In the selanjutnya months, I'll write a series of 8 artikel (well, I'll continue only if anda like them, of course). The first 7 artikel will be about separate aspects of the DP film (Score, princess, couple, screenplay, villain, sidekicks and animation/art), and in the final artikel I'll make the average of the grades I gave the film in each aspect and make my favorit DP film daftar = )
This is the detik artikel in the series "Animaluco's puncak, atas 10". It covers all DP Movies' screenplays! Enjoy!
10. Cinderella - 6,75
This movie's screenplay has nothing special. Though it doesn't tampil any continuity/logical problems (not that I have noticed), it has nearly no action (only a tension moment in the last minutes) and there are way too many unnecessary scenes with the mice. Somethings happen too slow and somethings happen too fast (like its ending).
09. Aladdin - 7,0
I thought about putting this in the #10 spot, somehow forgiving Cinderella's filler parts for being an older movie, but my intention was to rank the film from an objective point of view, so I think Aladdin's screenplay is slightly better because it definetely doesn't lack in action. However, out of all the disney Movies, this one has the biggest logical problems. I could spend hours naming them, but the single fact of Jafar not recognizing aladdin is enough to make the plot stupid.
08. The Princess and the Frog - 7,5
The first 25 menit of the movie are perfect. Everything moves fast and clearly. However, as everybody knows, the middle part of the movie is filled with filler scenes and filler songs, and the last moments lacked a lot in action compared to other DP Movies. And it still has some logical problems, like I wrote link.
07. Sleeping Beauty - 7,75
This screenplay doesn't have any clear logical problem, though it was kinda forced when the peri left Aurora alona exactly in the hari Maleficient's spell was about to be cursed. Besides, the middle part can be kinda slow and boring, specially if anda don't appreciate its classic score.
06. Beauty and the Beast - 8,0
This was the first disney Animated Movie to have its screenplay completed before the animasi was started, but I don't think it has one of Disney's best screenplays, because it has serious issues with the time thing. The time Belle spent in the kastil, castle is enough for a season to pass, but it doesn't seem to take much time since Maurice left the kastil, castle and went there again. And did Lefou really stay all that time in Belle's door? The screenplay also makes a mistake oleh dedicating too much time to the initial scenes and it lacks a better development in the couple's relationship.
05. Pocahontas - 8,25
This screenplay is OK. Not a lot of filler parts (in fact, the scenes with Meeko and Percy were necessary as comic relief), and all the scenes seem to have a function in the story. The biggest problem was the excuse they found to start the battle between the natives and the english men - Why on earth would the indians hide that gold?
04. Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs - 8,5
Some of anda may think this one is a bit too high, but I disagree. It doesn't have any logical problems and it has a nice final action scene. Its only problems are 2 scenes with the dwarfes that are too long - The first one when they get halaman awal and discover that someone's at the house and the detik during their bath.
03. Mulan - 9,0
This movie has a very clean and clear screenplay, with definite acts and nearly no filler scenes. I am putting it behind the selanjutnya 2 film because one of the final elements - The huns emerging from the snow seemed a bit too forced as an excuse to continue with the story.
02. Tangled - 9,25
tangled has an amazing screenplay. It has not a single filler scene and I think that it has the element that avoided the movie to flop like PatF. In fact, a movie released in 2010 has to manage to keep the audience atention during all the scenes, and tangled manages to do that, including amazing action scenes. I'll put it in #2 because of how easily Mother Gothel seemed to discover that Rapunzel left the tower with Flynn. And how Rapunzel managed to hide that crown during a whole day.
01. The Little Mermaid - 9,50
anda people can complain because this is #1 in my daftar again, but I can't find a single problem in this screenplay. This movie flows clearly and fast, with lebih action scenes than any animated movie released upon 1989 - In fact, it started the tradition of having action scenes before the climax in animated movies. It has no filler parts and not a single logical problem. All the parts that could bring boring scenes (like the tour in the city) were shorten the maximum. However, I won't give it 100% because of the song "Les Poissons" -It was very funny, but a bit unnecessary.
This is the detik artikel in the series "Animaluco's puncak, atas 10". It covers all DP Movies' screenplays! Enjoy!
10. Cinderella - 6,75
This movie's screenplay has nothing special. Though it doesn't tampil any continuity/logical problems (not that I have noticed), it has nearly no action (only a tension moment in the last minutes) and there are way too many unnecessary scenes with the mice. Somethings happen too slow and somethings happen too fast (like its ending).
09. Aladdin - 7,0
I thought about putting this in the #10 spot, somehow forgiving Cinderella's filler parts for being an older movie, but my intention was to rank the film from an objective point of view, so I think Aladdin's screenplay is slightly better because it definetely doesn't lack in action. However, out of all the disney Movies, this one has the biggest logical problems. I could spend hours naming them, but the single fact of Jafar not recognizing aladdin is enough to make the plot stupid.
08. The Princess and the Frog - 7,5
The first 25 menit of the movie are perfect. Everything moves fast and clearly. However, as everybody knows, the middle part of the movie is filled with filler scenes and filler songs, and the last moments lacked a lot in action compared to other DP Movies. And it still has some logical problems, like I wrote link.
07. Sleeping Beauty - 7,75
This screenplay doesn't have any clear logical problem, though it was kinda forced when the peri left Aurora alona exactly in the hari Maleficient's spell was about to be cursed. Besides, the middle part can be kinda slow and boring, specially if anda don't appreciate its classic score.
06. Beauty and the Beast - 8,0
This was the first disney Animated Movie to have its screenplay completed before the animasi was started, but I don't think it has one of Disney's best screenplays, because it has serious issues with the time thing. The time Belle spent in the kastil, castle is enough for a season to pass, but it doesn't seem to take much time since Maurice left the kastil, castle and went there again. And did Lefou really stay all that time in Belle's door? The screenplay also makes a mistake oleh dedicating too much time to the initial scenes and it lacks a better development in the couple's relationship.
05. Pocahontas - 8,25
This screenplay is OK. Not a lot of filler parts (in fact, the scenes with Meeko and Percy were necessary as comic relief), and all the scenes seem to have a function in the story. The biggest problem was the excuse they found to start the battle between the natives and the english men - Why on earth would the indians hide that gold?
04. Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs - 8,5
Some of anda may think this one is a bit too high, but I disagree. It doesn't have any logical problems and it has a nice final action scene. Its only problems are 2 scenes with the dwarfes that are too long - The first one when they get halaman awal and discover that someone's at the house and the detik during their bath.
03. Mulan - 9,0
This movie has a very clean and clear screenplay, with definite acts and nearly no filler scenes. I am putting it behind the selanjutnya 2 film because one of the final elements - The huns emerging from the snow seemed a bit too forced as an excuse to continue with the story.
02. Tangled - 9,25
tangled has an amazing screenplay. It has not a single filler scene and I think that it has the element that avoided the movie to flop like PatF. In fact, a movie released in 2010 has to manage to keep the audience atention during all the scenes, and tangled manages to do that, including amazing action scenes. I'll put it in #2 because of how easily Mother Gothel seemed to discover that Rapunzel left the tower with Flynn. And how Rapunzel managed to hide that crown during a whole day.
01. The Little Mermaid - 9,50
anda people can complain because this is #1 in my daftar again, but I can't find a single problem in this screenplay. This movie flows clearly and fast, with lebih action scenes than any animated movie released upon 1989 - In fact, it started the tradition of having action scenes before the climax in animated movies. It has no filler parts and not a single logical problem. All the parts that could bring boring scenes (like the tour in the city) were shorten the maximum. However, I won't give it 100% because of the song "Les Poissons" -It was very funny, but a bit unnecessary.
Who will be the most beautiful?
A long time yang lalu I created these characters and I was planning to make a fanfic about them with Melody. However as time went oleh I decided not to because I kept getting bust with other things. But I decided to tell anda about these characters and who's parents they are.
Prince Poseidon
He's the son of Attina and is 15 years old. He's very much like his mother and grandfather. He's bossy, a know it all, hotheaded, closed-minded, and thinks just because he's the oldest grandchild that he can boss the others around, much like Attina did with her sisters. However he's not the oldest...
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Prince Poseidon
Prince Poseidon
He's the son of Attina and is 15 years old. He's very much like his mother and grandfather. He's bossy, a know it all, hotheaded, closed-minded, and thinks just because he's the oldest grandchild that he can boss the others around, much like Attina did with her sisters. However he's not the oldest...
I would just like to say, I think it would be a good idea to have this countdown every 6 months. Then we can notice patterns in favorit and such.
9. Snow White
First Countdown: 9th Place
Second Countdown: 9th Place
Change: None.
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Well, I don't want to write a keterangan about poor Snow White, so I'll let another user explain:
"My issue with Snow White is the rumor that she is 13 years old, which isn't a big deal in and of itself, but she's bernyanyi and pining for true love. Even though, once upon a time, girls did marry that young, that concept has always...
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9. Snow White
First Countdown: 9th Place
Second Countdown: 9th Place
Change: None.
-_____________________________-
Well, I don't want to write a keterangan about poor Snow White, so I'll let another user explain:
"My issue with Snow White is the rumor that she is 13 years old, which isn't a big deal in and of itself, but she's bernyanyi and pining for true love. Even though, once upon a time, girls did marry that young, that concept has always...
