is this a good peom thing

Lying, dying shamefully. Killing, living regretfully. Smoking death into your lungs. Killing souls of everyone. The time will come when anda will see. Just what you've turned out to be. The monster underneath your bed. The depressing thought inside my head. The waging war throughout the land. The one who swore to take my hand. anda tore my jantung in little bits. anda lied and made me feel like shit. anda turned the world against me now. anda broke our only swear, our vow. The loving memory of my soul remains. The only thing you've yet to gain