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Can anda guys tell what do anda think of it?

Call me wacko,call me " a weird one ",
i don't care,'cause anda don't see...
anda don't see the dept of my soul,
so call me what anda want to...
When the sorrow tear my heart,
i hide my tears,i hide it from you,
'cause that's the way anda can't see it,
the pain pulling me down and anda don't feel
me the right way,the way i want...
Still the sorrow screams inside me,
that dark side of me anda will never see,
anda will never understand when i hush then
when i should say something,when i smile when i should cry...
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I don't like poetry but well done!
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Thank you. :)
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orangeturnip said:
a poem that sounds like a scream
a sadness inside ,
a message from your soul
a sad cry
but poems can be from the heart
can also be ...
from a position of empathy of anothers pain
either way i hope anda can see
the sun is shineing (i wish looks likes its gonna storm)
any way i didn't want to write a short answer
i wanted to express that i loved it
but in doing so i
waffled and draged out my responce un neccercererly long and lost my sence of spelling with the pain of brain freezing numbness

any hoos

this is for anda
♥
and dont break it.
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Thanks... I won't....
irena83 posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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awwwh.
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life_rehab said:
this is nice. really. i read poetry quite a lot and i'm a rather harsh critic but i do believe that this is pretty good. i mean, it's not Whitman atau Shakespeare atau whatever and you'll have to work hard and practise a lot to develop your talent, but this is 'you', anda know, a little piece of your soul under the mask of words and it is quite beautiful...if anda polish it a little bit, it will be really good. nice job:)
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Thanks a lot...
irena83 posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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i hope anda didn't mind my answer (i'm not sure if your komentar is sarcastic atau not...). really, that's just what i think... nevertheless, i like the poem and it shows great potential but you'll see that if anda keep writing, you'll definitely evolve, you'll get better with every poem -- again, this doesn't mean that i don't like it cause, well, actually i do. anyway, i also wanted to say that it's nice to see other young people interested in poetry:)
life_rehab posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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life_rehab; this ----> but this is 'you', anda know, a little piece of your soul under the mask of words ... IS BEAUTIFUL! oh em gee
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Vixie79 said:
"you will never understand when i hush then"

I cinta how anda did this line, cinta the word hush too. ♥♥♥
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:) ♥ thank you.
irena83 posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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lol
CB4evaGiggles posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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You're welcome hon ♥
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CB4evaGiggles said:
wow, i think thats a really good, and about the soul poem, i like it!

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Thank you. ♥
irena83 posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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your welcome!! ur good!
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Pikafan32 said:
It's another beautiful accomplishment. Truly a fascinating write.
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aw thank anda so much. :)
irena83 posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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:3 Your welcome
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clanbillr said:
Hi "irena83",
Thank anda for the awesome poem, "Again"!! We all get to wear our disguises because we don't want certain people to see how we're really feeling inside!! But those disguises end becoming walls so we don't get hurt again!! anda sound like a truly loving and caring lady and someday the right person will come into your life!!! Just be aware that sometimes cinta is only there for a short while but it can feel like a lifetime!!!
So your neither wacko atau weird, it's just life!!! Your poems are from deep down inside of anda and keep letting them out!!!
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Hi "irena83", Thank anda for the awesome poem, "Again"!! We all get to wear our disguises because we don't want certain people to see how we're really feeling inside!! But those disguises end becoming walls so we don't get hurt again!! anda sound like a truly loving and caring lady and someday the right person will come into your life!!! Just be aware that sometimes cinta is only there for a short while but it can feel like a lifetime!!! So your neither wacko atau weird, it's just life!!! Your poems are from deep down inside of anda and keep letting them out!!!
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Yes i agree with you,we all wear our disguises so those one's who can hurt our feelings easily can not see that. We try to cover that,our weakness.
irena83 posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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Thank anda and yes they are deep, i can say a cry of my soul.
irena83 posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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We all have that same weakness inside of us!!!! I know it's your poem but we all cry in our souls!!!
clanbillr posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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Oh yes we do.
irena83 posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
CullenProperty said:
Pretty. Are anda menulis it from past experiences from someone that hurt anda atau just because anda can?
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Well actually i wrote that from my personal experience. It did happen a long time ago, but i guess i didn't forget.
irena83 posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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On one hand it's funny that we can't seem to forget those things! But on the other hand it's great that we don't so we don't have to repeat and go through them all over again!!!
clanbillr posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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oh well, thats sadening & pretty cool at the same tim
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NatyLy said:
I cinta it! good job! :)
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:) Thank you. ♥
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