I wrote a poem can u plz tell me if its good?

Im just a girl
he was just a boy
thats what everyone else saw....
but they saw so much lebih in each other..
to him she wasnt just a girl she was an malaikat that had taken his heart
to her he wasnt just a boy he was her soulmate, who'd left his jantung with her....
it hurts me because all that cinta is gone he's found somone new who he has diberikan his jantung to.......
cinta is rare
hold on to it.........
my jantung is broken.....
in to little peices......
im tampilkan you.....
what you've done to me......