My latst poem!!!

"My Dearest Love"

anda came into my life, oleh neither chance nor fate.
But oleh destiny, who berkata for true love, I would no longer wait.
Like an angel, anda fell from heaven, to Earth below.
anda came into my life, and set my jantung aglow.
Whenever anda leave me, and what I say is true.
I lay awake through the night, my jantung crying for you.
anda are my only desire.
To anyone else, I could never aspire.
Though now anda are gone, my dearest love,
I find peace, knowing anda are watching over me from above.
And when, at last, eternity dies.
I rejoice at once again seeing the cinta in your eyes.
But in this moment, I shan't lose heart.
For not even death can tear our cinta apart.

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