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This is coninuing from the last article, i try and keep u all happy oleh doing a little bit off chapter one, this is the third part of chapter one out of 6.
thx for the support, i just started an jam yang lalu and now, i cant seem to stop typing! heeheehee. i was planing to use this rough draft as a base line for my real book, but i cant get my book published until i am older so i thought may aswell let them see the rough copy. its not as good as my real copy, soo sorry. enjoy x







I woke up in a room, not my room, but someone else’s. I groaned, my body was stiff and very sore.
“She‘s finally waking.” I didn’t recognise the voice, but it was a girls.
“We can finally get going.” another voice, male this time.
“Shut up, Emmet.” I recognised this voice it was Erik.
“Erik.” I groaned.
“I‘m here.” he stroked my hair.
I tried to open my eyes, but I was too sore. It seemed that I was lying on a mattress, it was very comfortable. The thick heavy blanket was to thick for my liking, I was sweating already. I tried to find Erik’s hand, but instead of finding his hand, I felt something cold, rough, hard and it was shaped like a gun!
I gasped and put my hand under the blanket.
“Aw, frig sake Emmet, anda could of put that somewhere else.” Erik complained and moved away from me. I kept my eyes closed hoping that maybe it wasn’t a gun. I felt someone stroking my hair again, must be Erik. I was quiet for a long time. The hand that was stroking my hair, was now stroking my face, neck and arms.
“When will that girl wake up Erik. Look at the time.”
“She’ll wake up when she’s ready, Victoria.” Erik replied softly.
“Yeah well, I’m ready to go.” The girl named Victoria berkata harshly.
“well go, we’ll meet anda later.”
I heard the shuffle of footsteps fade away. I lay there maybe for about an jam and then I heard Erik sigh.
“Come on Mel, wake up.”
I opened my eyes slowly, still feeling really sore. I was in a dark room, Erik’s face was right in front of me smiling. He stroked my cheek. “Hello.” he whispered.
I tried to get up, but I couldn’t. so I gave up.
“Where, where am I?” I asked.
My eyes scanned the dark room. I could see everything even though it was very dark. There was another tempat tidur beside mine, a wardrobe in the corner. Their was a rocking chair beside the window and It was night time.
“Mel, I’m afraid I’ve done something.”
I turned at looked at Erik. “Yeah, anda have. Why on earth did anda write that letter? What did it mean that, I’m leaving? ”
“Look, Mel you’re the one. I can feel it. I cinta anda and I want anda to come and live with me. But I have done something else.” he took my hand, and somehow I was standing up. We went to the far wall. It was smooth and it was a dark purple colour.
“I want anda to climb up this wall.” He stroked the wall.
“You what?” I shrieked.
“Look, watch me.”
I could see Erik, smiling. And then he was climbing the wall. He was climbing a wall, using his hands and feet. When he reached the top, he jumped down.
“How did anda do that?” I asked. Stroking the wall.
“I am a vampire.”
I didn’t believe him at first but then I was able to do all these cool things and I realised I was a vampire to. I fainted when I understood what was going on. The selanjutnya hari we went
to the airport. I got out of the car, and went to the boot. Erik kindly packed my clothes and some of my beloved items. I took out my two blue suitcases and set them on the suitcase trolleys. Erik set his suitcases on mine and started pushing the trolley towards the doors.
“Where‘ re we going?” I asked. He didn’t exactly tell me where we were going but, there’s no point going back to my mum because I am a completely different person even though I feel the same inside, on the outside, I have changed so much. I have become really beautiful, my skin is as white as the colour it’s self. My voice has become lebih softer, which was hard to believe, how a dangerous, evil, sick vampire could be soft and sweet. I can climb walls, run really fast and I can lure humans to me. I am very strong. I can read peoples mind, but I need to be touching them, to be able to get into their heads. I can torture humans and vampire using my mind. It is cool being a vampire, having lots of cool features, but the down side is, not ever being able to be with my family and I have to suck humans blood. I shivered at the thought.
“Where are going to Alaska.” Erik answered.
I put my arm around his waist and set my head on his shoulder. I may as well get used to being kind with Erik, he did say I was the one he wanted and that he loved me. He put his arm over my shoulder. I helped him steer the trolley. We were sitting on the airplane, I was sitting beside Erik. I was pretty tried and I decided maybe I needed some sleep. It was 11pm after all, the great thing is vampire can sleep and go out in the sunlight.
I yawned. “I‘m gonna go to sleep.” I warned Erik.
He stoked my cheeks. “You do look tired.”
“Hmm,” I yawned again. I set my head on his shoulder and he wrapped his arms around me. That’s how my new life began.





Three days later...
I woke up from the dream. That was how I became an vampire, and I would never forget it. Erik was awake looking down at me, smiling. I felt sick, how could this guy atau should I say vampire, smile at me, after what he has done to me. That reminded me, he never did tell me how I was turned into a vampire.
I sat up, Erik sat beside me and took my hand. “How did I become a vampire?” I asked.
He laughed. I looked at him, giving him a dirty look. “I don’t find it funny, Erik.” I folded my arms.
“Sorry. Okay, well all I had to do was…”
“Was?”
“Suck your blood.” he looked down playing with the nightgown I was wearing.
“Well, I know that, but how did anda suck my blood exactly?” I asked.
“Well, the only way we can suck out your blood is oleh scraping the left side of your neck and sucking all the blood out, until anda are free from it, then I have to lick anda scar and cut open the right side of my neck and pore a few drops into your neck.”
I didn’t understand one thing he said, but I didn’t bother asking him to explain it again. I put my hand up to the left side of my neck.




to be continued.......
Chapter 7- Return of my Nightmares

May 1919

I approached the train station slowly. Abigail and Tom were accompanying me. The past two years had actually been quite peaceful without the constant stream of beatings and disapproval of each movement I made.

We waited as the train came to a complete stop in front of us and women and children all around us flooded around the doors to greet their loved ones. I was one of the few who stood still staring at the train. All the others were elderly, too old to rush meneruskan, ke depan atau I was sure they would be doing so. The crowd slowly cleared and I spotted Charles...
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posted by callejahLUVSed
sorry i took so long, i got grounded.. LONG STORY! anyway, hope this chapter is okay ! comment!!!

CHAPTER EIGHT- Allies

“Hey, Edward, can we sit selanjutnya to you?”, I asked.
“Sure, sit here”, berkata Edward. I sat down selanjutnya to Alice but Edward stopped me.
“Steph, sit here”, he said, as he patted the kursi selanjutnya to him. Jasper gave me a look and then my thoughts weren’t my own anymore.
Sis, Jasper thinks that Edward likes you.. want me to tell him anything? Emmett asked.
He thinks? I asked back. I waited a few detik until Emmett grin.
He knows replied Emmett, and I saw a smile hiding in the...
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posted by surfergal
The following morning Alice woke me up for school. I was putting on perfume when cody knocked on my door.
"Come in". I said.
Hey, anda Ready ? He ask
Yeah, Old on I have to brush my teeth I told him.
Ok. He berkata as he went towards my tempat tidur to sit down. Once I was done brushing my teeth, Cody grabbed my bag and put me on his back and toted me down the stairs. My cruches were downstairs because Carlisle didn't want me to go up and down them. Cody help me out to his car, my was totalled sadly. When we got to school cody walked me to class except he didnt leave my side when we got there. It was still...
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posted by pie-102
Nessie's pov
Aunt Alice was getting my Mom ready for high school today because Alice thought Mom would put on something weird .I'm excited because this is my first hari of high school ever.The only thing i'm worried about is rememberin that everybody is my adopted brother atau sister oh and the fact that Jacob wasn't going to be there I am not sure but I think i'm falling for him if only I knew how he felt about me maybe i'll get Daddy to find out for me.I'll ask when I get downstairs.Alice asked is everybody ready to go I replied yes and so did evertbody else.Down to the garasi we went Mom,Dad...
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posted by surfergal
Ok, So I thought I took the news pretty well. But as Emmet told me I was sitting on the tempat tidur when he walk in and I what seemed liek it was in a trance aka I didnt talk for 5 mintues new record for me. Emmet finally got me to speak and then I just went to sleep. The selanjutnya morning Alice came in and woke me up for school but I told her I didnt feel like going, when she walked out of the room I feel back asleep. it was around 11aam when i woke up oleh phone telling me i had a text message. It was max asking if I wanted to come over and have a movie hari because he had the hari off.I texted him back saying...
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posted by BuffyFaithFan1
[u][b]Once Bruised, Twice Broken[b][u]

"Go Into The Storm brave One...That's Where Life Is!"

[u][b]Chapter One: Remember December[b][u]
So lets get things straight...
My life is okay for a fifteen tahun old girl I guess. My name is Eve Barnes. And I live two menit away from my school, here in North Carolina. My parents died a tahun yang lalu in a car crash. It was a head on collision. This person was backing out of there driveway, my parents were taking a short cut home, and they swerved out of the way so they didn't hit them. And along came a truck and BAM! They died. I was with my aunt and uncle...
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posted by nessienjake
I dreamt thıs ...fan fıctıon whıle ı was ın a aıroplane to Australıa and told ıt to my sıster she hand wrote ıt ın her dıary and know ı mencuri ıt and typed ıt warnıng dont be too hard she trıed ıt and shes smaller than me.(lol but ı trıed to ımprove ıt and make ıt longer)
CHAPTER 1 ILLUSION
İ was walking quıckly through the clouded place ın the mıddle of the nıght ın L.A
ı had my MP3 open and ı was sıngıng whıle steppıng on the wet grass.
ı thought ı heard somethıng so ı looked back stıll walkıng...ıt was only a cat lookıng for food ın the garbage.İ...
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posted by rachel-rathbone
!!!IF U HAVE ALL READY READ THIS SKIP TO CHAPTER TWO FOR THE selanjutnya PART OF THE STOTY.!!!!!!!!!!

chapter one
"oh please mum ellie is my best friend please let here stay" renesmee begged
"nessie this life just isnt a place for a little girl to be"i hated it but it was true i even called her nessie. she looked at the floor her long black eyelashes cating a shadow on her cheeks, her long bronze hair falling on her face.
"ask our dad" i berkata sighing pushing the pertanyaan on to someone else i couldnt stand hurting here.
******
"nessie anda cleaned your room write sheel be her in 5 miniutes i can here the...
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posted by surfergal
I turned around to see anda had caught me, I was expecting Cody tob there but he wasnt. I told him Thanks. no prob he berkata Im Michael. Well thanks Michael, Im addi. Can I help anda to class? Michael ask. Yeah that would be great. I said. He ask, So what is a beautiful girl doing in Forks, I take it your new to this whole ice and snow problem we have? Yeah, Im new. Yeah we didnt get a lot of snow of ice where i lived. I said. So anda lived "down south" then? he said. Yeah I live in Florida. Thats cool. he said. so why are anda in Forks? he ask? My sorta brother is in the Coast Guard and he got transfered...
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posted by VAMPirella1997
End of part 8:
I laughed. Edward glanced down at me, confused. I grinned back at him.

"that was fun. We should do that lebih often."

Edward snorted. "Fun? I thought anda might be in serious danger," now it was my turn to snort.

"Honestly, Edward. It was fun, though. Admit it. Once anda knew i wasn't going to get killed." I laughed. He joined in.

"yes, i suppose it was kind of funny."

"Did anda see his face?" I said, "He was terrified of you!" I immitated what the boy's expression had looked like, and we laughed in unison.

part 9:
Alice skipped to our side.

"Are anda ready to go catch our selanjutnya plane?"...
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posted by Sk8bordNewMoon
Collin's POV
I had to go halaman awal first but, I needed to morph. I quickly let her off, she had the weirdest and cutest look on her face. Then she relized and berkata "oh". She turned around, I morphed quickly and put on my pants. I snuck up behind her and put my hands over her eyes. Guess who, I said. Collin! she said. Let me go in through my bedroom window and then I will tell anda when anda can knock on the front door and come. Is it okay to come in? she said. Won't it be weird with your parents there? No, my dad cleared the problem up with my Mom. well I hope, he did. It must be nice to have real...
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posted by Lucian66
I recently read an post from Twilight widower on Twilight Widowers Anonymous( it's a support site for husbands, boyfriends and life partners of Twilight addicts). It cracked me up and i want to share it with you.


Onward and Upward

Firstly, please accept my apologies for the incredibly tardy post. As anda can imagine, since
the foto of Robert Pattinson standing shirtless in Italy were released, it has been very difficult for me to get near the computer.

(I thought I could sneak a post in earlier this week, but then - alas - the New Moon trailer came out. Add to that the particularly fine weather...
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posted by surfergal
When I got into the car, emmet scared the crap out of me he was sitting in the backseat. I berkata " here Emmet anda drive". "no Max will notice if someone is sitting in the front passenger kursi addi" Emmet said. Okay fine I said. When we got far enough away we switched seats to where emmet was driving. I started crying I couldn't control it. Awe Addi, please dont cry on me He said. Do anda think I'm crying on cause i want to? I ask but continued before he could answer. I can't control this Emmet, I can't stop feeling like crap. I just, I don't know anymore. Addi its ok, he said. I'm sorry I shouldnt...
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posted by Sk8bordNewMoon
For all the Zoey McDaniel fan, Should I do a POV in some one elses few of Zoeys life? Like Alice, Jasper, Bella, Emmett, Esme, Carisle, atau Collin. atau do yall want me to keep doing Zoeys POV?


Thanks!!!!!

Sk8bordNewMoon
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posted by surfergal
I got up the stairs and just started crying quietly. I knew everyone could hear me but I didnt feel like talking about it atau thinking about it atau anything. I put on some sweat pants and I found one of Cody's long sleeved t-shirt in my closet I put it on just smelling his scent on it. I just layed in my tempat tidur and cried, soon I feel asleep. When I woke up my face was sticky feeling from dried tears. I couldnt believe what had happened yesterday afternoon. i really thouhgt he was going to be my firend but I guess not. I walked atau hobbled down the stairs and into the kitchen. Alice and Esme were...
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posted by surfergal
When I finished my homework it was around 11pm. I was tired but I was
understood it unlike usual. I went to sleep and I woke up in the
middle of the night really thirsty and sickish feeling. I went and got
a glass of water and then Carlisle walked down the stairs and I asked
him if he would take my temperature. He berkata yes and for me to go sit
on the dipan, sofa while he went to get his bag. When he returned he took my
temperature and berkata that I had a slight fever and then I just had to
run to the bathroom. I had never puked so much in my life. When I was
done I just layed there in the floor. I...
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posted by surfergal
I
new is was cold out but I didn't care to much. I freshened my makeup
and he came inside to get me and he was talking to Carlisle, as I was
walking down the stairs Alice told me that Carlisle is playing a
fatherly role. I laughed a little bit but not to where Max would
notice. Carlisle told me to be back before 12 am that is. I berkata hi to
max and gave him a hug.

I made small talk in the way to the beach. It wasn't much though. When
we got there it was way colder than I thought it was going to be, but I
didn't complain. I ask him how was the coast guard going and he berkata
good he berkata that he...
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posted by surfergal
I found Jasper and he ask me why I was so nervous I told him that a
boy just walks through the house without even knocking. He berkata oh
that's Jacob he umm is umm talk to Alice about it please... Okay I
said. So I went and found Alice sitting on the dipan, sofa watching Nessie
and this stranger play with her. I went and sat oleh Alice and wispered
in her ear asking who was this boy. She told me that this is Jacob
Black and that's when he looked over and I finally figured out where I
saw him it was at the kantin, diner back when I was in the coast guard. He
said nice to meet anda again Addi. I berkata anda too. Alice...
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posted by surfergal
Addi’s POV

Me and Renesme were having fun at scrabble she was so smart it was
amazing. Luckily Edward and Bella walked through the door and that
ended our game. Although Renesme berkata "she wasn't going to let me forget
that she beat me at scrabble". Bella told me that "Esme and Carlisle
would like to see me at the house" so I told "Renesme that I would be
back later to play with her some more".

When I reached the house Carlisle and Esme were waiting for me in the
living I was scared that they were going to tell me that something was
wrong atau that I was going to have to leave. Carlisle started...
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posted by surfergal
When I walked in the room Edward asked “if I would like to have a piano
lesson” and I berkata “I would cinta too”. We walked over to the piano and we
sat down on the bench and he pulled out meriam in d major I was so
happy I loved this song. We sat at the piano for nearly an jam and oleh
that time I was playing the first 4 measures. I was so excited! I told
him “thanks” and he berkata that “we would learn lebih tomorrow”. Emmet was
making fun if me because as I got up off the bench I stretched my back
and hurt my ribs. I ask “Emmet why every time I do something” he laughs “
and...
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