Writer corner:) hi everybody! i hope you'll like the plot. let me know!! thank you!!!
In the tahun 4125 the Earth was still turning on itself. Apparently everything was the same as it was two thausand years ago. But it wasn't so. The democracy we got fighting was distroied oleh a man. After 15 years of wars, in 4025 Cyrus defeated free people and he established the tyranny. The whole world was controlled and the freedom dind't exist anymore. Everyone lost trust in everything, in love, in courage, in God. Most of people didn't know that there was a prophecy. It berkata that the humanity had to pass through a century of pain and fear to realize how important freedom was. But then in the 101st tahun four guys, with the Gift, could overthrow the government...
In the tahun 4125 the Earth was still turning on itself. Apparently everything was the same as it was two thausand years ago. But it wasn't so. The democracy we got fighting was distroied oleh a man. After 15 years of wars, in 4025 Cyrus defeated free people and he established the tyranny. The whole world was controlled and the freedom dind't exist anymore. Everyone lost trust in everything, in love, in courage, in God. Most of people didn't know that there was a prophecy. It berkata that the humanity had to pass through a century of pain and fear to realize how important freedom was. But then in the 101st tahun four guys, with the Gift, could overthrow the government...
We decided to camp out oleh a near forest with a small waterfall oleh it. My burnt hair from the api was irritating me so I decided to wash my hair in the waterfall. The water was cold, but I didn't care. Bruno felt my hair. I smiled warmly. I berkata like I wasn't a helper " So, where are your parents?' He berkata " Well, after I was born, a witch mencuri my mother, killed her, and I have no dad. So I'm an orphan" I thought ' I wish he could tell, he wouldn't have to do this, he wouldn't have to tell me bad mermories.' " I cinta you." berkata Bruno. " I cinta a person for a person." 'Well, I'm not a person. Im a helper! Why can't anda tell? Im a helper! I cinta a person for a person too! But you're not a person! But I cinta you!'Bruno berkata he would go out to the forest to get get some food. After my hair was washed, I sat down. Why can't he tell I'm a helper? But then, I heard a scream in the woods. I could tell who it was.... Bruno.
this is a heads-up on a story im writing. its about this kid in highschool wh ogoes into this haunted house,then,she turns into a vampire,slowy,and people begin to notice. its awesome.
heres the charecters.
vanessa:vampire girl.
duncan:vampiers girls brother
kylie:vamps bfff.
susan:mean girl
katie:posse (mean girl)
ashle:same as katie
mom:vamps mom
dad:vamps dad
um:those are the main charecters. details i havent thought of yet.ok,so,now anda know.ok,bye!
gotta type more,you cn leave now.
jfgfgddfddfffff vampire rule!
heres the charecters.
vanessa:vampire girl.
duncan:vampiers girls brother
kylie:vamps bfff.
susan:mean girl
katie:posse (mean girl)
ashle:same as katie
mom:vamps mom
dad:vamps dad
um:those are the main charecters. details i havent thought of yet.ok,so,now anda know.ok,bye!
gotta type more,you cn leave now.
jfgfgddfddfffff vampire rule!
Okay, well I want to start menulis a fantasi Book, and I have come up with a couple starting sentences, but I can't think which one I should start with, please give me your honest opinion on which one I should start with......
1. Mr.Johnson's math class joined together in room B3, and sat down at their desks like any other day, but it was anything but that.
2. Once upon a time, there was a school in Grand Rapids, called St. James and thats where our story begins.
3. The school hari at St. James in Grand Rapids started out like any other hari for the kids of Mr. Johnsons math class.
4. Our story begins with room B3, a classroom in St. James in Grand Rapids.
1. Mr.Johnson's math class joined together in room B3, and sat down at their desks like any other day, but it was anything but that.
2. Once upon a time, there was a school in Grand Rapids, called St. James and thats where our story begins.
3. The school hari at St. James in Grand Rapids started out like any other hari for the kids of Mr. Johnsons math class.
4. Our story begins with room B3, a classroom in St. James in Grand Rapids.