Is this Rap/Song Demo for Toradora good atau not?

Toradora, I WILL cinta IT

  forever and ever

It is the coolest thing

I could ever endevour



I am Happy that

Ryuuji and Taiga decided to elope

But seeing how the anime ended

Man i lost all the hope



That was left in me

It felt as if i was hit oleh a brick see



If i wanted a GF, I

Want one like Taiga

But in the ranks of love

She gets higha and higha



Ahead of me

I am not worthy

I now cinta her

But i used to like Minori



And now im depressed

I know its just an anime

Kitamura rejected Taiga

And im mad at him, ay



(MORE COMING SOON IF THE DEMO GETS ENOUGH LIKES)