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crimsons pov

"Mom what do anda mean dads dead isnt he?" I looked around at everyone they knew something that I didnt. "You always was a ignorant little girl." I heard Vegeta say. 'Wait wasnt your hair black?"Trunks berkata looking at me. "What do anda mean was it is isnt it?" Bulma held up a mirror and sure enough my hair was the shade of crimson just like the mark on my hand."Mom whats going on?" I looked at her."Your dad will tell anda its his responsiblity." I turned around and dad was in the door. "Dad whats happening to me and how are anda alive?" He sighned. "Listen Crimson when anda were born anda was well lets just say anda was half dead. anda wasnt breathing but your jantung was beating.I summoned shenron he wouldnt help anda but his sister the Crimson dragon took pity on anda and granted the wish to heal you. On one condition when anda turned 18 anda would be the gaurdian of the dragon balls she would create.We exceppted. All that happens is the wishes goes past anda before their granted and these are harder to find then the old ones.Plus they can only be used every five years except your able to summon and grant a wish any time.Thats why the mark appeared to let anda summom her and your hair turned crimson.Also without knowing it anda brought me back to life." My jaw littilarry dropped so did Trunks,Goten,Pan and pratically everyone that wasn't their when I was born."As always Kakorats daughter is stronger then both my children its pathetic." Vegeta muttered. "I'll take that as a compliment Vegeta." "I got one pertanyaan for anda Vegeta why did anda never bring back planet Vegeta?" I said. "I honestly have no idea." He said. I shrugged.



(That night)

I was out on my balcaney looking at the stars. Then Trunks walked out. He sat down beside me on the railing. "Listen Crims I really like anda and anda almost forgot about 17 why are anda staying with him?" I looked over at him and sighed. "I don't know really its just I missed him and I thought every thing could be how it was before well anda know." "You have other options." He berkata looking at me. "Trunks." "I'm serous anda dont have to be with him anda do have other options then just him.Like someone that knows anda better that would always be their for you.Like me." "Yeah if you'd wanna be a dead man Vegeta would kill anda if he found out about how anda feel about me." I said. He shrugged. "I've been through worse with him yelling at me." The he leaned meneruskan, ke depan and kissed me.