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Nhưng.Ái chà,cái chữ "nhưng" mới đáng ghét sao!Dòng đời xô đẩy,thế sự xoay vần.Tôi chẳng lãnh đạo được bao lâu.1 ngày kia,các nhà sản xuất vĩ đại đã chế ra SSM đời sau.Y hệt như phim hoạt hình đi từ 2D lên 3D,SSM 2D giờ đã thành già nua và cổ lỗ.Các đệ tử lũ lượt bỏ môn phái ra đi.Tất nhiên là đi về chỗ tụ hội các SSM 3D văn minh.Và chả cần nói thì ai cũng hiểu "văn minh" đầu tiên ở chỗ Kẻ-mà-ai-cũng-biết-là-ai-đấy!Vâng,chính là tên Vương Dương đáng ghét.
1 ngày,khi tôi vừa giăng status hình chữ vạch ra trên nền cát thì xuất hiện 1 loạt status hình mây 3D vây quanh!Tôi uất ức gỡ xuống,cả ngày hì hục chế ra status khác-đợi đến tối treo lên phục thù.
Đêm.Quẹt mồ hôi thở phào và bắn lên status hình nến cháy làm hết hơi mới xong.Chưa kịp tận hưởng vẻ êm đềm khi nhìn những đốm nến sáng in bóng xuống mặt sông,thì trong mắt tôi bùng lên những status ghép từ kim cương 3D lấp lánh!
Lần đầu tiên kể từ khi có SSM,tôi đi ngủ mà ko để lại 1 status nào trên trời.
Hey, I need honest opinion on how I write and where I need to improve, this is a part of one of the stories I've written. Thanks to anyone who can help. =)


Fallenfeather wove through a dark, leafy forest, sunlight just barely filtered through. He walked confidently through the spiralling trees, all of his sense trained to catch the deer in the clearing ahead. As the cokelat brown serigala neared his goal, he sunk lower and stared with bright cerulean eyes at the swift-footed dear ahead of him. His muscles tensed as he prepared to leap after the small deer when suddenly a silver shape charged...
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Brightness night


The sun sets, the moon raises, night has begun, the moon smiles down on us as it shines it's light. the stars twinkle in one oleh one, and hari is done. the moon full, round and big hums it's playful tune. the starts, so bright shine it's light for everyone in sight, as they hum in tune with the moon.

Out side looking in


Laughter sailing out of the window, friends talking quietly together, people dancing everywhere. and I'm on the out side looking in. All of them are havening fun as the twirl in the in crowd. All but one who looks out side, he smiles at me and i smile back...
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posted by EmoKidSteven
I am bored with love
and it's passionless limbs
that drape over my bed
in a lethargic state of impotence
while wearing the same red heart
my soul picked up hitchhiking
off highway serendipity
Now here we are
alone in togetherness
trying to build dreams
with two oleh fours and glue,
but even a home
won't tie us together
when our hearts live alone
Poetic vows cliched
into nothingness
like all words do, eventually
and we allowed our bodies to become another pair of hollow shadows that make cinta to a wall
instead of each other
and we wonder why
the mawar are dying
blood fills the faces of my fantasies
no mercy,you're trying to put me down
i can see clearly as you're taking a ayunan at me
come and i'll push anda to the ground
what are anda doing? what do anda think this is doing to me?
you're taking all my faith
what are anda leaving me now?!
i will make anda suffer just like anda made me suffer
i will watch anda screaming and begging for forgiveness
all my hate can not be bound
i will not be bound oleh your darkest demons
so try to take my life and put me to the ground
i will follow anda and torture anda and i'll watch anda screaming
look at the bloody faces smiling at you,taking anda down and making anda drown
i wanna kill anda the same way anda killed me
leaving me thoughtless
anda can try to tell me that i'm worthless
but anda can not break me down
gonna take anda down because nothing in this world is going to save me
posted by Karartegirl99
Once upon a time There was a girl named Abby. She loved to talk. Her teachers eventually stopped calling on her.

One day, she talked during a api while a kid in her class was telling her teacher where the 17 other children were.
The teacher couldn't here her, and the cari for the children lasted twelve hours. During that time, a gang mencuri five computers, three cars, seventeen dogs, and blackmailed the mayor into giving them seven grand.

Abby was expelled from the school.
When she told her parents, they imediately looked for a school for her to go to.
But the only school that gave her acceptence was the class in the juvinille deliquent center.

So she was halaman awal schooled.

But she caused her parents so much trouble that in a week they lost their all hair and were standing on the thin line between sanity and the nut house.

So they duct-taped her mouth shut.

THE END
posted by Flana_2
The forest was so beautiful. Even though it was raining, I thought of the sun peering through the trees. There were binatang all over. It was like jepang only slightly less busy. Lots of unfamiliar binatang gave Minrough high-fives and hugs. After a moment, I scanned his mind. Patients? I thought he berkata he was a soldier not a healer! After a minute, I demanded to know who they were.
“Patients”. Just like I thought.
“I thought anda berkata anda were a soldier at the war”!
“Yeah, a war of diseases”.
“But you’re only a kid! How could anda be a doctor”?
“Not a doctor, healer”.
“How...
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posted by Flana_2
Hi! I’m Lisa, the newest of the Hoycan clan. My story of how I got here is a tale of braveness, bullies, and ocean water. So snuggle up with a great friend and a big bowl of jagung meletus, popcorn and begin a journey like none other anda ever come by!! GO ON!!!
Two gorges binatang were running off into the moon light. Ones name was Lisa, the other was Brad.
“I cinta anda Lisa” Brad said
“I cinta anda too Brad”! They were a short distance away when RIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The school bel, bell rang for lunch. I awoken from my daydream and hurried out the door. Hi, I’m Lisa the average...
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posted by Funnygirl77
 cinta bites
love bites
Zack was still in his car, wanting so bad to go back to Kisa. He walked up to his house, opened the door and was immediately sucked into a vision. Kisa was going to get kidnapped and it was all because of Zack. Kisa got up and walked to her window, when she opened it she saw two guys in black coming up towards her.
She ran and locked the door, and all the windows, for some reason she just didn't fill safe. She opened her closet to hide, when a voice beside her said: "That won't work. The can smell anda the can hear your jantung beat." Kisa sung around ready to save her self, not looking at who...
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posted by TeamRosalieHale
6: Uninvited

Three tall men, dressed in dark cloaks, stopped upon seeing the girls and simply stared. “Why have we stopped?” called a male voice from behind them. Suddenly, a man appeared from behind them, though they followed him like a shadow. “Ah. Company.” Rosalie and Alice looked at each other then back to the men. “No need to fear” the man that had come from behind the three much larger ones said. “We come in peace.”
“All of you?” Rosalie asked wearily, eyeing the three men suspiciously.
The man smiled and turned to the trio. “Stand down” he berkata firmly, though...
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"this cant be!" Vanessa screamed.it was so loud,the walls began to shake.

"Vanessa,"her mom said."Come down! anda need to learn to use anda powers,and to control them.

"bu,bu,bu------This is all a dream!yeah,in a second,ill wake up,and not be a vampire."

She blinked 3 times,but she was still there.Not in bed.

"but,but,but,but,vampires aren't real!"

"thats what i thought,too.But,its true,its all true.You are a vampire,Vanessa,and anda cannot tell anybody,ok?"her mom berkata with wide eyes.

"ok,"vanessa said."i understand. but really,she didt.



the selanjutnya day,Vanessa didnt want to go to school.This was becuase...
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hey this is the l;atest chapter to the story, it is set when Nessie isfive months pregnant...x Hope anda enjoy and keep your eys peeled for the selanjutnya chapter...x
Amber/Twilightsauce

I slipped mums wedding dress over my head, it fitted perfectly. Mum smiled and sighed as she wiped a joyous tear from my eye.
“Don’t cry baby, Alice will kill us if anda ruin your makeup she has spent all morning getting anda ready.” She laughed looking at me with a delighted expression on her face,
“Oh mum! I am so happy; Jake is waiting down there for me isn’t he?” I asked nervously. I had felt a little queasy...
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The wind blowing through my hair was an exhilarating feeling. Jasper had taught me how to ride his bike a couple of months ago; I was surprised when he berkata yes because he was usually quite responsible. I hadn’t been much good at first but after a few hours I had got the hang of it, no one else knew that I could ride his bike and it was nice to be able to take it out for a private drive now and again.
When I reached Forks, instead of slowing down I sped up, making sure no one saw me. I parked outside the chemist and rushed inside. I knew that I had to do this but my stomach was filled with...
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posted by I_love_Mikey
It would be nice if the world worked like a remote.

Where, if anda were in a bad situation, anda could pause it, and still keep moving yourself.
Where, if anda happened to be in a bad situation, anda could press “pause” and think of what to do next.
Where anda could completely abandon certain aspects of life, like selecting a different episode.
But, if anda skip an episode, anda don’t learn what anda need to learn from it, and anda get confused on the selanjutnya one. You’ll be behind, and unable to catch back up. Because anda just can’t stand to watch that episode that comes first.
It’d be nice if we...
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posted by TeanRose424
 this is just somthing that describes me :)
this is just somthing that describes me :)
I could feel everything i could feel my muscels ripple. I could feel the warmth flooding around me. I could feel my joints streghthen. I could feel myself becoming a god. It feltjust as he had said. i couldnt beleive the plesure.

He looked at me then. His face looked concern. I had been moaning from the pleasure. I had been calling out for more. The pleasure was leaving me though i could feel it. It had been many days i could feel it. I was relunctent to have it leave me, i was relunctent to have the feeling of my life leave. It was unbelievable.

Zach looked at me in wonder. i stared back...
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posted by coolie
Both Crack-a-bottle and Shatter-a-glass were teens, and their names had a lot in common. Crack-a-bottle and Shatter-a-glass. Hee Hee. The pertanyaan right now is how the heck do we get out of here?” berkata bill. Shatter-a-glass searched in her pockets. hey my phone, the only phone in the world that lets anda text and do nothing else,” berkata Shatter-a-glass. How will that help?” asked Crack-a-bottle. I could text a plane to fly over here and pick us up!” answered Shatter-a-glass. Shatter-a-glass was thinking for a moment. She didn’t have a clue of what number she text so she did every combination...
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 For the first couple months, that's what it really feels like; darkness, always there like the anak anjing, anjing anda always wished for to follow anda around.
For the first couple months, that's what it really feels like; darkness, always there like the puppy you always wished for to follow you around.
It always starts with darkness. Just like the rumors that vampire were made to sign Satan's book with blood as the registration, it was thought that a vampire's soul was consumed oleh darkness. For the first couple months, that's what it really feels like; darkness, always there like the anak anjing, anjing anda always wished for to follow anda around. Sadly, I never had a puppy, so this was all awkwardly new to me.
"That's how it's going to be for a while." Adrian told me one hari while I woke up from a deep sleep, facing the sunlight. I had forgotten that we were now affected oleh that sunlight lebih than humans....
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posted by sapphire007
I cinta my mum. lebih than anything but my dad has always been my favourite. It’s not that I cinta him lebih than mum but he’s fun and understanding, he has wonderful saran and awful jokes. Two weeks ago, dad left. He left mum. He left me. Mum’s sad. She’s not up to much lately. I know she’s angry at him for leaving but she misses him. She’s unhappy and lonely.
    Dad talked to me before he went. He told me to study hard, stay healthy and enjoy my life. He made me promise to look after mum. I think he’d be disappointed in me if he heard her crying at night. I...
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Two things were killing me at the moment.The fact that It was raining like crazy on his horrible to school,the hari of school where I had to face my dreaded ex and try to hold back either my tears atau punching him in the face.by the way,I completely wanted to do both at this moment.The detik was that whole desperately in cinta moment with Juaney.I was mad the the "mystery girl" that Juan had fallen so hard for and she have no freaking idea.I hate seeing Juan like this.Yes at the moment he is very proactive of me but I can tell now that he just doing that so I won't look into atau figure his true...
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 "You know... I'm not...the one anda love...so...that's why...it's time for me... to leave......" -Zelos
"You know... I'm not...the one you love...so...that's why...it's time for me... to leave......" -Zelos
There have been so many things that have happened to me in the past, present, and future, that I have had a hard time remembering them all. For a vampire, that would seem unbearably stupid; I mean, we live forever, so our brains should be lebih adept at handling the hardcore memories. At times I actually thought I remembered my childhood, atau even WWI if I took a deep thought into it. But no, the only thing that came into my mind as clearly as the darkness that surrounds me now is this:
Chloe's eyes.
Chloe Cassalani, the one person I knew from the start upon meeting, was a threat to me. The instant...
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posted by KatiiCullen94
This is what i would say to my jacob, if i can even say he is mine.


How do i even start off, do i start off saying that i dont know how to start off,or do i pour my jantung out,that first word, i dont know anymore..Because with you, nothing is the way it seems, atau the way it was before. Everything changes even the way im supposed to write this, you've confused me.
OK,, i think is this part where i pour my jantung out right?? if not. im going to sound.. odd. but who cares now? not you. anda wont even read this my love.
ok here i go, keep me from falling.
I meet anda on a saturday, on the first saturday...
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