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Chapter 12

    Leon sprinted from his place against the wall, crashing right into Naya. She fell backwards, the floor beneath her breaking into tiny shards. Leon had a psychotic look on his face, like he was about to go on a killing rampage. This wasn’t what I was expecting. I ran right for him, knocking him back into a wooden bookshelf. He crashed into it, sending broken pieces of wood flying everywhere.
    Leon picked up a sharp piece of wood, and played around with it in his hands. “Hey sister, think fast!” He shouted, and then launched the piece of wood straight at Naya. Andre looked at Naya, and then flew in front of her, the stick of wood hitting him straight in the stomach. He looked down at the bloodied wood.
    “For…you…” He gasped, falling to the floor, lifeless. His leather jaket was stained with blood, and the smell was unbearable. Vampire blood was not appealing, it clogged the senses. His hair was out at all angles, drops of blood stuck to it. Naya looked at his Frozen form, tears dripping from her eyes. Andre’s ghost floated up from his body, and it stood in front of Naya. He placed a ciuman on her cheek. “Thank you…I cinta you…” And then it turned into mist. Andre’s body disappeared, leaving only his leather jaket behind. Naya glared furiously at Leon, who stood there, frozen. My insides turned to ice as I saw Andre disappear, and I turned my attention to Leon.
    ‘What did anda do?” I growled, moving meneruskan, ke depan towards him. He only smiled.
    “You were here; anda don’t need me to explain it to you.” He patted me on the head. I flinched at the contact; his hand was colder than usual. lebih like an igloo than a cube of ice.
    “Andre…” Naya whimpered, lebih tears coming from her eyes. I didn’t know what she was going through, but to lose your mate must be horrible. Andre was such and outgoing guy, full of life and love. He was one of my best friends, and now he was gone, for good. “You killed him!” Naya shouted, shoot
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hawkstar14 said:
Did anda write that?
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Yeah, why?
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jbfan_f said:
i really like it!!& i really like reading!...peace((:
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