The cold wind blows through his hair and he shivers; bringing his mantel closer to his wea body. He hasn't had anything to eat atau drink in days, and knows he's going to die. He struggles to stand and falls instantly, rolling down the bukit, hill he was sitting on. His head hits the ground painfully; a deafening crack filling the air. Then all is still.
"What...the heck...is this?" my brother snarled, dropping my story in front of me.
"Wh-what!!" I whined. "Don't anda like it!?"
"That's a shitty start! Why start a story off with anda killing the main character!?" he snapped.
"Hey; it's better than you!" I...
continue reading...