It's short but it should give some ideas:
After all of the fighting, struggles, sadness and misery; they're all but torn apart...They tried to make everything right and make everyone happy...But it ended so badly...They never thought it would end like this...The dream's all but a faint, non-existant memory...~
I hope it gives anda a thought on how it'll be. I'm going to try my best to make it worth your time to read it. Oh and may I ask if the judul sounded good? Once again; any questions, komentar atau concerns?
After all of the fighting, struggles, sadness and misery; they're all but torn apart...They tried to make everything right and make everyone happy...But it ended so badly...They never thought it would end like this...The dream's all but a faint, non-existant memory...~
I hope it gives anda a thought on how it'll be. I'm going to try my best to make it worth your time to read it. Oh and may I ask if the judul sounded good? Once again; any questions, komentar atau concerns?
Midnight:It's my birthday!Im finally 10!
Platinum:Can I come in?
Midnight:Sure!Come on in Platinum!
Platinum:Happy Birthday!
Midnight:Thanks!
Platinum:For your present It's something I couldnt wrap...
Midnight:Thats okay what is it?
Platinum:I found out the location of a Chaos Emerald!
Midnight:OMG!
Platinum:For your birthday,we are going to get the Chaos zamrud, emerald together!
Midnight:Awesome!Thank You!
Platinum:Im your bff.It's my job.
(Downstairs)
Midnight:Mom,Dad?
Midnight's Mom:What is it?
Midnight:Platinum is going to take me to get a Chaos Emerald!Can I go?
Midnight's Mom:I dont know?What do anda think hun?
Midnight's Dad:She can go I trust Platinum.
Midnight and Platinum:YAY!
Then Platinum and Midnight had set out on their adventure for the Chaos Emerald.
The End I HOPE anda LIKED IT!
PLEASE READ PART 2!
On September 3, Cynthia woke up seeing the beautiful hari outside when she walked out the door.
"Im gonna cinta this school year!!!" she told herself as she walked to school.
5 menit later of walking to school, Cynthia met up with her boyfriend Mars.
"Mars, are anda ok? anda look pale." Cynthia admitted putting her hand on Mars' forehead.
It was warm.
Mars shook his head and walked off, Cynthia almost cried watching him walk away.
Rouge the Bat had acme along and met up with Cynthia.
"Hows the hari gone?" Rouge asked in her sassy tone.
Cynthia shook her head and ran to the restroom to cry.
8 menit later after crying, Cynthia headed to class, math.
"This is going to be a hrrible year." Cynthia answered herself.
"Im gonna cinta this school year!!!" she told herself as she walked to school.
5 menit later of walking to school, Cynthia met up with her boyfriend Mars.
"Mars, are anda ok? anda look pale." Cynthia admitted putting her hand on Mars' forehead.
It was warm.
Mars shook his head and walked off, Cynthia almost cried watching him walk away.
Rouge the Bat had acme along and met up with Cynthia.
"Hows the hari gone?" Rouge asked in her sassy tone.
Cynthia shook her head and ran to the restroom to cry.
8 menit later after crying, Cynthia headed to class, math.
"This is going to be a hrrible year." Cynthia answered herself.