jacob and nessie

"Nessie? Are anda ready to talk about it yet?" I asked her.
"Ok, I think so." She said. All of her face was berwarna merah muda, merah muda and swolen frm crying so long. I'm not sure how long we were in the pohon house, but it must've been a while. Her parents looked out the window at us. I guess wondering if I hurt her feelings. Goog thing Edward read my thoughts, if Bella came out here Jacob Black as we all know him may not be alive anymore.
"Ok Jake." I looked down at her face, the tears had stopped finally. "You know how were going on a 'vacation'," the way she berkata vacation only sent one phrase through my head:...

anda would be suprised how packing a 7 tahun olds clothes can be so much fun. Maybe it's because of the whole imprinting thing but either way I took the opertunity fot Nessie and me to be alone.
"Jake?" she asked.
"Yeah Nessie?"
"Can anda come here for a second?" I was already up and headed towards her big closet wich she could easily get lost in. Alice and Blondie restocks it every week. Maybe thats what Renesmee wanted, is to help her get out. I laughed at the thought while trying to get my body threw the different racks. It wasn't going so well and apparantley she noticed. Out of no where...

this is chapter three. like it says in the title. Im re editing my entire story and this is the edited version, Hope anda like it. Send me a prop. tell me if anda like it and how i could change it.

“Renesmee what’s wrong?” Samantha asked.
“Jacob.” I berkata with a hiss.
“Who is Jacob?” Chris asked with a smirk.
“Not who anda think he is Chris.” I berkata annoyed.
“He has been a friend of my mo… aunt for years he is closer to my age though. My boyfriend goes to school on the reservation.”
“Then why do anda look so distressed Renesmee?” Samantha asked worriedly.
“he never finished...

“Jacob!” I was yelling from the bath room. I was in lebih pain than I ever thought was possible. It felt like something was clawing its way out of my stomach. This couldn’t be possible I’d been pregnant for only a couple of months. “JACOB BLACK GET anda pantat, keledai UP HERE!” I was screaming so loud I thought Jacob would go def. He ran into the bath room and kneeled down beside me. “What’s wrong?” “I need to get to grandpa.” He picked me up and drove me to the house and carried me in.

“What’s wrong with her?” My mother came rushing to my side. “Mom stop just get grandpa.”...

I shifted away from him, pressing my back as far against the car door as it would go. The small luar angkasa was too close and his scent was overwhelming.
"Why?" I whispered. His eyes crinkled for a moment and he looked at me, his silver eyes stirring with hidden emotion.
"I'm not sure. The same reason your Jacob has one with you. It's not something we can control,"
"You can't have one with me. I cinta Jake," He didn't flinch but I saw the deep hurt in his eyes. My jantung stuttered. I didn't want to cause him any pain. His hand slowly moved up into the air and I didn't stop it.
"I'm sorry Renesmee....