For those that don’t know, “In Another World: Mob Suez” is an else-world non-cannon story that takes people’s characters and puts them into the real world. The main character of this story is Dave Hyatt, who a side-character in the regular stories I usually make. People’s origins are tweaked, and people live in a semi-civilian-based life.
I had plans for how this story would go through various phases, but I feel the most appropriate course of action would be to batal the story.
There are a few reasons I think it’s best to simply end it. While I’ve enjoyed the world-building and creativity this brought around, the lebih I look at this story, the lebih it sounds like some cliché teenage anime plot, and anda all know how I feel about anime.
The point of the story was that the members of the club would affect the story; its progression, its characters, everything. People could send in a profil of their character, what role they wanted their character to be a part of, and what they wanted to have happen with that character.
To say the least, many of these characters were girls. I would blame everyone except me for this, but that’s not the case. I had no less than three female characters of my own that were potential love-interests for Dave, and two that were actively pursued. I will note that I planned to have one leave for a while, and one rejects him early in the story, but there were still two other potential cinta interests aside from that, one that was owned oleh me, and one owned oleh Rawrmonster123, who has left the community.
It wasn’t just that there were too many love-interests, but that the majority of characters were girls. I would not be able to balance this.
This wasn’t the only issue as I found trying to please everyone’s initial requests (including love-lives) difficult. There were tidak terjawab plot-threads that were not going to go anywhere. It wasn’t a mess quite yet but it would become one. One particular plot-hole that bothered me was that an earthquake goes off and the police never appear about it. This was pretty stupid.
I quite enjoyed MANY things about this story, and I had a surprise about Rin and Ira (Virus) that was going to be revealed, but I simply don’t think the story can stand long enough for that.
Not to mention there is literally NO interaction from people when it comes to how the story will play out, and we all know why that is.
Those who were membaca it have vanish save a very tiny amount. I simply don’t think this story is worth continuing, at least not right now. MAYBE in the future I’ll go back and fix it all but not right now.
Sorry to let down whoever might read this but them’s the breaks.
God Bless,
Eat Pie and Prosper
I had plans for how this story would go through various phases, but I feel the most appropriate course of action would be to batal the story.
There are a few reasons I think it’s best to simply end it. While I’ve enjoyed the world-building and creativity this brought around, the lebih I look at this story, the lebih it sounds like some cliché teenage anime plot, and anda all know how I feel about anime.
The point of the story was that the members of the club would affect the story; its progression, its characters, everything. People could send in a profil of their character, what role they wanted their character to be a part of, and what they wanted to have happen with that character.
To say the least, many of these characters were girls. I would blame everyone except me for this, but that’s not the case. I had no less than three female characters of my own that were potential love-interests for Dave, and two that were actively pursued. I will note that I planned to have one leave for a while, and one rejects him early in the story, but there were still two other potential cinta interests aside from that, one that was owned oleh me, and one owned oleh Rawrmonster123, who has left the community.
It wasn’t just that there were too many love-interests, but that the majority of characters were girls. I would not be able to balance this.
This wasn’t the only issue as I found trying to please everyone’s initial requests (including love-lives) difficult. There were tidak terjawab plot-threads that were not going to go anywhere. It wasn’t a mess quite yet but it would become one. One particular plot-hole that bothered me was that an earthquake goes off and the police never appear about it. This was pretty stupid.
I quite enjoyed MANY things about this story, and I had a surprise about Rin and Ira (Virus) that was going to be revealed, but I simply don’t think the story can stand long enough for that.
Not to mention there is literally NO interaction from people when it comes to how the story will play out, and we all know why that is.
Those who were membaca it have vanish save a very tiny amount. I simply don’t think this story is worth continuing, at least not right now. MAYBE in the future I’ll go back and fix it all but not right now.
Sorry to let down whoever might read this but them’s the breaks.
God Bless,
Eat Pie and Prosper
lolz
all of yall are wondering where i been.
pft some of yall care atau don't care, i was wondering if i was suppose to put this on artikel atau on forum but eh.
I been addicted to Deviantart xD Since im always there.
Yes im still working on the comic still. It got lebih had to stay on it since i have college and that they want us to give us a holiday :/
im still going to be here but for fun :3
i total forgot i made a account here xD
so here's my deviantart user-----> LunarLuna94
Thank u for reading
all of yall are wondering where i been.
pft some of yall care atau don't care, i was wondering if i was suppose to put this on artikel atau on forum but eh.
I been addicted to Deviantart xD Since im always there.
Yes im still working on the comic still. It got lebih had to stay on it since i have college and that they want us to give us a holiday :/
im still going to be here but for fun :3
i total forgot i made a account here xD
so here's my deviantart user-----> LunarLuna94
Thank u for reading
Silver bulu as silky as can be,
ocean blue tints at the tips can be seen.
Shining emas eyes,
a symbol of wealth.
A creature full of lies,
Selfish and high in stealth.
Chest covered oleh armour,
Life a adventure full of drama.
Has a son,
nearly died with his mother.
Suffer and cried,
strides made him tougher.
Wishing that he would've reached out,
wondering when he wouldn't and would be there.
Eyes full of horror,
icy blood and jantung sunk in terror.
The ghost off this monster rose from hell,
anda would be thankful not to see a blink of Gizbin.
Giz
Gizbin the hedgehog.(God of horror)
diana:yeah i want to fight didnt i make that clear shadow
shadow:*kicks her across the ark*
maria:shadow anda know better
diana:*comes back that didnt hurt
grandfather:well i know there not gonna get along
maria:grandfather i think anda should make one for diana i dont think diana and him like eachother
grandfather:good idea maria*gets to work on him*
diana:maria shadows a sasopath
maria:what is that diana
diana:a pchsopath
shadow:look who shes calling pchyo
diana:im calling anda one shadow
grandfather:i have a surprise for anda diana*shows her tj the hedgehog*
diana:not a nother hedgie
grandfather:this one is different his name tj
shadow:*kicks her across the ark*
maria:shadow anda know better
diana:*comes back that didnt hurt
grandfather:well i know there not gonna get along
maria:grandfather i think anda should make one for diana i dont think diana and him like eachother
grandfather:good idea maria*gets to work on him*
diana:maria shadows a sasopath
maria:what is that diana
diana:a pchsopath
shadow:look who shes calling pchyo
diana:im calling anda one shadow
grandfather:i have a surprise for anda diana*shows her tj the hedgehog*
diana:not a nother hedgie
grandfather:this one is different his name tj