Death the Kid vs. Nals Garnier

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Chapter 2

The trio watched as the shinigami fought off the pre kishins."Should we help him?"Kraiss asked.Lance looked at him like he spoke another language."He's Death the Kid!He does'nt need help!He's unstoppable!"Phoebe watched in awe as Kid had kicked one in the face.A kishin saw her and ran at her.She did'nt have any chance to react when it pounced(AN;the kishins are demon binatang that are attacking them).Lance and Kraiss were attacked as well.Kid noticed and went to help them.He shot at the ones that attacked Lance and Kraiss.Then he kicked and shot the one attacking...

So I've been menulis this Soul Eater fanfic "The DSM?" for a while now and am looking for some lebih feedback...

Here's a basic summary/preview thing, let me know it you're interesting and if anyone wants, I'll post the chapter files here as well.


Thirteen years yang lalu Lord Death made a desicion that would impact not only his own life, but his son's as well.

He held out his hand to the children, bending down in an attempt to tampil he meant them no harm.

"It's okay, I won't hurt you."

The young girl was the first to shakily stand and cautiously lay her hand on Lord Death's, appearing miniscule in...