menulis What's a shadow? *Writing Challenge*

starwarsfangirl posted on Jun 27, 2010 at 06:53PM
I've been trying to explain what a shadow is in a poetic way, but I haven't had too much luck... how would YOU explain it in a poetic way?

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lebih dari setahun yang lalu starwarsfangirl said…
This was my (sad)attempt.
The seperation of light and dark, a shadow is but a barrier between night and day. The light, defined by it's boldness, showing its face to the stars, as the shadows hide themselves, ashamed. The shadows creep about in the corners and crevices of the world.

Now you try!
lebih dari setahun yang lalu chocolatecurlz said…
Haunting me throughout the night,
Is a shadow,
A play of lights.
Defined by boldness, barrier between night and day,
Follow your shadow, and run away.

Thats my try :P I dunno if its particularly good. haha(:
lebih dari setahun yang lalu starwarsfangirl said…
I like it. :D
lebih dari setahun yang lalu amethyst44 said…
My Shadow is something more than just a replica of me,
Something bold and confident that shimmers gently,
Darkness brewing, light is fading,
Following forever in forms of shading,
Light blacks out when times are hard,
But my Shadow is there, standing strong.

um...yeah, doesn't seem that good when i look at it now. guess its okay. ^^ '
lebih dari setahun yang lalu gabriela13 said…
a shadow is the deepest most private part of your soul made visible only by light, so all can see you.
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