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So I’m not going to resubmit your script to anda with dialogue changes, because your dialogue isn’t actually that bad!  Although there’s a few spelling mistakes here and there and some punctuation errors, I think your dialogue as a whole is strong. All your characters have their own voices… which is important, and conversations flow smoothly.

The tone of your script is consistent with the other Back to the Future film which is crucial if you’re menulis a sequel to it! There are a lot of light hearted conversations and your jokes flow well. anda had me laughing at some of the jokes,...