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posted by patrisha727

hey anda guys I apologize for not posting this earlier, time got the better of me :)

Edward’s POV

Saying that I was shocked would be an understatement. I was beyond speechless. I haven’t seen my cinta in over 5 years. She looked different as well. She had many different features, almost looking like a vampire. She was paler than I remember and she had RED EYES!

Is that……?

OMG OMG OMG BELLA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

My beautiful daughter….

Never have I ever thought that this was even possible…

Bella gazed at each one of us closely and her emotions were all over her face, from shock, hurt, agony, anger,...

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The Other Side of The Realm Chapter 3

posted by patrisha727

Opps! I'm soooo sorry! I forgot to post the last chapter which I diposting on fanfic last Tuesday. *looks sheepish* Sorry about that. But I'll post both chapters now! ^_^

Edward’s POV

“We need to turn off the lights throughout the house first.” Carlisle said.

We nodded, and went through the house, shutting off the lights and pulling down curtains and blinds from the windows. In about 5 minutes, we went back to Emmett and Rosalie’s room with the large mirror in the side, right selanjutnya to the closet. Carlisle came in with a match and an old fashioned waxed candle.

We set the board and the plachlette...

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Venus- Chapter 2

posted by VampRose

Gym passed oleh very slowly today; our team won every game in volleyball. That was of course because of Sammy and Kessiah. Coach 2 let us go change early, and oleh the time I was done Landon was their waiting for me. I came out of the bathroom, and Landon grabbed me up in a big beruang hug and gave me a kiss. He put me down and grabbed my hand. We walked to class just like this: hand in hand. We had English together to so I'd get lebih time with him. Blair and Blake were already there sitting together. It was weird because wasn't Blake dating Jamie. I choose a kursi in the back of the room right next...

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The Other Side Of the Realm Chapter 2

posted by patrisha727

From 2 to 11 comments... wow. I'm impressed at anda guys. O.O Maybe 15 this time? Please!?!? LOL. I'm fine. But please leave comments. komentar are my heroin. ^_^

Edward’s POV

We just got onto the airplane on the way to England. We sat in First Class. It was excruciating to see happy thoughts everywhere I go. It’s sad to see that everyone was happy, anyone but me. Then I have gotten thinking about Bella again.

How is she doing?

Is she happy?

I shook my head once again, I can’t think about her anymore.

“It’ll be as if I never existed”

Those words that came out of my mouth will haunt me for...

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The Other Side Of the Realm Chapter 1

posted by patrisha727

Just 2 comments? Come on! I know anda guys can do better than that! Please leave komentar it's not going to kill you! Hope anda guys are enjoy this!

Edward POV (queue the girly screams!)

Year 2011 (5 years after Edward left Bella) (2 years after the prologue)

Currently our family is staying in Alaska for the last couple of years. I’ve been staying in my room locked out, and only coming out when I needed to hunt. I’ve been lifeless without Bella.

I missed her cokelat brown eyes that gave me access to her soul.

I missed her laughs that always warmed my cold and immortal heart.

I missed everything...

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Choice #1- The Other Side of the Realm - Prologue

posted by patrisha727

I gotta say, welcome back for me! Haha.. It’s been long. I haven’t written since Halloween, weird huh? Well, I need to thank everyone who have been encouraging and I’ll try to do my best, and see what happens. This is just the beginning, the prologue, got it?

Love is stronger than death even though it can't stop death from happening, but no matter how hard death tries it can't separate people from love. It can't take away our memories either. In the end, life is stronger than death.”

3rd person point of view
Year 2009 (Bella is supposed to be 21 if anda can’t do the math)

Kristen and Anna...

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My Decision of my menulis - patrisha727 (Author's note)

posted by patrisha727

First thing first.

I'm still very sorry for disapointing many of anda about my writing, and I decided that I should start over, and my parents agree as well.

I will stop menulis all of my stories that haven't been completed. Here's the following:

Amore ( I know MANY of anda cinta this story, and I'm SORRY)
Evening bintang (posted the link for Edward's Eclipse)
Incarnate (Check out fanfiction.net, there are MANY different version for that plot)
Unreal (check out fanfiction.net as well)

If anda guys want lebih stories based on these, check out my profil and click on "Fanfiction.net profil Page", scroll down...

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Hey, umm... Bad news...

posted by patrisha727

Hey... umm...

I'm sorry about the Evening bintang incident and I apologize to Poweredtwilight for the thing. :S

anda can check the link for the complete story, and REMEMBER I'm only 12.

I know NOTHING about plagarim and I recognize it now. I'm really sorry.

The rest of the stories are owned oleh me.
I wrote Bella's Lofe (along with sasie_kaje88)
Amore, Incarnate, Unreal, etc...

I'm sorry I didn't know better.
For now, I'm just going to retire for menulis and will get back to anda as best as I can.

I have school, and activities to work with through the year. I may write when I have time, but not anytime soon. I feel bad about that so much and I apologize.

I am going to post suggested stories from fanfiction.net and it gave me inspirations from my menulis that I REALLY done. Sorry.....

-Caroline

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Unreal - Ch. 4 - History

posted by patrisha727

This is getting good...... hehehe....

Previously:

"This might take the whole flight."
I looked at each of them, expressions ranging from sadness to awe.
"It all started when it was 1997..."

"I was only 10 years old that time. I lived in London, UK with my parents and my twin brother, Jonathan. My parent wil Kelly and itik jantan, drake Wellington. They own a company, and we were somewhat rich. I guess as rich as anda guys are. It was a normal summer day, and I just came halaman awal from the pantai with my friends and Jonathan." I looked at the Cullens. They had expressions urging my to continue.

"I came halaman awal and saw...

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Unreal - Ch. 3 - Confessions

posted by patrisha727

I was bored during membaca class at school, and I wrote the WHOLE chapter then. So now I just needed to recopy it onto here from my notebook LOL.

As I saw the eyes stare at my face, I felt something burning in my cheeks. Why would I be blushing at something like this? Not appropriate at all.

"What are anda guys doing here?" I hissed at them.
They all flinched at the sound of my voice.
I have been faking my acent the whole time. I had an English acent, not an American.

"Bella?" Carlisle asked cautiously.
"Answer my pertanyaan first." I demanded.
"We came to get anda to come home." Edward answered.

I sighed....

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Incarnate - Ch. 7 - Ceremony

posted by patrisha727

Look, I'm too tired to say excuses, so just enjoy. LOL.

Bella's POV

"Bella!" a squealing voice apeared behind me.
"Jane?" I asked.
She opened the door with an Alice-like smile. I raised an eyebrow in suspicion.
"What's going on?" I asked.
"Aro is preparing the ball!" she squealed.
I rolled my eyes. "When will it be?"
"Umm... right after your coronation.
"Oh yeah, your coranation is in two hours, better get ready." Then she left.

Oh man... coranation. Jeez, so typical for me to forget my own day. I stood up and went into the my closet to get the ballgown that Heidi had been begging me to wear. I wore...

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Unreal - Ch. 1 - Identity

posted by patrisha727

Thanks for all of the komentar so far. I hope anda guys will enjoy this story, as much as I cinta to write it! ^_^

Bella's POV

I woke up to a pair of cold lips on my own, with enthusiasm and impatience. I smiled.
"That's great way to wake up in the morning." I mumbled, opening my eyes slowly. Edward chuckled. "Good Morning, Love."
"Morning, Edward." I berkata while hopping out of the tempat tidur with sudden eagerness.
"May I have a human minute?" I asked Edward.
"Go ahead love."

As I head to the bathroom and got into the shower, I suddenly thought of Tray, Penny, and Drake. They were my friends from my past life,...

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Amore - Ch. 22 - Danger

posted by patrisha727

I DIDN'T WRITE THIS STORY FOR A MONTH!?!?! Ok, that's just... sad. I'm sorry for the long wait. School and writer's block aren't a great combonation. Thanks for being patient and here's your reward for it. PS: Thanks for the help from my writer's block, that was a huge favor for me. :)

Bella's POV

The family came in slowly. I first see the blonde beautiful one, who I assume is Rosalie. Then came along Emmett who had a huge grin on his face. I held back the urge to roll my eyes. Then I see Alice's mate, Jasper along with Edward. The last two couples, who I assume are the parents came in showing...

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Incarnate - Ch. 6 - Just Walk Away

posted by patrisha727

Ok here's the selanjutnya chapter :)

Bella's POV

I continued to glare at Edward while the rest of the band besides me did the exact same thing. They were loyal friends, they knew what Edward have done to me. Edward just stood there speechless.

I let out a cold laugh. "Apperently Edward here needs to sit down atau something." I said. Everyone turned their attention to me.
"Let me guess, time for 20 questions?" Rebecca asked.
They nodded.

"How were anda changed Bella?" Carlisle asked. I saw that their was sadness in his eyes. I didn't bother to pay attention.
"Victoria." I sneered.

The whole Cullen family flinched....

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Unreal - Preface

posted by patrisha727

My mind is catonic. I admit it ok? Switched is getting nowhere and I'm stuck on Amore, so my true main stories now are Evening Star, Incarnate, and now Unreal if anda want it. Please tell me what anda think.

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

This is just a cuplikan for your information. I won't actually start the story until I get your feedbacks ^_^

I have never felt so alive. Isabella Swan's life is perfect. But just in one day, it suddenly disappears right in front of my mind. It's catonic! Another life have yet gone to hell. I want an easy life, not a complicated...

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Incarnate - Ch. 5 - Reunited

posted by patrisha727

Look, I know some of anda want Amore. I'm sorry! I'm OFFICIALLY stuck on that story. I gotta think. Plz be patient with me.

Bella's POV

As I walked off the stage for intermission, I heard Love Agony playing their all-time hit. It's actually one of my favorit songs of all time...

I watched them play, and I know I had to do a duet on this song as well, with the lead singer, Matt.

Matt came onto the piano that was on the stage and signaled me to come. Sigh. Here we go. I walked onto the stage staring at the ground, trying to not see the Cullens. I heard Matt starting to play on the piano, and soon...

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Story Contest FINAL results.....

posted by patrisha727

Alright, there anda guys have it.

All of your stories are AMAZING! And as I berkata before, anda should continue the stories. As a judge, I can't be going personal and make my BFFs have the highest points. So these are the results of the puncak, atas three winners.

Third place cici1264's story Bella's Secret Sister

Second Place Nikkytwilight12's story Renesmee Life

FIRST PLACE _madz_'s story!!!!

All of those who have participated will get a letter of appreciation for EVEN making this contest even happen

I have to thank all of the judges who gave pointers, and gave the final results.

Thanks to the judges:
ashesandwine...

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CONTEST CLOSED no artikel may be diposting

posted by patrisha727

Alright! Thanks to everyone who have participated in the contest.

This icludes:

nikkytwilight12

_madz_

cici1264

SMackedlove

sami1002

Thanks to anda guys! And ALL of your stories are amazing, and I encourage anda to continue them. anda are now allowed to post your OWN stories on my spot if anda wish. I know that I didn't allow anda guys to do that before, but I have a change of heart, and because of the fact I have school and my stories are pretty much delayed from time to time.

Winners will be diposting later today.
Thanks.

-patrisha727 & judges

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fan Fiction contest article!! (_madz_)

posted by _madz_

well here we go, it's not really anything but a small one shot, just because i was bored.
hope anda like it anyway :)

Bella’s POV

I was staring through the window into the night, and it was raining. The fine water droplets
glistened in the frigid air, a sign of how cold it really was outside. The light from the house
spilled out into the night, bathing the surrounding forest. The foliage pressed together, giving
the impression of an impenetrable dinding of green, almost claustrophobic. It was beautiful, but
it wasn’t home.
I shook my head, trying desperately to rid my mind of these recurring thoughts....

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Bella's Secret Sister from the Future Chapter 1

posted by cici1264

Renesmee ( Taylor )

Nessie comes back from the future and pretends to be Bella's sister. But she can't tell anyone that she is from the future, and that she is Bella's and Edward's daughter. But it will be hard because Edward can read her mind and find out who she is. Alice can't see her and might think that Nessie is a werewolf. And Nessie also looks like Bella and Edward and that might give the secret away. Jacob might see her and imprint on her. And she acts like a vampire.

"Taylor come on hurry up we are going to be late for school!" mom shouted while I was sneaking back into my window after a full night...