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Should I keep on making short stories? (Please no rude komentar :))

The Not So Worm
A Short Story oleh :YoshiStar
One hari when I was at least 2 atau 3 years old I was outside with my dad. I saw something through the rumput and I picked it up. At first I thought it was a worm. So I waved it in the air and said: "Look daddykins a worm!"
And my dad said: "Holly S***!!! That's not a F***** worm! That's a rumput snake!"
And so I said: "OH" and droped it. And walked back into my house and ate some stroberi ice cream...

Please tell me what anda think. Should I continue atau no? And please no rude comments:)
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kittencutie119 said:
No
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Thank anda for answering:) I really apreciate it:))
YoshiStar posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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Your welcome. With a little moe practice, anda could eventually get a little better wth progress
kittencutie119 posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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thank anda sooooo much! This helps alot:)
YoshiStar posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
JudyNails said:
I think anda should!
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Thank you!:D
YoshiStar posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
Shadowmarioking said:
lol that is a hilarious story wished that'd happen to me XD

go ahead, continue :D
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I'd be glad to!:D
YoshiStar posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
IHWTA said:
That was.... A really short, short story...
Kind of... random...
I say no. No offense of anything.
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Thanks anyway:) None taken BTW
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YOUTH-UNLIMITED said:
It's not actually a story.these are the lackings of this story.try to correct your faults and practice more.
1.the story doesn't got any meaning
2.the story doesn't got any moral
3.the story doesn't got any climate
4.the story doesn't got any message and aim. So...if anda can overcome this faults and practice more,you will be able to make great stories.good luck:)
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Thank you:)
YoshiStar posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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anda are most welcome:)
YOUTH-UNLIMITED posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
hellokittygirl2 said:
i think yes u should make it little funny and scary
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I will:))
YoshiStar posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
Brandey said:
Hm...It's kinda strange,I don't know what to say.
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Same.
mitchie19 posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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Well its kinda lebih like a strange event that heppened in my life...I should have mentioned that:)
YoshiStar posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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Ok than :)
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dreamfields said:
If anda enjoy writing, then continue. The lebih practice anda have, the lebih details anda will include. Nobody sits down and writes a masterpiece on their first try. The story was really short, but it gives anda a start to build on. Have fun!!!
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Thank you:))
YoshiStar posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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Your welcome :D
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