*
Sasuke: Errrrr no i'm fine!
Canada: They'll notice me any menit now.
America: *Goes up to Naruto* hey there i'm America! & i'm the hero!
Naruto: hey there i'm naruto Uzumaki! Believe it!
Canada: Any minute.
*A portal appears infront of Kankuro*
kankuro: hey guys the portal is back!!*goes to touch it*
All: Kankuro don't touch it!!!
Kankuro: *Touches it* *everyone disappears into thin light*
Italy: Huh? where did everyone go?
End of first chapter
Naruto: Can someone PLEASE remind me how the heck we got into this mess in the first place!?
Gaara: Kankuro touched the portal that kakashi berkata we WEREN'T supposed to touch.
*Naruto,Sasuke,Gaara turned to Kankuro with death stares*
Kankuro: H-hey c'mon guys u can't blame a guy for being curious!*puts hands up in defence*
Sakura: UGGGH!!!! Keep away from my hair u creep!!
France: But it is such a beautiful colour.
Italy: *Goes up to Gaara* Would u like some pasta?
Gaara: No.
Italy: Would u like some pizza?
Gaara: No.
Italy: Would u like some----
Gaara: I DON'T WANT ANY OF YOUR FOOD!!!!!!*sand comes out from the gourd*
Italy: AHHHHHH GERMANY,GERMANY!!!
Germany: Vhat?
Italy: That mean boy is trying to kill me with sand!!!
Germay:....Kill u with sand?!
France: *Goes up to Sakura* Can i please cut a lock of your hair?!
Sakura: 0_o Ummmm no!
France: But why not?
Sakura: Cause it's creepy!!
Sasuke: *Goes up to Russia* So what r u doing?
Russia: Thinking about how nice it would be to live in a place with sunflowers.
Sasuke: Okayyyy.
Russia: What is dream?
Sasuke: To kill my brother & restore my clan!
Russia: Would u like some vodka?*holds out bottle*
Sasuke: Errrrr no i'm fine!
Canada: They'll notice me any menit now.
America: *Goes up to Naruto* hey there i'm America! & i'm the hero!
Naruto: hey there i'm naruto Uzumaki! Believe it!
Canada: Any minute.
*A portal appears infront of Kankuro*
kankuro: hey guys the portal is back!!*goes to touch it*
All: Kankuro don't touch it!!!
Kankuro: *Touches it* *everyone disappears into thin light*
Italy: Huh? where did everyone go?
End of first chapter
with ZABAZA demon of the mist
KAKSHI was in tempat tidur after using most
of his power SAKURA and both
SASKUE and there SENSI were bin mean
to naruto first SAKURA shout at poor naruto
my poor SASUKE got HIRT becomes of your
anda all ways in the way why don't anda
DISSAPER anda loser and don't come back
berkata a very angry SAKURA
anda naruto it wood be best if anda were
never on this team to get in the way
berkata KAKSHI yeah loser berkata SASUKE
oh how sorry they were at that menit
looking shock at naruto with blood
coming out his body not red but ice blue
with that naruto cry sniff in pain
I new from hari one anda 3 hate me
like the rest of the VILLAGE
GESS there all right I am a demon a monster
don't worry anda not going to see me ever again
I am going to end it berkata naruto as he run
fast he can to the forest
end of part 1