Who will read ALL of my story??

It's called The Beginning of the End. I know some of anda have already read the first part, but I'm gonna post the detik part in a sec. And I know some of anda will have no idea who the main charactor is. If this is the case, anda can find "Things about Dib" in a forum post on my fanclub. My story will be diposting on the acak club (here) and on my fanclub. Sorry if I seem nagging about my fanclub. Here's a link to the first part...
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