I need help menulis a song!

This is a song I wrote.
PLEASE help me ubah it!

Dying 4 U:

When the sun rises up in the sky,
I think about you.
When everything seems alright,
I hide the fact that,
I really do want you.
Don’t think I could live without you.
Nobody knows.
And I won’t tell them.

I can shake you.
I may break you.
But you’ll never know how I feel.
I’m playing hard-to-get.
Just don’t get upset.
When it burns my jantung
to let anda go.
Gotta let anda know.
I’m dying for you.
Dying for you.

When anda try
to act
so cool.
And it doesn’t work out.
I, I think it’s cute.
But anda could never know.
Oh, oh, oh.
When anda flip your hair
out of your eyes.
But it just gets messed up.
I, I think it’s charming.
But anda can’t ever figure out.
No, no, no.

I can shake you.
I may break you.
But you’ll never know how I feel.
I’m playing hard-to-get.
Just don’t get upset.
When it burns my jantung
to let anda go.
Gotta let anda know.
I’m dying for you.
Dying for you.

Can’t take it anymore.
I want anda oleh my side.
When I’m alone at night.
Hold my hand.
Tell me that anda cinta me.
Need you, want you.
Can’t live another hari without you.

I can shake you.
I may break you.
But you’ll never know how I feel.
I’m playing hard-to-get.
Just don’t get upset.
When it burns my jantung
to let anda go.
Gotta let anda know.
I’m dying for you.
Dying for you.

Dying, hurting, when you’re deserting.
Helpless, needless.
Want anda so bad.
Dying for you.
Dying for you.