menulis Hi.. Today I got some good words in my head.. So I made a song.. My English is bad, so forgive me, but if someone wants to use those lyrics to make a song, then go ahead... Maybe anda would write me a comment, is it good atau really bad..

Karuliin posted on Jul 24, 2010 at 07:34PM

I used to be your sparkling star
in the night sky.
You wanted me to become a star
and not to be shy.
Now your gone and I made
you wish come true.
So be happy for me,
I did it all for you.

I´m still in the night sky,
trying to shine so bright.
I´m trying so hard not to cry.
You said it´ll be all right.
I´ll all be all right,
I promise you.
In day and at night,
I love you too.


I used to be your little girl,
who you always loved.
We were like a little theam,
we got every problem solved.
Now I´m all grown up and
so to my problems grow.
I miss you so much now,
I think you should have to know.

I´m still in the night sky,
trying to shine so bright.
I´m trying so hard not to cry.
You said it´ll be all right.
I´ll all be all right,
I promise you.
In day and at night,
I love you too.

I used to have so much fun,
when I still were a little girl.
You don´t know, but I feel lost,
like some tiny girl.
I wrote this song for you,
only for you.
I´ll always remeber you,
what ever I´ll do.

I´m still in the night sky,
trying to shine so bright.
I´m trying so hard not to cry.
You said it´ll be all right.
I´ll all be all right,
I promise you.
In day and at night,
I love you too.
And always will.
last edited on Jul 24, 2010 at 07:37PM

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lebih dari setahun yang lalu emilyroxx said…
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Thats a great poem! It made me cry. It actually sounds like a Taylor swift song.
lebih dari setahun yang lalu txter32 said…
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i loved it!!! i think its really good!
lebih dari setahun yang lalu Arnela said…
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I really like it !!! very very cool !!! :)
lebih dari setahun yang lalu Karuliin said…
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Thank you guys.. That means a lot for me.. really big thanks!!
lebih dari setahun yang lalu fabfamily99 said…
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that is really good! I sang it while reading it and I completley love it!!!! When I sung up i opened out of my shell of the refrain(repeated secion) I love this!!!