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this is my poem called hope uncharted...hope u like! *it's emo/goth...kinda'*

hope, for me, is a place uncharted
and extreamly over grown.
the world, it has chilled me,
Frozen my very soul.

my little hope bird, it is gone
forbidden and forwarned.
all my faith and trust,
it flew away in the storm.

the fire, it can not warm me,
i do not feel the cold,
the sun doesn't shine,
my jantung is numb.

and this is why,
my hope bird has died.
because the world has chilled me,
my jantung can not ache,
nor can it brake.

the lie of a life
i'm suppose to live,
but, no one can give
an explination.
so i ask, Why?

why do we need
to belong in a group?
why can't i be me?

so this is why
hope for me is a place uncharted,
and my hope bird is gone.
i hope anda understand...
 this is my poem called hope uncharted...hope u like! *it's emo/goth...kinda'*
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thanks 2 anyone who reads it!!!
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heaps good :)
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Goth-Girl-36 said:
NICE!
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 NICE!
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thanks!!!
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OMFG that is the best and most beautiful poe ive ever read! and i cinta poems!
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it almost made me cry:'(
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LuvWeezy7 said:
I'd say that this poem can reach out to all kinds of people. I don't think that it is emo/goth because I am neither and I connected with this poem very well.

I like how it is written out and i cinta the little hope bird. :)
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i completly agree with u i can connect with that as well!:')
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K5-HOWL said:
awesome!
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 awesome!
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Shadow5772 said:
Beautiful. :')
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sashlow said:
its great
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rosie23 said:
cinta it!
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