I NEED HELP!!!!

ok i am in the making of making a story called mysterious cinta can anda guys please please help me oleh messageing me so i can give anda a link to the first chapter and then can anda please komentar on it atau come back too the message and tell me what anda think atau anda can just answer this pertanyaan and say "can i please have a link?" and i will message anda and give anda a link please help me i need help i dont feel that people no it exists enuff. [sry if i am miss spelling a lot lol.]

and if anda like the first i will send anda a link too the detik chapter and so on and so fourth.

there are 8 chapters so far.