menulis Article: freedom story

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posted by rory2011

the sun is almost disappeared
when people were doing their normal works
there was something under the ground calling
only the good people heard the voice
they crowded to see what's going on

it was that beautiful princess ,calling under the ground
she berkata that she was locked over than 40 years
and she's ready to use her magic for the person
who can give her ,her freedom
people ran to every single inch in my country
screaming :"freedom ,freedom ,freedom"

it was raining ,but people never give up
it's raining dumdum ,buckshot ,from every where
the good people looked around them
there was a black kuda ride it a strange creature
but they didn't care they keep saying "freedom" till the last person alive

I was standing there ,looking at people dying
creatures eyes were having fun seeing the ground drinking people blood

there's nobody left
just me ,standing alone
the creatures were looking at me
smiling
I felt that this is the end
they are coming for me
I started screaming "freedom ,freedom"
I felt so happy and powerful

I saw her again
the beautiful girl ,she was happy
I can feel her warm
she told me that I did what she want me to do

they are here near me
I closed my eyes for a while then I open it
I were laying on the ground
my blood make me feel warm

the beautiful girl is standing near me
she hold my hand
her hands were very cold
she waited me till I closed my eyes
then she start flying
waking the sun to shine
the creature burned oleh the sun light
it's stop raining
the sun light built the city again
people blood make the bunga grow faster
the princess lived in her castle
her kastil, castle were in every where
in every jantung
she won't go down again
cause it's our dignity and pride

well it's not poem ,I have no idea what it is ,I were just watching the news ,and the words start came out oleh itself

hAyLeY12547 likes this

hgfan5602 Love the emotion. You should try more for better punctuation. Otherwise, great.

rory2011 thanx ,I knew I should but this is the first time I write something like that ,I'm glad that you like it

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The Poetic Works of C.M. Wishine

posted by OneFoggyNight

(Please do note that these are poems I wrote in like two menit so yeah they might not be that great...)

***You'll never be alone***

Even through the toughest times
Someone will always be there
If anda have friends
You’ll never be solo
Even if it doesn’t go right
Even if anda think anda might die
If anda have friends
You’ll make it to the end
Even though it all seems to fade
Receding in the darkest night
Having friends
Makes it all go away
Times may be bad
Times may be good
But if anda have friends
You’ll never be alone
______________________________

***No Going Back***

Believe not this lie ive told
I am not...

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Three possible introductions for Sisters (working title)

posted by housefrk

For those of anda who didn't see my pick, I'm trying to decide whether I should reveal at the beginning of my book, that a main character is going to die at the end. These are three versions of opening paragraphs that I've written. If there's one that anda like the best, let me know in the komentar atau in the pick.

1. This one gives away the most information, including when she dies and how she's killed:
I had no idea when I started at Skip’s Burger Grill, that on October 22, 2009, sitting there in the walk-in refrigerator, huddled together with my colleagues for warmth, my life would be changed...

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Today's a lost Cause - A poem

posted by Sweet_Pants

Give away to the morning

Light is here

Look away from the mourning

Is she gone, is she still...?

And let the hari go ahead

Without you

Find a place, a dark space

To hide you

What’s a day, a sunny day

To you?

Fade away, let the your rainclouds

Guide you

There goes the downpour

Long gone your hello...

Find it in you

To make that last stand

It’s a silent drive

It’s her very last one.

Here come the clear skies

There goes your fare well...

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Bleed - A poem

posted by Sweet_Pants

Find the casual sun day

Starting with the stumbling wake-up, the strained smile

Smelling the hurried breakfast, bile up her throat

Shrinks away from it, queasy, holding her stomach

Never letting it leave her, the emptiness filling up

Inside her, determined to make it last

Heavy textbooks never all that’s holding her down

Uncertainty sawing through her, the only thing filling

What she considers a burden, but how could hunger

Be so cruel?

It’s drilling into her, snarling, never dulling

Never letting up, just a little longer

A little longer...

She dry heaves, it’s a tiny stall

And the walls are closing...

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Different Worlds - Chapter 3

posted by Bella_Swan3

If anda spend your life wishing to die, willing to end it yourself, even, and the chance was given, would anda take it? If anda had chosen that fate, when your breath became slow and painful, would anda still wish that on yourself? In the shadow of death, would the reality of it dawn on you, when it was just too late?

A life of darkness was not one worth much, to Taylor.

She had been so desperate to die. Willing to do it herself, had it been possible.

She lifted the pisau to her bared forearm.

The flat, cold edge of the blade pierced the pale skin of her wrist. She felt no pain from it.

The midnight...

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missing chapter 3 restrictions.

posted by kayleebabee

The flight from New york to Rome took an excrutiatingly long time to land and all the while i was getting lebih and lebih annoyed with Edward. "as soon as we land we will run to Volterra okay." I muttered quickly braiding my hand through Edwards and sighing contentedly.
"I know that it's just what if we are too late?" his voice broke on the word late.
"we won't be i promise." I didn't know if that was true but i was trying to soothe him i better not voice my true opinion out loud. I half dragged a depressed Edward through the terminals and growled sharply as I saw the bright sunlight outside.
"Oh...

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missing chapter 2. Race.

posted by kayleebabee

Edward and i made the flight to new york with moments to spare.
while the girl scanned our passports through the database i tried to call carlisle. Again.
"Edward your growling stop it." i muttered to low for the human woman to hear.
"right sorry do anda think we will make it in time?" his words were cracked and strained in his effort to keep it together.
"I hope so Edward, I really do." i sighed delicately.
we got to our seats on the plane edward was muttering a stream of profanities.
"It is faster than running." I tried to placate him.
"i know that." he hissed at me.
"Hey don't take this out on me."...

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Different Worlds - Chapter 2

posted by Bella_Swan3

She reached out and made contact with a brick wall.

Careful not to draw attention to herself, she scaled the building and hurled herself over the lip.

Without pausing, she ran across the rooftops, leaping the small gap between them. The pain was worsening oleh the minute.

She froze, hearing two voices coming from the alley below. She crouched low, peering over the edge, her heightened senses zeroing in on the conversation.

She calculated their positions, and leaped down, her figure a blur. She landed, pinning her first victim down. She clapped her hand over his mouth, stifling his scream. With...

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High Skool Rainbows:chapter 2-part one

posted by summerfrog

Chapter 2:Getting to know him
Murphy
I spent break alone in the perpustakaan tiring to find a book I've wanted to read for a while-Pride and Prejudice.
It would have been nice to spend break with Savannah,catching up what all happened during the summer,but she had to spend it with her populer friends. I never liked them and they have never been nice to me. I was always too shy and geeky, I guess.
Stacey was the head of the group,the team captain. I remember when I met her-in third grade. She pushed me down to get to the swings first on the playground. That doesn't matter anymore, except that she...

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Proper Blood

posted by genyva

New Smells

The smell. There was nothing like it the first hari at school. I looked to my brother. This was our first school tahun in Maine. The weather was crappy all the time but it was worth it I am not really a night person. Whose to say I have to do everything like my parents. This is the new millennium not 15 hundreds.

My family is different. Other then the fact that we have lived for hundreds of years, we are also vampire. 40 years ago, the human world found out about our world. Slowly rights were made to fit our needs, and schools were open for the young and unadvised. Humans could fall...

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Wanting Someone - Chapter Sixteen

posted by Lindy52

Chapter Sixteen

The selanjutnya hari and after Church, Sean came over to see the girls and while seeing him playing happily with the girls and with Boyd on the right side of her chair, Jamie was thinking about breaking Mac’s promise and going ahead with the makan malam together with Sean but she couldn’t because she promised her little girl and don’t want to see her jantung being broken and so will Michael if he finds out about the makan malam with Sean and his wife.

Also, when Sean turned to her and gave her a slight grin on his face before heading back with the girls, Jamie also smiled at him and after...

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My Story : Human, chapter 1

posted by sweetpea92

    CHAPTER ONE
    Ugh. I groaned internally as I woke up. My head was pounding, and broken gambar were swirling around behind my eyelids. I had no idea where I was, atau how I had gotten here. I refused to open my eyes and find out, atau give any other sign that consciousness had found its way back to me again. Not knowing exactly where and when I was was a dangerous business for me. Very dangerous.
    You see, the last thing I remember before the blackness hit, is that I was running…
    My legs were on fire. They...

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The last menit (prologue)

posted by nEvEr-tHe-sAme

The rain fell silently as I layed there waiting. Not like I had a choice though. But it had seemed lebih like a nightmare than reality. This wasn't how I imagined it... I never even got the chance to say goodbye. Let alone even explain what happened. I needed to wake up... from this nightmare, I tried, but never could... never did.

Life lesson: I learned that trusting people isn't what it actually seemed. There's lebih to it than anda would ever imagine, I mean, it's not just trusting people, but it's who to trust. How can we tell? There might be some ways we think we can tell, but those ways......

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The Last Stand- Segment of Chapter 1

posted by DoctorSpud

Chapter 1

Artemis Galchowen was going nowhere fast. At the age of 23, he was fired from his job as a theatre consumptions stand steward. At the age of 24, he was living with his two cousins, who worked for the detik most successful auto dealer in the nation. At the age of 26, he was kicked out of their house for destroying their $200,000 Mercedes while on a drunken rampage.
At the age of 29, he was working at a secondhand komik jepang book toko and also worked at IHOP for a few lebih bucks. He lived at Cricket Slope Farms development in a tiny condo with his two supportive friends, Zeke and Megan....

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Broken Dreams Chapter 28

posted by BellaSwan636

Shaun

It feels like a piercing physical wound; to see her leave me again.

I cannot access the part of me that handles realisation. Serena called her Ashleigh. That child in her arms. Is mine.

My forehead is resting on the edge of the hard granite countertop, and I am trying to ignore the card that is currently lying right in front of me. I already know what is printed on it oleh heart.

Serena Meyer

Gaurdian Ad Litem, New York.

serenashleigh@mweb.com

And then a number scrawled on in her own handwriting.

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Her eyes haunt me when I close my own. Everything...

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Destiny(Modified) oleh isabellaashley

posted by Isabellaashley

PREFACE

The woods were filled with silence and I looked around for any signs of the slayer. As I heard the leaves on the ground rustling, I turned around and there he appeared from the treetops of a nearby pohon and he gave me a sly smile which sent shivers down my spine before slowly approaching me and my jantung was pounding inside my chest. I was vulnerable as there wasn’t anyone to protect me and I knew that I was going to die here, alone. Please let this be over fast, I thought to myself.
Every step that he took towards me was another step closer to death. His long, black hair was flowing...

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Daddy

posted by Sweet_Pants

A/N: Ok, this is just a short, about 500 word drabble I came up with. It's about 7-year-old Alice and her drunk derpressed father, called, of course, 'Daddy'. It's not much, but I though I'd post it. Constructive critisizm is welcome.

Please rate and comment.
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The smell of his breath came off in waves of grief and alcohol mixed into what could be described as inner turmoil. Although Alice barely gave a thought to the bottle of whiskey in his hand, as she was lebih preoccupied with not throwing up from the smell of her father she should have gotten...

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A Skating Adventure To Remember

posted by Katiegirl

The snow is falling on this cold blistery afternoon.
Just up ahead, in the clearing I could see a young woman gloriously and delicately skating. Skating, as if she had skated her entire life.
Suddenly, I began remembering an adventure that seemed so many moons ago.
Beyond the horizon I could see myself walking briskly toward the solid, cold ice that kept me Frozen in silence.
I could hear the ice crackling, like jagung meletus, popcorn being popped, beneath my shaking feet.
As I adventured onto to the ice, I felt a cold chill creep up my back that seemingly felt like a warning sign to...

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Wanting Someone - Chapter Five

posted by Lindy52

Chapter Five

When Jamie stared and was speechless the moment she saw the handsome man in the doorway, that man looked at her for a few detik and still holding the sepakbola ball, he berkata to her with that grin of his, “So, this really your ball?” In return, Jamie didn’t answered his question, she just kept looking at him and figuring out what her mother was doing, Mac decided to be the person who will do the talking and from below, she looked up to the man and berkata to him, “Yeah, anda are holding my ball!”

After hearing that, the man looked down at Mac and when he squatted down to Mac’s...

Trapped in my own time chapter 6

posted by dragonrider

"Uh Starr aren't anda going to take me back to my own time?" Elliot asks
I glance at him "No the time travel part broke when I turned it off besides didn't anda want to stay here?" I ask
Elliot looks down "Not really but isn't there other time machines?"
"Yeah but they can't get ahold of them so they are going after me. It's good and bad. It's bad because now I can't get anda back to your own time. It's good because now they can't do those sick experiments So yeah anda and I my friend are trapped in my own time," I say
"Hey do anda think that if anybody is membaca this they would laugh because...