I think it's a good poem. But the whole emo thing is a little much. . .:) just don't 4get 2 never give up!! :)

Here's my Poem, it's called "Fallen Angel Love," p.s I wrote this right after I finished reading twilight.
*A Fallen Angel*
*In a dark world*
*Your light I cannot reach*
*Your warmth I cannot feel*
*May hands baren*
*My lips wishing, whispering*
*They long for you*
*My heart achily beats for one thing*
*Your fallen angel love*
A Fallen angel's love*