Part11- the return
2 years later... (everybody is age 14)
*ring ring ring!* *ring ring ring!*
Aki went to go get her phone. As she looked at the ID number she realized that it was a American number. "satsuki!" she thought. She answered the phone.
Aki: "hello!?"
Satsuki: "HI AKI!"
Aki almost cried. Her friend hadn't called her ever since she had left America. She didn't really know why, but she figured that it had to do with the losses satsuki had to deal with ever since she was five. Satsuki had been depressed when her and Domon left America. Their best friend Ichinose had died weeks before their departure, in a truck accident, but now Aki found that Satsuki sounded very happy.
Satsuki: "Aki?"
Aki: "oh! I'm sorry satsuki. I'm sooo happy that anda called, how are you!?"
Satsuki: "you'll see tomorrow!"
Aki: "tomorrow?"
Satsuki: "I'm coming to visit you!!!"
Aki: "REALLY!!!!!????" she was sooo happy!
Satsuki: "yeah," Aki could actually hear Satsuki grinning while she was talking.
Satsuki: "and I got a very big surprise for you!"
Aki: "oh? What is it?"
Satsuki: "it's a surprise silly! Oh! And tell Domon too because the stories is for the both of you."
Aki: "okay!" she knew that Domon would be sooo happy to see satsuki. This was a great day!
Satsuki: "well we're... I MEAN, MY plane will arrive at 2pm, so can anda pick me up?"
Aki: "of course!". we're!?
Satsuki: "well I'll see anda tomorrow Aki!"
Aki: "okay, I can't wait to see anda satsuki."
Satsuki: "me too..."
Note: Aki has already met Endou and is already the manager of Raimon sepakbola team. She has also already reunited with Domon. This part is the same exact time as the tampil when Ichinose called Aki. Just before the game against kidokawashashu middle school...
Aki and Domon walked to Raimon chu when all of a sudden Endou, the captain of the sepakbola team, runs up to them.
Aki: "Endou kun! What's wrong!?"
Endou: *panting* "i just heard a rumor... that there are two...kids about...our age...that are awesome at soccer! Wouldn't it...be great if they joined the team? People are...calling them..."
He didn't get the chance to say what he was going to because just then Endou turned around and started running toward the school.
Aki and Domon: "?????"
At 2pm, Aki and Domon left school early to go pick up satsuki. When they got to the airport they waited at her terminal.
Aki: "what happened to satsuki?"
Domon: "are anda sure anda got the time right?"
Aki: "yeah, I'm pretty sure..."
Back at Raimon, Ottonashi Haruna was walking to the sepakbola club building to get her clipboard, when she suddenly stopped to see two people her age peeking into the tiny window of the club building.
Haruna: "excuse me? Do anda need something in there?"
The two people turned their heads in a robotic way. Haruna first looked at the boy, which had light brown hair that pointed to the side. He had the look of a sweet person that everyone would love. Then she looked at the girl. The girl was beautiful. She had long flowing black hair with natural lightning blue streaks, electric blue eyes that had symbols in them, and she looked the the sweetest most caring person in the world. "fushigi," Haruna thought. The girl stepped meneruskan, ke depan and spoke with a voice that sounded like silk.
Girl: "umm...hi! Can we see your meet your sepakbola team?"
Haruna: "oh! Of course! The fields right this way. The teams just starting practice."
Haruna led the two people to the field.
Endou: "okay minna! Lenshuu hagime!"
The girl and boy watched and smiled at the practicing team. Then, after a while, a boy with a kuri shaped head accidentally kicked the ball the wrong way. It flew towards the girl. She instinctively caught the ball with her chest and let it fall to the ground at her feet.
Endou: "oh sorry! Can anda kick the ball to me please!?" "wow," he thought, "she's pretty"
Then the girl looked at the boy and he nodded. She kicked the ball to the boy and then, with lightning fast speed, ran to the left side of the field. The boy looked at Endou and smiled. He then started to dribble down the field. As he got to one midfielder with goggles he stopped. Then he kicked the ball up behind him, but the boy with goggles was already above him, but a strange thing happened. The ball changed it's course and was passed to the girl. She ran down the field and stopped as she came to a guy with blue long hair. She could tell he was about to do a hissatsu waza, but he never got the chance. The girl ran straight past him. Then she came to a big defender that looked like a wall. He was coming toward her, but then he stopped. The girl had kicked the ball up behind her and flipped in the air. Then she put her right leg straight out and fell to the ground hitting the ball hard and sending electricity out of it towards the guy. During this she yelled
"LIGHTNING BOLT!" the dinding like guy felt to the ground electrocuted. The girl was in front of the goal and could have shot, but passed to the boy instead. The boy jumped behind the ball on his hands, with feet in the air. Then he started yelling, "SPINING SHOT!" and the ball spun towards the goal. At the last minute, Endou the goalkeeper, took a stance, swung out his right arm in front of him and yelled, "GODHAND!" he almost stopped the ball, but it went in.
Endou smiled: "kimitachi suge!"
The whole Raimon team gathered around the two people.
Endou: "hi! I'm Raimon sepakbola teams captain, Endou Mamoru. anda guys are awesome at soccer!" the boy shook the captains hand, the girl had to take her no-fingered gloves off, then shake his hand.
Blue, long hair: "hi I'm Kazemaru. I guess anda two are the rumored players. Field no magitsushi and Kaminari no shoujou." he looked at the girl, "your beautiful." WHY DID HE SAY THAT!? he turned bright red.
The girl: "oh... Thank you." she turned red as well.
Behind Kazemaru, the boy with the goggles and a golden, spike haired boy silently smiled & waved.
Haruna: "where did anda both come from?"
Boy: "we're visiting from America. We've lived there for awhile, but we're just visiting for today."
Kuri head (kurimatsu): "visiting who?"
Girl: "oh! Two of our friends that go to this school."
Aki and Domon were walking towards the sepakbola field. They had just come back from the airport with no satsuki.
Aki: "I wonder what happened?"
Domon: "she probably got her flight canceled atau something." They were both upset that their friend didn't tampil up. Satsuki was the type of girl that brightened up a room when she walked in. Aki and Domon wanted to see her.
As they walked onto the field, they saw that the whole team was gathered up oleh the goal. As they approached...
Aki: "minna doshita no?" Endou broke from the group.
Endou: "hey kino! anda know those two rumored players I talked about? Well, their really good and..."
Girl: "AKI, DOMON!!!!!" Aki shrieked.
Aki & Domon: "SATSUKI!!!"
The girl named satsuki stepped out of the group and gave her two friends a hug. All three with tears in their eyes.
Aki: "We missed anda soooo much!"
Domon: "what happened to your flight?"
Satsuki: "I'll explain that later, but first here's your surprise."
Out of the group walked the boy with light brown hair, saluting with two fingers and saying,"ore dayo!"*wink*
Domon: "Ichinose!!!"
Aki had to take time to process what was happening. Ichinose died, didn't he?
Aki: "Ichinose kun?"
Ichinose: "taddaima, Aki"
Aki: "Ichinose kun!!!" she ran up to him and hugged him, crying.
Her two friends had returned.
How was part11? komentar please!!!
10 pujian if anda translate the Japanese!
I have a pertanyaan for all of my readers for this story series. Do anda REALLY like my story? Not how I write it, but in general? Please rate and comment! And please tell the truth!
I feel uncertain of my story. Nayanderu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2 years later... (everybody is age 14)
*ring ring ring!* *ring ring ring!*
Aki went to go get her phone. As she looked at the ID number she realized that it was a American number. "satsuki!" she thought. She answered the phone.
Aki: "hello!?"
Satsuki: "HI AKI!"
Aki almost cried. Her friend hadn't called her ever since she had left America. She didn't really know why, but she figured that it had to do with the losses satsuki had to deal with ever since she was five. Satsuki had been depressed when her and Domon left America. Their best friend Ichinose had died weeks before their departure, in a truck accident, but now Aki found that Satsuki sounded very happy.
Satsuki: "Aki?"
Aki: "oh! I'm sorry satsuki. I'm sooo happy that anda called, how are you!?"
Satsuki: "you'll see tomorrow!"
Aki: "tomorrow?"
Satsuki: "I'm coming to visit you!!!"
Aki: "REALLY!!!!!????" she was sooo happy!
Satsuki: "yeah," Aki could actually hear Satsuki grinning while she was talking.
Satsuki: "and I got a very big surprise for you!"
Aki: "oh? What is it?"
Satsuki: "it's a surprise silly! Oh! And tell Domon too because the stories is for the both of you."
Aki: "okay!" she knew that Domon would be sooo happy to see satsuki. This was a great day!
Satsuki: "well we're... I MEAN, MY plane will arrive at 2pm, so can anda pick me up?"
Aki: "of course!". we're!?
Satsuki: "well I'll see anda tomorrow Aki!"
Aki: "okay, I can't wait to see anda satsuki."
Satsuki: "me too..."
Note: Aki has already met Endou and is already the manager of Raimon sepakbola team. She has also already reunited with Domon. This part is the same exact time as the tampil when Ichinose called Aki. Just before the game against kidokawashashu middle school...
Aki and Domon walked to Raimon chu when all of a sudden Endou, the captain of the sepakbola team, runs up to them.
Aki: "Endou kun! What's wrong!?"
Endou: *panting* "i just heard a rumor... that there are two...kids about...our age...that are awesome at soccer! Wouldn't it...be great if they joined the team? People are...calling them..."
He didn't get the chance to say what he was going to because just then Endou turned around and started running toward the school.
Aki and Domon: "?????"
At 2pm, Aki and Domon left school early to go pick up satsuki. When they got to the airport they waited at her terminal.
Aki: "what happened to satsuki?"
Domon: "are anda sure anda got the time right?"
Aki: "yeah, I'm pretty sure..."
Back at Raimon, Ottonashi Haruna was walking to the sepakbola club building to get her clipboard, when she suddenly stopped to see two people her age peeking into the tiny window of the club building.
Haruna: "excuse me? Do anda need something in there?"
The two people turned their heads in a robotic way. Haruna first looked at the boy, which had light brown hair that pointed to the side. He had the look of a sweet person that everyone would love. Then she looked at the girl. The girl was beautiful. She had long flowing black hair with natural lightning blue streaks, electric blue eyes that had symbols in them, and she looked the the sweetest most caring person in the world. "fushigi," Haruna thought. The girl stepped meneruskan, ke depan and spoke with a voice that sounded like silk.
Girl: "umm...hi! Can we see your meet your sepakbola team?"
Haruna: "oh! Of course! The fields right this way. The teams just starting practice."
Haruna led the two people to the field.
Endou: "okay minna! Lenshuu hagime!"
The girl and boy watched and smiled at the practicing team. Then, after a while, a boy with a kuri shaped head accidentally kicked the ball the wrong way. It flew towards the girl. She instinctively caught the ball with her chest and let it fall to the ground at her feet.
Endou: "oh sorry! Can anda kick the ball to me please!?" "wow," he thought, "she's pretty"
Then the girl looked at the boy and he nodded. She kicked the ball to the boy and then, with lightning fast speed, ran to the left side of the field. The boy looked at Endou and smiled. He then started to dribble down the field. As he got to one midfielder with goggles he stopped. Then he kicked the ball up behind him, but the boy with goggles was already above him, but a strange thing happened. The ball changed it's course and was passed to the girl. She ran down the field and stopped as she came to a guy with blue long hair. She could tell he was about to do a hissatsu waza, but he never got the chance. The girl ran straight past him. Then she came to a big defender that looked like a wall. He was coming toward her, but then he stopped. The girl had kicked the ball up behind her and flipped in the air. Then she put her right leg straight out and fell to the ground hitting the ball hard and sending electricity out of it towards the guy. During this she yelled
"LIGHTNING BOLT!" the dinding like guy felt to the ground electrocuted. The girl was in front of the goal and could have shot, but passed to the boy instead. The boy jumped behind the ball on his hands, with feet in the air. Then he started yelling, "SPINING SHOT!" and the ball spun towards the goal. At the last minute, Endou the goalkeeper, took a stance, swung out his right arm in front of him and yelled, "GODHAND!" he almost stopped the ball, but it went in.
Endou smiled: "kimitachi suge!"
The whole Raimon team gathered around the two people.
Endou: "hi! I'm Raimon sepakbola teams captain, Endou Mamoru. anda guys are awesome at soccer!" the boy shook the captains hand, the girl had to take her no-fingered gloves off, then shake his hand.
Blue, long hair: "hi I'm Kazemaru. I guess anda two are the rumored players. Field no magitsushi and Kaminari no shoujou." he looked at the girl, "your beautiful." WHY DID HE SAY THAT!? he turned bright red.
The girl: "oh... Thank you." she turned red as well.
Behind Kazemaru, the boy with the goggles and a golden, spike haired boy silently smiled & waved.
Haruna: "where did anda both come from?"
Boy: "we're visiting from America. We've lived there for awhile, but we're just visiting for today."
Kuri head (kurimatsu): "visiting who?"
Girl: "oh! Two of our friends that go to this school."
Aki and Domon were walking towards the sepakbola field. They had just come back from the airport with no satsuki.
Aki: "I wonder what happened?"
Domon: "she probably got her flight canceled atau something." They were both upset that their friend didn't tampil up. Satsuki was the type of girl that brightened up a room when she walked in. Aki and Domon wanted to see her.
As they walked onto the field, they saw that the whole team was gathered up oleh the goal. As they approached...
Aki: "minna doshita no?" Endou broke from the group.
Endou: "hey kino! anda know those two rumored players I talked about? Well, their really good and..."
Girl: "AKI, DOMON!!!!!" Aki shrieked.
Aki & Domon: "SATSUKI!!!"
The girl named satsuki stepped out of the group and gave her two friends a hug. All three with tears in their eyes.
Aki: "We missed anda soooo much!"
Domon: "what happened to your flight?"
Satsuki: "I'll explain that later, but first here's your surprise."
Out of the group walked the boy with light brown hair, saluting with two fingers and saying,"ore dayo!"*wink*
Domon: "Ichinose!!!"
Aki had to take time to process what was happening. Ichinose died, didn't he?
Aki: "Ichinose kun?"
Ichinose: "taddaima, Aki"
Aki: "Ichinose kun!!!" she ran up to him and hugged him, crying.
Her two friends had returned.
How was part11? komentar please!!!
10 pujian if anda translate the Japanese!
I have a pertanyaan for all of my readers for this story series. Do anda REALLY like my story? Not how I write it, but in general? Please rate and comment! And please tell the truth!
I feel uncertain of my story. Nayanderu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It was a sunny afternoon and I've got nothing to do but lazed around looking for something to do.Then suddenly I found this "thing" about Inazuma Eleven.I thought about the girls and thought that maybe I can pair them up wiht some other boy so here are the results that I pair up the girls with...
Endou and Aki
Gouenji and Natsumi
Kidou and Haruna
Tsunami and Touko
Kidou and Fuyuka
Endou and Fuyuka
Kazemaru and Reika
Edgar and Fuyuka*I dunno about this*
Ichinose and Aki
Ichinose and Rika
Edgar and Rika
Hiroito and Reina
Ryuuji and Reina*I don't think so*
Endou and Natsumi
Kogure and Haruna*maybe*
Kudou and Hitomiko*this is NUTZ!!*
Fudou and Haruna
Endiu and Touko
Fubuki and Fuyuka
Tachimukai and Haruna
goku and Chichi*Just KIDDING HAHAHAHAHA,anyway this is Dragon ballz stuff,this couple*
And thats all I guess the most CRAZIEST one is Tsunami and Rika...AH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!>_< >3< ITS @#$%&* MAN!
Endou and Aki
Gouenji and Natsumi
Kidou and Haruna
Tsunami and Touko
Kidou and Fuyuka
Endou and Fuyuka
Kazemaru and Reika
Edgar and Fuyuka*I dunno about this*
Ichinose and Aki
Ichinose and Rika
Edgar and Rika
Hiroito and Reina
Ryuuji and Reina*I don't think so*
Endou and Natsumi
Kogure and Haruna*maybe*
Kudou and Hitomiko*this is NUTZ!!*
Fudou and Haruna
Endiu and Touko
Fubuki and Fuyuka
Tachimukai and Haruna
goku and Chichi*Just KIDDING HAHAHAHAHA,anyway this is Dragon ballz stuff,this couple*
And thats all I guess the most CRAZIEST one is Tsunami and Rika...AH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!>_< >3< ITS @#$%&* MAN!
Fubuki Shirou/ Shawn Frost
Koori no sekai de kimi no te wo nigiri
Itsukara koushite itan darou
Kogoeru kokoro ni yorisou sonzai
Kawaranai egao utsushite
Ima mo koko de ikitsuzuketeiru
Mada shinjiteitai yo
Sono tsuyosa ga boku wo hagemashite
Koko made koreta yo ne
Issho ni ikite kitan da
Kono yuki ni umaru kimi to no omoide
Kodoku na kanashimi dake ja nai
Kajikamu yubisaki hikari ni kazashite
Yasashii yuuki de tokasou
Yagate zenbu umaku iku hazu sa
Kanpeki no imi wo shiri
Sono nukumori kizukasete kureta
Honto no bokurashisa
Dakara mou kowakunainda
Ima mo koko de ikitsuzuketeiru
Mada shinjiteitai yo
Sono nukumori kizukasete kureta
Honto no bokurashisa
Kore kara susumu beki michi
Koori no sekai de kimi no te wo nigiri
Itsukara koushite itan darou
Kogoeru kokoro ni yorisou sonzai
Kawaranai egao utsushite
Ima mo koko de ikitsuzuketeiru
Mada shinjiteitai yo
Sono tsuyosa ga boku wo hagemashite
Koko made koreta yo ne
Issho ni ikite kitan da
Kono yuki ni umaru kimi to no omoide
Kodoku na kanashimi dake ja nai
Kajikamu yubisaki hikari ni kazashite
Yasashii yuuki de tokasou
Yagate zenbu umaku iku hazu sa
Kanpeki no imi wo shiri
Sono nukumori kizukasete kureta
Honto no bokurashisa
Dakara mou kowakunainda
Ima mo koko de ikitsuzuketeiru
Mada shinjiteitai yo
Sono nukumori kizukasete kureta
Honto no bokurashisa
Kore kara susumu beki michi
Evil Sven:So Hiroto Wats my Team name
Hiroto:you pick
Evil Sven:I see will name it The Dark Side
Hiroto:okay here is anda team and Your Capitan Marker
Evil Sven:alright Team we must Train
5 days Later
Raimon Won aganits Gemina Storm
Mark:WE DID IT NICE WORK SHAWN
Shawn:yeah
Evil Sven:genina Storm anda are Pathetic
Mark:Who are you
Evil Sven:how Daere anda forget me Mark *Evil Smile*its me Sven !
Mark:WHAT WHY
Evil Sven:hehee lets have a Match now
Raimon VS Dark Side
The Ball go to Sven
Evil Sven:let me tampil anda What the Alies Got
*Evil Sven Does Death Sword*
Mark:WHAT *Dose Majin the Hand*
GOAAL Sven's NEW pindah DEATH SWORD
Hiroto:you pick
Evil Sven:I see will name it The Dark Side
Hiroto:okay here is anda team and Your Capitan Marker
Evil Sven:alright Team we must Train
5 days Later
Raimon Won aganits Gemina Storm
Mark:WE DID IT NICE WORK SHAWN
Shawn:yeah
Evil Sven:genina Storm anda are Pathetic
Mark:Who are you
Evil Sven:how Daere anda forget me Mark *Evil Smile*its me Sven !
Mark:WHAT WHY
Evil Sven:hehee lets have a Match now
Raimon VS Dark Side
The Ball go to Sven
Evil Sven:let me tampil anda What the Alies Got
*Evil Sven Does Death Sword*
Mark:WHAT *Dose Majin the Hand*
GOAAL Sven's NEW pindah DEATH SWORD
Amemiya Taiyou/ Sol Daystar
SHARARARARA SHARARA
SHARARARARA SHARARA
nani mo sawarenai kedo
umaku ienai keredo
tashika ni hoka ni nai
nani ka ga koko ni aru
kodoku ni furuete hitori datta boku mo
minna to deatte nukumori wo shitta yo
yuujou ga boku to minna no aida ni tatteru
totetsu mo naku dekai keshin sa!
ganjou de tsuyoi ze!
yuujou ga boku to minna no kokoro wo tsunaideru
houkago no GURANDO de tomo ni mita
yuuyake zora no anda ni
SHARARARARA SHARARA
SHARARARARA SHARARA
tsurakute kurushii donna iya na kotomo
wasureru gurai ni muchuu de asonda yo
yuujou ga boku ta minna no aida ni tatteru
hanarete mo tsunagatteiru!
yuujou no kizuna de!
shourai no fuan mo kieta mou kibou shika nai!
kurayami wo kirisaki sashi konda
asa no hizashi no anda ni
SHARARARARA SHARARA
SHARARARARA SHARARA
SHARARARARA SHARARA
SHARARARARA SHARARA
SHARARARARA SHARARA
SHARARARARA SHARARA
nani mo sawarenai kedo
umaku ienai keredo
tashika ni hoka ni nai
nani ka ga koko ni aru
kodoku ni furuete hitori datta boku mo
minna to deatte nukumori wo shitta yo
yuujou ga boku to minna no aida ni tatteru
totetsu mo naku dekai keshin sa!
ganjou de tsuyoi ze!
yuujou ga boku to minna no kokoro wo tsunaideru
houkago no GURANDO de tomo ni mita
yuuyake zora no anda ni
SHARARARARA SHARARA
SHARARARARA SHARARA
tsurakute kurushii donna iya na kotomo
wasureru gurai ni muchuu de asonda yo
yuujou ga boku ta minna no aida ni tatteru
hanarete mo tsunagatteiru!
yuujou no kizuna de!
shourai no fuan mo kieta mou kibou shika nai!
kurayami wo kirisaki sashi konda
asa no hizashi no anda ni
SHARARARARA SHARARA
SHARARARARA SHARARA
SHARARARARA SHARARA
SHARARARARA SHARARA