For those that don’t know, “In Another World: Mob Suez” is an else-world non-cannon story that takes people’s characters and puts them into the real world. The main character of this story is Dave Hyatt, who a side-character in the regular stories I usually make. People’s origins are tweaked, and people live in a semi-civilian-based life.
I had plans for how this story would go through various phases, but I feel the most appropriate course of action would be to batal the story.
There are a few reasons I think it’s best to simply end it. While I’ve enjoyed the world-building and creativity this brought around, the lebih I look at this story, the lebih it sounds like some cliché teenage anime plot, and anda all know how I feel about anime.
The point of the story was that the members of the club would affect the story; its progression, its characters, everything. People could send in a profil of their character, what role they wanted their character to be a part of, and what they wanted to have happen with that character.
To say the least, many of these characters were girls. I would blame everyone except me for this, but that’s not the case. I had no less than three female characters of my own that were potential love-interests for Dave, and two that were actively pursued. I will note that I planned to have one leave for a while, and one rejects him early in the story, but there were still two other potential cinta interests aside from that, one that was owned oleh me, and one owned oleh Rawrmonster123, who has left the community.
It wasn’t just that there were too many love-interests, but that the majority of characters were girls. I would not be able to balance this.
This wasn’t the only issue as I found trying to please everyone’s initial requests (including love-lives) difficult. There were tidak terjawab plot-threads that were not going to go anywhere. It wasn’t a mess quite yet but it would become one. One particular plot-hole that bothered me was that an earthquake goes off and the police never appear about it. This was pretty stupid.
I quite enjoyed MANY things about this story, and I had a surprise about Rin and Ira (Virus) that was going to be revealed, but I simply don’t think the story can stand long enough for that.
Not to mention there is literally NO interaction from people when it comes to how the story will play out, and we all know why that is.
Those who were membaca it have vanish save a very tiny amount. I simply don’t think this story is worth continuing, at least not right now. MAYBE in the future I’ll go back and fix it all but not right now.
Sorry to let down whoever might read this but them’s the breaks.
God Bless,
Eat Pie and Prosper
I had plans for how this story would go through various phases, but I feel the most appropriate course of action would be to batal the story.
There are a few reasons I think it’s best to simply end it. While I’ve enjoyed the world-building and creativity this brought around, the lebih I look at this story, the lebih it sounds like some cliché teenage anime plot, and anda all know how I feel about anime.
The point of the story was that the members of the club would affect the story; its progression, its characters, everything. People could send in a profil of their character, what role they wanted their character to be a part of, and what they wanted to have happen with that character.
To say the least, many of these characters were girls. I would blame everyone except me for this, but that’s not the case. I had no less than three female characters of my own that were potential love-interests for Dave, and two that were actively pursued. I will note that I planned to have one leave for a while, and one rejects him early in the story, but there were still two other potential cinta interests aside from that, one that was owned oleh me, and one owned oleh Rawrmonster123, who has left the community.
It wasn’t just that there were too many love-interests, but that the majority of characters were girls. I would not be able to balance this.
This wasn’t the only issue as I found trying to please everyone’s initial requests (including love-lives) difficult. There were tidak terjawab plot-threads that were not going to go anywhere. It wasn’t a mess quite yet but it would become one. One particular plot-hole that bothered me was that an earthquake goes off and the police never appear about it. This was pretty stupid.
I quite enjoyed MANY things about this story, and I had a surprise about Rin and Ira (Virus) that was going to be revealed, but I simply don’t think the story can stand long enough for that.
Not to mention there is literally NO interaction from people when it comes to how the story will play out, and we all know why that is.
Those who were membaca it have vanish save a very tiny amount. I simply don’t think this story is worth continuing, at least not right now. MAYBE in the future I’ll go back and fix it all but not right now.
Sorry to let down whoever might read this but them’s the breaks.
God Bless,
Eat Pie and Prosper
Age:19
Gender: female
Race:Squirrel
DARK, HERO, NEUTRAL: hero
Special Power (if any): nothing unique
*Flight, Speed, atau Power: Power
Silly was born into a family of pirates, and most of her life was spent on the family ship, named the Crusader with her father's crew, the Straw Hats. she has two brothers that are twins, Monkey and Brick. she has one older sister, who is now the captain of the Straw Hats, Lilly Crusader. Silly has excellent fighting skills, and is pretty good with a hand gun. right now, she lives in London, England with her friend Shadow DCE. until Lilly decides Silly is ready to take over as captain, Silly will be a member of the chaotix. her best friend is Vector. as anda might of guessing, adores sailing of any kind.
Sandy meets up with us. "hi, sis" sandy says
"hi" Cream and me head into the vents "so ruby you're a spy" cream says "yea, cream be quiet they will know we're here" "sorry" "it's ok" then we here eggman talking "sh" i say to cream. she just nods I crawl onto the vent hole I see sandy walking in. "who are you" eggman says there was no answer from sandy "answer me" eggman says "sandy" then i see sonic and tails stealing the chaos emeralds "what, sonic" eggman says I see the other chaos emeralds and drop down and take them then emma drops down in front of me "ruby give me those emeralds" "never, traitor" I scream at her I run out of eggmans base and meet up with Sandy, Sonic, Tails, and Cream. "did we get all of them" I ask "I think" tails berkata I give the chaos the two chaos emeralds to sonic "thanks" Sonic says "bye, everyone" I say
"where are anda going" cream ask "any where I can go" I walk of not knowing this wasn't over.
"hi" Cream and me head into the vents "so ruby you're a spy" cream says "yea, cream be quiet they will know we're here" "sorry" "it's ok" then we here eggman talking "sh" i say to cream. she just nods I crawl onto the vent hole I see sandy walking in. "who are you" eggman says there was no answer from sandy "answer me" eggman says "sandy" then i see sonic and tails stealing the chaos emeralds "what, sonic" eggman says I see the other chaos emeralds and drop down and take them then emma drops down in front of me "ruby give me those emeralds" "never, traitor" I scream at her I run out of eggmans base and meet up with Sandy, Sonic, Tails, and Cream. "did we get all of them" I ask "I think" tails berkata I give the chaos the two chaos emeralds to sonic "thanks" Sonic says "bye, everyone" I say
"where are anda going" cream ask "any where I can go" I walk of not knowing this wasn't over.
So I just started yet another species, this time called "Ifedines"
anda may notice the similarities to Identities, but I assure anda that they are different.
First of all they don't morph and they don't have chaos energy powers.
Secondly they don't have the same origin, and aren't even mobians really (But they are sonic fan characters).
However if anda want to know what their origin is, and find out lebih info, you’ll have to wait till there’s lebih involvement in “Mobius Academy: Evolution” (link) as this is where they first appear.
After that I will make an official guide to them, but not until we get lebih people on the forum.
So till then,
Happy Roleplaying and fan on.
EAT PIE AND PROSPER
anda may notice the similarities to Identities, but I assure anda that they are different.
First of all they don't morph and they don't have chaos energy powers.
Secondly they don't have the same origin, and aren't even mobians really (But they are sonic fan characters).
However if anda want to know what their origin is, and find out lebih info, you’ll have to wait till there’s lebih involvement in “Mobius Academy: Evolution” (link) as this is where they first appear.
After that I will make an official guide to them, but not until we get lebih people on the forum.
So till then,
Happy Roleplaying and fan on.
EAT PIE AND PROSPER
Name: Sydni Flare
Age: 17
Sex: Female
Species: Cat
Born: October 2, 1995
Origin Born in: Flarecosta Town
bulu Color: Royal Purple
Parents: Suzanna Flare (Father Unown)
Personality: Artistic, Smart, Sweet, Cute
Likes: Waffles, Pie, Watermelon, Japanese, Games, Purple, Cute Boys, Friends, and just being Lazy sometimes.
musik Genre: Pop, Japanese, Electro. (Anything in those catagories)
Dislikes: People who like to tick her off, Sassy Chicks, Work, and School.
Powers/Weapons: api powers and Phychic powers.
Relationships: Married to Stephen the Cat, Dated Jeremy the Hedgehog in High School, Had Dated Silver the Hedgehog in Middle School.
Chaos Emeralds: Sydni Orginally owns the Purple Chaos zamrud, emerald from birth, diberikan to her in which she had purple bulu and matching powers.
Age: 17
Sex: Female
Species: Cat
Born: October 2, 1995
Origin Born in: Flarecosta Town
bulu Color: Royal Purple
Parents: Suzanna Flare (Father Unown)
Personality: Artistic, Smart, Sweet, Cute
Likes: Waffles, Pie, Watermelon, Japanese, Games, Purple, Cute Boys, Friends, and just being Lazy sometimes.
musik Genre: Pop, Japanese, Electro. (Anything in those catagories)
Dislikes: People who like to tick her off, Sassy Chicks, Work, and School.
Powers/Weapons: api powers and Phychic powers.
Relationships: Married to Stephen the Cat, Dated Jeremy the Hedgehog in High School, Had Dated Silver the Hedgehog in Middle School.
Chaos Emeralds: Sydni Orginally owns the Purple Chaos zamrud, emerald from birth, diberikan to her in which she had purple bulu and matching powers.
