I know this sounds crazy on the acak club, but, I need your opinion.

How does this sound for my detik book: Kenya, Eve, Mellissa, and Emma and the rest of the gang get to go on a cruise, but they don't know that the Prissy kucing are going on the same cruise. It results in fighting on what was supposed to be the best week ever. But then, a storm comes and the ship has to speed up to get away from the area. but the engine is old and over heats and soon it is going to explode and the gang gets left on the ship while everyone else gets the life boats so they have to dive off. Eve sees Kenya wouldn't jump and has to pull her to make her dive, blah blah blah... when Eve opens her eyes underwater she sees Kenya is a mermaid. Kenya makes a quick force field air bubble thing looking to find other people... blah zey blah... sooner atau later she finds everyone and they float around in the protection bubble looking for land and then they find some then get stuck on it until They rejuvinate their powers. There is a lot lebih but I am really lazy and in a bad mood. (My mom says it's hormones) I berkata all that to say do anda think the judul should be Strange Sisters Forever 2: Head Under the Water atau any other suggestions? Please excuse my 5 (maybe lebih but once again I'm lazy) grammatical errors. Yeah. :/