*this is my TDI komik jepang crossover between Total Drama Island and Ranma 1/2. I cinta both the tampil and graphic novel series, so I decided to write the first chapter of the detik book and see what anda all think of it*
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The hiss and patter of the rain was the only thing heard outside of the Tendo house. The lights in the town were turned off for the night, and anda could almost feel the still of the silence...
Little circles of water surrounded Duncan's feet as he approached.
"Yes, this must be the the Tendo Training Hall..." He berkata to himself gripping his small umbrella tighter. Today, Ranma... anda meet your end!
Ranma Saotome slept softy in his unmade bed, as the tick of the clock wondered around the room. Creeeek... The door slowly opened and Duncan stepped inside.
"Wake up, Ranma. It's me-- Duncan."
Ranma made no movements, except for the motion of his lips as he breathed.
"Fight me! Hey, Ranma!" Duncan whispered.
"WOULD anda WAKE UP!?" He pounded his first for Ranma's head but he flopped over onto his side, still asleep. Duncan lifted his fist, which had gone straight though the bantal and was hanging around his wrist. He tried again, but drowsy Ranma Saotome lifted his hand away from Duncan's and scratched his head. Grrr...
"WAKE UP, DAMMIT!!" Duncan screamed. The sleeping Panda, Mr. Saotome, grabbed his 'QUIET!' sign and slapped Ranma out of the room. SPASH! Ranma landed in the small air mancur outside the room. Coming back to the suface once again in his female form after exposed to the cold rain that filled the small body of water, she met face-to-face with Duncan.
"Wha--? Wha--?!" Ranma tried to speak but water filled her throat.
"DUNCAN! It's the middle of the night! What are anda doing!?" She screamed.
"SILENCE! Does revenge know night atau day!?" Duncan yelled over the crash of the thunder.
"This again." Ranma muttered folding her arms.
"Would anda cut this out!? You've got nothing to get revenge for!"
"I'll say one thing... before I send anda to Hell." A dark glare rose on Duncan's face, and his paper and wooden Japanese umbrella stayed high above his head.
"When anda ran out on our duel, I followed you... all the way to CHINA!!" He berkata to her.
"Hm?..." There was lebih silence.
"Don't tell me anda went to the Ground of Accursed Springs... and that anda transform into something when anda get wet!"
"SILENCE!!" Duncan leaped into the air, gabbing his umbrella at Ranma as lebih thunder crashed.
"THE TIME FOR WORDS IS PAST!"
Sofia rose her head from her bantal and rubbed her eyes. "What's all the racket in the garden..." Kasumi opened the door and peeked in.
"Sofie? Are anda awake?"
"You too, Kasumi?"
They walked down the squeaky stairs as Kasumi wrapped a blanket around her.
"Do anda think it's a burglar?" Kasumi asked taking another step down.
"It had better not be." Sofie clutched her rounded sword and hopped two steps. CRACK! Soon lightning boomed. It lit up the sky, and shown Duncan's bag and dark figure leaping over the rooftops to Ramna waiting on the other side.
"OH!! It... it is a burglar! With a pack of stolen goods!" Kasumi squeaked with scared tears on her cheeks.
"I'll beat his brains out!" Sofie stated getting up and running toward the door.
"NO!! It's too dangerous!"
"But..."
"Here." Kasumi handed Sofie a heavy iron weight.
"Huh?"
Duncan and Ranma fought with fists and hands outside in the continuing rain. KLONG! The weight hit Duncan square in the neck. He dropped his umbrella, and he fell to a deep puddle below at the bottom of the house.
"DUNCAN!" Ranma screamed.
"Duncan?" Sofie asked, sweating, poking her head out into the rain.
"Oh! It was only Ranma's friend!" Kasumi sighed with relief.
Ranma sped down the sidewalk to the spot Duncan had landed.
Duncan's pack... and his clothes... Ranma thought as she picked up the drenched items that lay in the rain. "So, he really did..."
GRRR...
"Duncan...?"
GRRR... Two bright eyes stared back at Ranma, growling...
All that racket at two a.m.! Sofie thought, closing her door and walking to her bed. It was silent... but she had a feeling--
Someone's here.
"Who's there!? Come out!!" A rattling noise came from the window sill.
VWOOM, another dark object flew across the room, right at Sofie.
"AHH!!" Sofie smacked it, "NO!!"
WHAP! It flung back, and stayed still on the floor. Sofie breathed in an out, staring at the...
Small black pig.
A piglet... "Where did anda come from, hm?" She asked it, knowing it wouldn't reply, anyway. "Here, piggy." Instead of coming near, as most binatang it scooted away from this female human.
"Come on! Don't be afraid!" Sofie gestured, holding out her hands. "Oh, your drenched! Were anda in the rain all this time?" She petted it's back. "What's this? A bump?" Sofie rubbed it, and smiled at the small animal in pity.
"Listen Duncan... I'm sorry about what happened to you... But anda have to cut out these late-night attacks! I'm a guest here! I gotta be careful!" Ranma explained to a dog sitting in front of her on the floor as she dried her hair with a fluffy white towel.
"Ranma?" Sofie walked in holding the baby pig. "What's a dog doing here?"
"Sofie!"
SQUEEEEE! SQUEEEEEE!! The pig squirmed and wiggled, thrashing it's arms at Ranma.
"What are anda so mad about?" Sofie asked it. "Hush now! I'll put some medicine on that bump." She berkata pressing the pig to her chest. The pig stayed silent, except for a little sigh that escaped it's snout.
"What--? That thing's blushing!" Ranma pointed.
"Don't be silly!" Sofie swiped it out of her reach. Ranma grabbed it and held it up.
"Dirty-minded pig!... I knew it! A male!"
"So it is!"
WHAP WHAP WHAP! The little pig, who was now crying a little, hit Ranma repeatedly on the head as she held him.
Sofie took it back, and held it like a small child. "So what about the dog, Ranma?" She asked. Ranma berkata nothing, only stared at it.
Don't worry, Duncan. I'll keep anda secret-- It's the warrior's code! Ranma thought. The dog stared back with a blank expression.
"Isn't that "Bess"? The Yamane's dog?" Sofie asked.
"Huh?"
"Sure it is! Hello, Bess." The dog thumped it's tail on the floor, panting, while Sofie's scratched it's head. Ranma ran to the dapur and got a hot teh kettle. She came back and dumped it on the dog's head, after turning Sofie's around so she didn't see.
"What are anda up to?" Sofie asked.
"Wh-- Wh-- What?" The dog did nothing, not as Ranma planned. She expected it to turn into Duncan...
"Well don't I feel stupid!" She sighed walking toward the bathroom.
"Where are anda going?"
"A hot bath! I'm freezing after running around in the rain after Duncan!" Ranma replied.
"Warm the piglet up, too!" Sofie held the pig out to Ranma.
"Take a bath with a pig!?"
"FEH." Ranma scoffed grabbing the bottom of her shirt.
"So if the dog's just a dog... where's that idiot Duncan?"
Ranma held the pig down with her foot as she pulled off her clothes.
"Ok, you!" She took the pig in her arms. "Squirming won't help you!" The pig was, however, moving and trying to escape.
"In anda go!"
SLPASH!
The pig disappeared in the water, and bubbled came to the surface.
"Oops."
Duncan's non-pig naked body sat in the bathtub with Ranma's hand on his head.
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The hiss and patter of the rain was the only thing heard outside of the Tendo house. The lights in the town were turned off for the night, and anda could almost feel the still of the silence...
Little circles of water surrounded Duncan's feet as he approached.
"Yes, this must be the the Tendo Training Hall..." He berkata to himself gripping his small umbrella tighter. Today, Ranma... anda meet your end!
Ranma Saotome slept softy in his unmade bed, as the tick of the clock wondered around the room. Creeeek... The door slowly opened and Duncan stepped inside.
"Wake up, Ranma. It's me-- Duncan."
Ranma made no movements, except for the motion of his lips as he breathed.
"Fight me! Hey, Ranma!" Duncan whispered.
"WOULD anda WAKE UP!?" He pounded his first for Ranma's head but he flopped over onto his side, still asleep. Duncan lifted his fist, which had gone straight though the bantal and was hanging around his wrist. He tried again, but drowsy Ranma Saotome lifted his hand away from Duncan's and scratched his head. Grrr...
"WAKE UP, DAMMIT!!" Duncan screamed. The sleeping Panda, Mr. Saotome, grabbed his 'QUIET!' sign and slapped Ranma out of the room. SPASH! Ranma landed in the small air mancur outside the room. Coming back to the suface once again in his female form after exposed to the cold rain that filled the small body of water, she met face-to-face with Duncan.
"Wha--? Wha--?!" Ranma tried to speak but water filled her throat.
"DUNCAN! It's the middle of the night! What are anda doing!?" She screamed.
"SILENCE! Does revenge know night atau day!?" Duncan yelled over the crash of the thunder.
"This again." Ranma muttered folding her arms.
"Would anda cut this out!? You've got nothing to get revenge for!"
"I'll say one thing... before I send anda to Hell." A dark glare rose on Duncan's face, and his paper and wooden Japanese umbrella stayed high above his head.
"When anda ran out on our duel, I followed you... all the way to CHINA!!" He berkata to her.
"Hm?..." There was lebih silence.
"Don't tell me anda went to the Ground of Accursed Springs... and that anda transform into something when anda get wet!"
"SILENCE!!" Duncan leaped into the air, gabbing his umbrella at Ranma as lebih thunder crashed.
"THE TIME FOR WORDS IS PAST!"
Sofia rose her head from her bantal and rubbed her eyes. "What's all the racket in the garden..." Kasumi opened the door and peeked in.
"Sofie? Are anda awake?"
"You too, Kasumi?"
They walked down the squeaky stairs as Kasumi wrapped a blanket around her.
"Do anda think it's a burglar?" Kasumi asked taking another step down.
"It had better not be." Sofie clutched her rounded sword and hopped two steps. CRACK! Soon lightning boomed. It lit up the sky, and shown Duncan's bag and dark figure leaping over the rooftops to Ramna waiting on the other side.
"OH!! It... it is a burglar! With a pack of stolen goods!" Kasumi squeaked with scared tears on her cheeks.
"I'll beat his brains out!" Sofie stated getting up and running toward the door.
"NO!! It's too dangerous!"
"But..."
"Here." Kasumi handed Sofie a heavy iron weight.
"Huh?"
Duncan and Ranma fought with fists and hands outside in the continuing rain. KLONG! The weight hit Duncan square in the neck. He dropped his umbrella, and he fell to a deep puddle below at the bottom of the house.
"DUNCAN!" Ranma screamed.
"Duncan?" Sofie asked, sweating, poking her head out into the rain.
"Oh! It was only Ranma's friend!" Kasumi sighed with relief.
Ranma sped down the sidewalk to the spot Duncan had landed.
Duncan's pack... and his clothes... Ranma thought as she picked up the drenched items that lay in the rain. "So, he really did..."
GRRR...
"Duncan...?"
GRRR... Two bright eyes stared back at Ranma, growling...
All that racket at two a.m.! Sofie thought, closing her door and walking to her bed. It was silent... but she had a feeling--
Someone's here.
"Who's there!? Come out!!" A rattling noise came from the window sill.
VWOOM, another dark object flew across the room, right at Sofie.
"AHH!!" Sofie smacked it, "NO!!"
WHAP! It flung back, and stayed still on the floor. Sofie breathed in an out, staring at the...
Small black pig.
A piglet... "Where did anda come from, hm?" She asked it, knowing it wouldn't reply, anyway. "Here, piggy." Instead of coming near, as most binatang it scooted away from this female human.
"Come on! Don't be afraid!" Sofie gestured, holding out her hands. "Oh, your drenched! Were anda in the rain all this time?" She petted it's back. "What's this? A bump?" Sofie rubbed it, and smiled at the small animal in pity.
"Listen Duncan... I'm sorry about what happened to you... But anda have to cut out these late-night attacks! I'm a guest here! I gotta be careful!" Ranma explained to a dog sitting in front of her on the floor as she dried her hair with a fluffy white towel.
"Ranma?" Sofie walked in holding the baby pig. "What's a dog doing here?"
"Sofie!"
SQUEEEEE! SQUEEEEEE!! The pig squirmed and wiggled, thrashing it's arms at Ranma.
"What are anda so mad about?" Sofie asked it. "Hush now! I'll put some medicine on that bump." She berkata pressing the pig to her chest. The pig stayed silent, except for a little sigh that escaped it's snout.
"What--? That thing's blushing!" Ranma pointed.
"Don't be silly!" Sofie swiped it out of her reach. Ranma grabbed it and held it up.
"Dirty-minded pig!... I knew it! A male!"
"So it is!"
WHAP WHAP WHAP! The little pig, who was now crying a little, hit Ranma repeatedly on the head as she held him.
Sofie took it back, and held it like a small child. "So what about the dog, Ranma?" She asked. Ranma berkata nothing, only stared at it.
Don't worry, Duncan. I'll keep anda secret-- It's the warrior's code! Ranma thought. The dog stared back with a blank expression.
"Isn't that "Bess"? The Yamane's dog?" Sofie asked.
"Huh?"
"Sure it is! Hello, Bess." The dog thumped it's tail on the floor, panting, while Sofie's scratched it's head. Ranma ran to the dapur and got a hot teh kettle. She came back and dumped it on the dog's head, after turning Sofie's around so she didn't see.
"What are anda up to?" Sofie asked.
"Wh-- Wh-- What?" The dog did nothing, not as Ranma planned. She expected it to turn into Duncan...
"Well don't I feel stupid!" She sighed walking toward the bathroom.
"Where are anda going?"
"A hot bath! I'm freezing after running around in the rain after Duncan!" Ranma replied.
"Warm the piglet up, too!" Sofie held the pig out to Ranma.
"Take a bath with a pig!?"
"FEH." Ranma scoffed grabbing the bottom of her shirt.
"So if the dog's just a dog... where's that idiot Duncan?"
Ranma held the pig down with her foot as she pulled off her clothes.
"Ok, you!" She took the pig in her arms. "Squirming won't help you!" The pig was, however, moving and trying to escape.
"In anda go!"
SLPASH!
The pig disappeared in the water, and bubbled came to the surface.
"Oops."
Duncan's non-pig naked body sat in the bathtub with Ranma's hand on his head.
