Hello MJ family, remember me? R.I.P CollageQueen(also known as powertothefoxes) What do anda fellow fan think about my classic, original, story?

WARNING: this might contain some parts anda may not like, if anda disagree with it, anda can tell me. one hari in the future I'm going to make a mini clip atau movie out of this. anda could give me some suggestions atau something to tweek the story a little if anda ever dislike my creativity. anyway, hope anda enjoy the mini story:)P.S: Peterdaddy,MJpixy, I'm sorry I was offline because it was like an emotional rollercoaster for me. P.S: anda might want to look closely.