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Shirō Fubuki/Shawn Frost Pertanyaan

The first contest for this club?

This club has no contests so i decided to add 1.

so wat u have to do is find a poem that best fits fubuki's character atau his life story. u may write one urself atau find one on the internet. if ur using 1 from the internet make sure its not copyright.

the rules r simple
no copying poems already posted
no using copyright poems

this is quite hard so i have decided to give quite a lot of props
1st place= 100 props
2nd place= 50
3rd place= 25

make sure u komentar on a poem saying thts the 1 u vote for. and each person only get 1 vote. if u say u vote on lebih than one poem none of them will be counted. if nobody decides 2 say which 1 they vote for then i will decide on who has the most komentar and i will only count 1 komentar frm a certain person for each poem.
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the deadline is september 30th
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i have decided seconplace gets 90 and third 80 and anyone else who enetrs 20 pujian
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this contests is now closed
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Shirō Fubuki/Shawn Frost Jawaban

mini17 said:
By:- Robert Frost

Stopping oleh Woods on a Snowy Evening

Whose woods these are I think I know.
His house is in the village, though;
He will not see me stopping here
To watch his woods fill up with snow.

My little horse must think it queer
To stop without a farmhouse near
Between the woods and Frozen lake
The darkest evening of the year.

He gives his memanfaatkan bells a shake
To ask if there is some mistake.
The only other sound's the sweep
Of easy wind and downy flake.

The woods are lovely, dark, and deep,
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.

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wow! mini the poem that anda picked is awesome because the poets name is ending with frost and its related to snow,i think this is the perfect poem for this club.. :D
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i agree with kazemaru_swift this is definately a great poem!!!!
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well done u r first place!!!!
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janel4298 said:
Perfection
oleh Ammon Taylor
Have we been deceived?
The sweet scent of temptation, intoxicating as it may seem
The shell is so simple
Yet the deep inner core ever elusive sadly proves to be

When will this slow realization, this pure revelation break forth
and bless my eyes?
When will this enlightening wisdom permeate my thoughts,
when can these actions
enrich other's lives?

The anticipation of impossible transcendence
This profound longing for the transformation
The ascendance from finite to infinite
Haunts me through every waking thought

How much longer must I wait?
Dear God, I implore you, insatiable as my beseechment may seem
Please let my weary soul have the strength
To shatter these shackles, please let your imperishable truth set me free

Would time and luar angkasa meld into one?
Would there be room to learn and grow?
Would my emotions cease to be?
What creature would I then become?

Have I been deceived?
The sweet scent of perfection, intoxicating as it may seem
The shell is so simple
Yet the deep inner core ever elusive sadly proves to be

This equivocation of perfection, this paradox consumes me


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bravo bravo
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thanks!
janel4298 posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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well done 2nd place
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afshaali said:
i knw i m late and my poem is not good cause i write my own poem first time
where had anda go
i miss anda so     
i thought we will stay together
but anda leave me alone forever
dad thanks for all your support    
'cause of your support i play football very good
mom thanks for your cinta     
which is still live in my heart
hey aiden anda r the bestest bro ever
u too alive in my jantung forever
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 i knw i m late and my poem is not good cause i write my own poem first time where had anda go i miss anda so i thought we will stay together but anda leave me alone forever dad thanks for all your support 'cause of your support i play football very good mom thanks for your cinta which is still live in my jantung hey aiden anda r the bestest bro ever u too alive in my jantung forever
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awesome poem . i'm waiting for ur 1000th poem !!
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thnx
afshaali posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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Beautiful *cry*
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demi382 said:
A Character
by: William Wordsworth (1770-1850)


    

I marvel how Nature could ever find space
For so many strange contrasts in one human face:
There's thought and no thought, and there's paleness and bloom
And bustle and sluggishness, pleasure and gloom.

There's weakness, and strength both redundant and vain;
Such strength as, if ever affliction and pain
Could pierce through a temper that's soft to disease,
Would be rational peace—a philosopher's ease.

There's indifference, alike when he fails atau succeeds,
And attention full ten times as much as there needs;
Pride where there's no envy, there's so much of joy;
And mildness, and spirit both meneruskan, ke depan and coy.

There's freedom, and sometimes a diffident stare
Of shame scarcely seeming to know that she's there,
There's virtue, the judul it surely may claim,
Yet wants heaven knows what to be worthy the name.

This picture from nature may seem to depart,
Yet the Man would at once run away with your heart;
And I for five centuries right gladly would be
Such an odd such a kind happy creature as he.

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absolutely brilliant!!!
ShawnFi posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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thanks! :)
demi382 posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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well done 3rd place
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....SUPER SUPER cinta IT!
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3mzo said:
Cold Frozen snow:

As I walk in the snow, late at night.
anda are the bintang that shines the most light.
I walk alone, but I feel anda here,
anda so far away, yet I think your still near.
I remember that day, not so long ago.
The car completely covered, in cold, frozen, snow.

I try to stay strong, try to hold back the tears,
But I just lose myself, when loud noises I hear.
That promise I keep, I've kept till this day,
to finally be perfect, and remain that way!
I made anda that promise, not long ago...
When anda lay there that night, in cold, frozen, snow.

We need to be perfect, to be like the wind!
atau there's no point in this now! there's no point in this thing!
I tried to be perfect, I tried but I failed!
I lost anda completely, so I cried and I wailed.
But I couldn't bring anda back, from so long ago.
so anda remain buried , under cold, frozen, snow

oleh Emily Sandford 06/08/13
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I know the comp has already finished but i dicided to post one anyway
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