menulis Insanity

EmoKidSteven posted on Apr 08, 2010 at 10:41AM
broken promises lead to tempting lies,
and ead each one is buried behind your eyes.
longing hearts you have deprived,
calling out in desperate cries.
sit and watch my bleeding heart,
feel my life fall apart.
talk to the shadows on the wall,
knowing that ive lost it all.
listen to the voices inside my head,
understanding every word they've said.
telling me that im insane,
and you're the only one to blame.
the only word i hear is suicide,
thinking its the best way to die.
looking around i finally see,
death is not the one for me.
to suffer like this would be best,
and let insanity take over all the rest.

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lebih dari setahun yang lalu r-pattz said…
Wow... Just wow. I love the way you channeled yourself into this poem. I mean that way you described your pain was so chillingly, and beautifully, done. You related how you felt and thought in a way that was perfectly clear, and as a reader I understood it.

Just... As a bit of a side note, I agree with the "suicde, thinking it's the best way to die" rather than the "to suffer like this would be best." Suicide, while the coward's way, is easier than bearing with pain when you have long since exhausted all coping methods.
lebih dari setahun yang lalu shadow-angel said…
laugh
Wow....that's really deep....you've got a gift for writing.
lebih dari setahun yang lalu Alex_the_Freak said…
wow that was awesome
lebih dari setahun yang lalu jazz411 said…
thats awesome!
lebih dari setahun yang lalu pixie09 said…
big smile
a tad depressing, but good none the less :)