Alpha and Omega: Debt paid with Blood
Alright first story Plz use creative critisizm
The Wind Crackled as it Passed throught the trees, Sending warm air into the undergrowth and into the bushes. A lone banteng grazed below, it chewed on the wild rumput it's long legs like stone pillars his antlers covered in velvet and the scratches of old fights lay visible.
The wind shifted , as the Old banteng cocked his head releasing a loud snort. Admist the semak, bush a pair of Glowing eyes focused on the moose, to the eyes their was nothing else just it's prey. the eyes took note of every breath , every movement, every blink of the bull.
The banteng was old but it was not frail, it turned it's head to glance at the semak, bush and the field of tall wild grass.
Time seemed to stop as the Moose locked eyes with the Glowing eyes. There was a flash, the banteng turned it's horns, but any defense was forseen. Their was a yell then a slash of bulu and the banteng staggered, it thrashed out in a blood rage, not aiming just lashing about in its final fight for life. After each movement it slowed. It grew colder the banteng was as if in a fog then it let out its death scream and collapsed sending the birds in the trees scattering. The serigala stepped into the light and studied he's work. He cleaned the blood from his mouth and turned He's head up and signaled the others. The oldest stepped near him and spoke "Nice kill you'll make her proud"
The old serigala spoke With words of stone
"I'am almost good enough" Thought Humphrey "almost'' It had been a winter since they last saw eachother the thought of her made him dizzy, her golden bulu always soft , and the scent of bunga that were always with her.
He flashed back to the conversation 3 months prior . " I am not good enough" He berkata finnaly after their short howl. " what do anda mean'' she hummed back. '' kate if anda know want ...puppies " he shook from his mouth I need to be strong and fast and and a Alpha" He tried to say proudly "humphrey i like anda the way anda are" she mused . "No Kate I need to be Strong for the Pack and for you"
Chapter 2: The return
A winter later humphrey patrolled the tranning grounds , His bulu rippled with new powerful muscles , his face a darker , lebih confident look with powerful eyes. Over the time he spent traning with Winston he had learned to kill with scary efficency . He could track deer from a mile away. He could Almost become invisible to anything unsuspecting. He leapt from rock to rock till he stood on the cliffs peak. He laughed to himself he recalled when it had took him half a hari to traverse it now a matter of detik . That was just part of his traning . He had to hunt with his eyes closed , ikan and command pack members which was hard because who wanted to listen to a former omega? He had also sparred personally with Winston who despite claiming such, held nothing back , each hari humphrey went to sleep bruised and bloody , so sore that as soon as he hit the ground he fell asleep. Then came a hari during the sparring he seemed to feel like winston was moving slower , he could see his blows before they came and dodged them as he returned with powerful hits shaking winston. " He must be going easy on me" Humphrey thought. "Surely this isn't all you've got Winston" berkata Humphrey dodging a slugish blow . " Of ... course ... not " coughed Winston Panting. Then it came , Humphrey saw an opening and took it . Slamming Winston's side and turning him over , then Humphrey jumped on him and pushed down. "I give Humphrey "still panting as Winston got up "nice ... Job" Humphrey smiled barely breathing heavy at all. "It's time for the mountain " Winston spoke regaining his breath "The Mountain" Humphrey berkata quietly.
"The Mountain" Was for what its worth a very steep rocky bukit, hill covered in dirt and very sharp fist sized rocks meant to cut up paw pads. What's worse is that the Trainee Humphrey in this case has to traverse the mountain while it was raining turning already loose dirt into mud making it very hard to climb up the last boulder to the peak . " This is not going to be fun is it Winston?" Winston just chuckled and moved to the viewing position.
Lightning cracked and thunder bekoned for Humphrey to start . He Sighed and took his position at the base. As if a signal the rain began to fall " Of course now it can't be just a mandi, shower '' Humphrey berkata weakly. "All right Humphrey get ready ... set ... Go!"
Alright first story Plz use creative critisizm
The Wind Crackled as it Passed throught the trees, Sending warm air into the undergrowth and into the bushes. A lone banteng grazed below, it chewed on the wild rumput it's long legs like stone pillars his antlers covered in velvet and the scratches of old fights lay visible.
The wind shifted , as the Old banteng cocked his head releasing a loud snort. Admist the semak, bush a pair of Glowing eyes focused on the moose, to the eyes their was nothing else just it's prey. the eyes took note of every breath , every movement, every blink of the bull.
The banteng was old but it was not frail, it turned it's head to glance at the semak, bush and the field of tall wild grass.
Time seemed to stop as the Moose locked eyes with the Glowing eyes. There was a flash, the banteng turned it's horns, but any defense was forseen. Their was a yell then a slash of bulu and the banteng staggered, it thrashed out in a blood rage, not aiming just lashing about in its final fight for life. After each movement it slowed. It grew colder the banteng was as if in a fog then it let out its death scream and collapsed sending the birds in the trees scattering. The serigala stepped into the light and studied he's work. He cleaned the blood from his mouth and turned He's head up and signaled the others. The oldest stepped near him and spoke "Nice kill you'll make her proud"
The old serigala spoke With words of stone
"I'am almost good enough" Thought Humphrey "almost'' It had been a winter since they last saw eachother the thought of her made him dizzy, her golden bulu always soft , and the scent of bunga that were always with her.
He flashed back to the conversation 3 months prior . " I am not good enough" He berkata finnaly after their short howl. " what do anda mean'' she hummed back. '' kate if anda know want ...puppies " he shook from his mouth I need to be strong and fast and and a Alpha" He tried to say proudly "humphrey i like anda the way anda are" she mused . "No Kate I need to be Strong for the Pack and for you"
Chapter 2: The return
A winter later humphrey patrolled the tranning grounds , His bulu rippled with new powerful muscles , his face a darker , lebih confident look with powerful eyes. Over the time he spent traning with Winston he had learned to kill with scary efficency . He could track deer from a mile away. He could Almost become invisible to anything unsuspecting. He leapt from rock to rock till he stood on the cliffs peak. He laughed to himself he recalled when it had took him half a hari to traverse it now a matter of detik . That was just part of his traning . He had to hunt with his eyes closed , ikan and command pack members which was hard because who wanted to listen to a former omega? He had also sparred personally with Winston who despite claiming such, held nothing back , each hari humphrey went to sleep bruised and bloody , so sore that as soon as he hit the ground he fell asleep. Then came a hari during the sparring he seemed to feel like winston was moving slower , he could see his blows before they came and dodged them as he returned with powerful hits shaking winston. " He must be going easy on me" Humphrey thought. "Surely this isn't all you've got Winston" berkata Humphrey dodging a slugish blow . " Of ... course ... not " coughed Winston Panting. Then it came , Humphrey saw an opening and took it . Slamming Winston's side and turning him over , then Humphrey jumped on him and pushed down. "I give Humphrey "still panting as Winston got up "nice ... Job" Humphrey smiled barely breathing heavy at all. "It's time for the mountain " Winston spoke regaining his breath "The Mountain" Humphrey berkata quietly.
"The Mountain" Was for what its worth a very steep rocky bukit, hill covered in dirt and very sharp fist sized rocks meant to cut up paw pads. What's worse is that the Trainee Humphrey in this case has to traverse the mountain while it was raining turning already loose dirt into mud making it very hard to climb up the last boulder to the peak . " This is not going to be fun is it Winston?" Winston just chuckled and moved to the viewing position.
Lightning cracked and thunder bekoned for Humphrey to start . He Sighed and took his position at the base. As if a signal the rain began to fall " Of course now it can't be just a mandi, shower '' Humphrey berkata weakly. "All right Humphrey get ready ... set ... Go!"
Hello, guys. Just wanted to say that, for the selanjutnya few days, I will be going lone wolf. I may respond to some dinding posts, but not many. I will still be up for the RP tomarrow, on my wall, if anda guys are still up for it. Just wanted ya all to know! I won't be as active as I usually am! :) If anda are interseted in the RP, PM me, atau message me in my wall!!!
Also, acak question... who likes dubstep? Tell me in the komentar below!!! :)
I am going to continue to write... because the stupid site keeps telling me to post a longer article... what???
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Also, acak question... who likes dubstep? Tell me in the komentar below!!! :)
I am going to continue to write... because the stupid site keeps telling me to post a longer article... what???
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I am thinking of making a A&O voice series but need help with it like for example getting pictures for the episodes when they are ready and mostly female voice actors for the female serigala like Kate, Princess etc. If anda want to help message me atau komentar on it atau even go on my youtube channel Omegawolfben.
Like I berkata if someone wants to help and keep this franchise alive it would keep the series alive and if no lebih Alpha and Omega film come out it would be like a entire movie atau even a TV series just on Youtube.
Like I berkata if someone wants to help and keep this franchise alive it would keep the series alive and if no lebih Alpha and Omega film come out it would be like a entire movie atau even a TV series just on Youtube.
Okay. I just had to ro this; make a short song about, uh... some things. You'll get it when ya read it.
Oooh, I'm lost, lost without life...
Oooh, wouldn't anda do anything for love?
I would take a knife,
If I could only strife...
Oooh... would anda do anything?
Oooh... would anda do anything?
Oooh... would anda do anything?
Oooh, wouldn't you... do aaanythiiing?
Yes, we go through pain, we gOoo through anger,
But we still always have the pleasure!
But no, anda have to be happy,
anda can't just get angry?
I know, it's probably horrible, I know. But that was sokethong I've wanted to do for FOREVER. I boped anda enjoyed it, and please, tell me what it meant to anda in the comments. :)
Oooh, I'm lost, lost without life...
Oooh, wouldn't anda do anything for love?
I would take a knife,
If I could only strife...
Oooh... would anda do anything?
Oooh... would anda do anything?
Oooh... would anda do anything?
Oooh, wouldn't you... do aaanythiiing?
Yes, we go through pain, we gOoo through anger,
But we still always have the pleasure!
But no, anda have to be happy,
anda can't just get angry?
I know, it's probably horrible, I know. But that was sokethong I've wanted to do for FOREVER. I boped anda enjoyed it, and please, tell me what it meant to anda in the comments. :)
I keep seeing hate komentar here and there and I just want to say a few things to everyone membaca this. One thing for sure is that everyone who keeps wanting this club to die out: F*** OFF ALREADY! Look if anda don't like this club then just leave. You're not forced to be here. Those who actually want to be here are really annoyed oleh spammers and haters. How about these haters just find your own club to annoy. We all want this to stop!
Now to those membaca this and actually want this club to be alive: we can't just sit around waiting for a miracle. We must all take action and keep this club going. Everyone has a part to keep and the power to keep this club going but some of us underestimate our own power and are not using it wisely. Keep this club alive oleh adding fanarts, pertanyaan atau even forum for crying out loud!
I am doing my part oleh trying to think of interesting things to keep everyone hooked. Now anda must play your part.
Everyone who wants to: KEEP THIS CLUB ALIVE.
Now to those membaca this and actually want this club to be alive: we can't just sit around waiting for a miracle. We must all take action and keep this club going. Everyone has a part to keep and the power to keep this club going but some of us underestimate our own power and are not using it wisely. Keep this club alive oleh adding fanarts, pertanyaan atau even forum for crying out loud!
I am doing my part oleh trying to think of interesting things to keep everyone hooked. Now anda must play your part.
Everyone who wants to: KEEP THIS CLUB ALIVE.