I hope this is the right place to ask :)

Mmm. Tobias. anda like the jepang style. This is so evident. I have to say that I want to be a COULTURE fashion designer. So that means that I want to sew dresses for rich peoples. I dislike the "commercial" style. Our styles are really different. But this in not a problem.
Let's speak about your drawing.
The first girl on the left wears an asymmetric top, a one-shoulder top. I think this make looks girls fatter than they are.
But I apprecciate the rok lenght, just above the knees! (I hate leggings, they are really "poor", make the girl looks slut.)
I like the rok of the detik one, the one in the middle. But the jepang influence is lebih than evident here. Their uniforms made me smile when I first went to Japan. I respect their culture, but I don't like it. But I can also speak Japanese and chinese, I anda were thinking about it...
Then the last one... She as got a three fourths sleeves top. I like it! And the rok is okay.
I wonder why there's a lot of pink... Do anda cinta berwarna merah muda, merah muda and black?
At least... I like the shoes, but I prefer the open ones.
That's all.