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School Project! I have to make a Dystopian Movie, and this is my plot. Please tell me how good it is.

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The world now has half human, half animal beings. Laboratories have taken these beings to a place known as Area 18. Now, an outside half wolf, half human named Nick Wolfe must save the mutants.

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prussiaducky said:

Haha XD that's cute

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thanks

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welcome ^^

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:)

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Faithgurl said:

This reminds me a lot of Dewsparkle's RP--you might want to change it a little bit. But over all sounds good.

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thanks :)

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HeitsiTsegin said:

Often, dystopian film involve government. I would suggest trying to find a way to tie in a corrupt totalitarian government in with this, like have the government doing this in order to create super soldiers to help in a war that they are waging to take land from a neighboring democratic country.

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sure!

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delusional said:

Don't think I don't know what anda doing! >:)

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eh?

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Well, I don't know if I should say it out loud, I might pset you. But just so anda have an idea of what I'm talking about......I know this is about Maximum Ride.......I'll say the rest out loud if anda want me to.....

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Shadowmarioking said:

the plot is flat and not interesting
as stated beforehand, dystopian film are set around the government restricting the rights atau oppressing the masses in a certain manner. dystopian film can also revolve around there being no government; an anarchy if anda will.
the idea of the plot is thoroughly flawed since it fails to provide necessary detail. "half human half animal" can be replaced w/ "mutants" atau "genetically altered beings". the pertanyaan as to "why" all of this is happening fails to be addressed, lebih importantly why nick has to save the mutants. who is he saving them from, anyway?

anda seriously need to address the faults in your secara keseluruhan, keseluruhan idea if anda want to get anywhere with it. everything must be accounted for atau the script goes nowhere

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