{even ask Shadowfanlover7 this fanfic is terrible}
IF U HAVE NOT READ CHAPTER 1-7 DONT READ THIS
The soldiers were coming over the path and WE WERE STANDING THERE LIKE STATUES!!! whisper had tears in her eyes. i was holding on to dare, and misery was standing extemely close to tuesday which i found quite odd but also not that much after seeing them hug earler. flana and coral were balling their eyes out. truth looked lebih scared that ever...or just her eyes did. arc tried to stay strong but ended up crying on dahsers shoulder. we were in trouble and we knew it. but rane seemed so calm, like this was all so normal...she was a weird one, but mayb this didnt scared her not at all. when the first the first soldier came into view misery screamed "EEEKERS" and it was ovious y. these soldiers were differnet. their armor was similar but the mantel of arms on their sheilds was much diffenret. instead of the usual red moon on them, it was a broken in half black jantung i never saw bfor. coral was the first to run then we all followed into the rocky mountains and the other side of the old abandoned camp. the unknown army was coming down the path very fast. but then when were almost all to the mountain, whisper tripped and fell while holding ranes hand and they both fell. i ran back to help them but the soldiers had already got to them. the head of the army which was a younger boy with a neon bright blue mop of hair picked up rane oleh the neck and kissed her on the lips. another one of the boys soldeirs lifted up whipser and threw her over his shoulder. coral shreeked and flana whimpered. the boy threw rane to another of his soldiers and took out his gun and began firing at us to make us climb up the mountain. then for some reason rane with the soldeir holding her oleh her wrists was glowing and her eyes were turning red...with anger. there was a bright red lite and then the soldeir holding her was one and there stood rane with the pelangi part of her bulu gone none completely black and her once colourless eyes shown red like miserys but brighter. she stood there head down breathing very slowly then she flicked and began lashing at the army with api formed from her hands and shot beams of red lite at them. when they shot at her sh sheided the blows with a her bare arms like they were bunga petals. while attacking the army with firery blows, the boy and the soldeir with whisper vanished into tin air with a snap of the boys fingers and tuesday berkata under his breath "black magic" when rane had whiped out the whole army but the boy and his soldeir there jst lay dead bodies and patches of api in the grass. me and misery jumped down from the ledge from where we were all watching and ran over to rane but when we got to her she turned around slashed at us with api her eyes turned colourless again and she fainted.
IF U HAVE NOT READ CHAPTER 1-7 DONT READ THIS
The soldiers were coming over the path and WE WERE STANDING THERE LIKE STATUES!!! whisper had tears in her eyes. i was holding on to dare, and misery was standing extemely close to tuesday which i found quite odd but also not that much after seeing them hug earler. flana and coral were balling their eyes out. truth looked lebih scared that ever...or just her eyes did. arc tried to stay strong but ended up crying on dahsers shoulder. we were in trouble and we knew it. but rane seemed so calm, like this was all so normal...she was a weird one, but mayb this didnt scared her not at all. when the first the first soldier came into view misery screamed "EEEKERS" and it was ovious y. these soldiers were differnet. their armor was similar but the mantel of arms on their sheilds was much diffenret. instead of the usual red moon on them, it was a broken in half black jantung i never saw bfor. coral was the first to run then we all followed into the rocky mountains and the other side of the old abandoned camp. the unknown army was coming down the path very fast. but then when were almost all to the mountain, whisper tripped and fell while holding ranes hand and they both fell. i ran back to help them but the soldiers had already got to them. the head of the army which was a younger boy with a neon bright blue mop of hair picked up rane oleh the neck and kissed her on the lips. another one of the boys soldeirs lifted up whipser and threw her over his shoulder. coral shreeked and flana whimpered. the boy threw rane to another of his soldiers and took out his gun and began firing at us to make us climb up the mountain. then for some reason rane with the soldeir holding her oleh her wrists was glowing and her eyes were turning red...with anger. there was a bright red lite and then the soldeir holding her was one and there stood rane with the pelangi part of her bulu gone none completely black and her once colourless eyes shown red like miserys but brighter. she stood there head down breathing very slowly then she flicked and began lashing at the army with api formed from her hands and shot beams of red lite at them. when they shot at her sh sheided the blows with a her bare arms like they were bunga petals. while attacking the army with firery blows, the boy and the soldeir with whisper vanished into tin air with a snap of the boys fingers and tuesday berkata under his breath "black magic" when rane had whiped out the whole army but the boy and his soldeir there jst lay dead bodies and patches of api in the grass. me and misery jumped down from the ledge from where we were all watching and ran over to rane but when we got to her she turned around slashed at us with api her eyes turned colourless again and she fainted.
Tell me if anda see MS qualities in this new character.
Name-Festus Pyre
Age-28
Birth date-796 6CE*(1996)
*aging increased due to interdimensional travel*
Birthplace- San Fransisco, California
Eyes- brown
Hair- red
FATAL FLAWS-
is considered an outcast. Has ADHD and can rarely focus, and has shattered personalities due to a car crash when he was young.
Talents-
none of relevance to society. Can smith metal, but is mediocre at best.
Friends-
his only friend died in the car crash aforementioned.
Enemies-
most of the school. Most notable are the snooty twins "Maryland and Danithan Suella" the two have supposedly nothing wrong with their life.
Family- adoptive parent Robyn Nera. Did I mention the car crash? It was bad.
Other Notes- has created a fantasi world called "Nimea", often wishes it was true. Has suspicions, but cannot prove it. Robyn is very lazy and forces him to do everything for her. His old family was abusive too.
DID taco MAKE GARY SUE?
TELL MEEEE!
Name-Festus Pyre
Age-28
Birth date-796 6CE*(1996)
*aging increased due to interdimensional travel*
Birthplace- San Fransisco, California
Eyes- brown
Hair- red
FATAL FLAWS-
is considered an outcast. Has ADHD and can rarely focus, and has shattered personalities due to a car crash when he was young.
Talents-
none of relevance to society. Can smith metal, but is mediocre at best.
Friends-
his only friend died in the car crash aforementioned.
Enemies-
most of the school. Most notable are the snooty twins "Maryland and Danithan Suella" the two have supposedly nothing wrong with their life.
Family- adoptive parent Robyn Nera. Did I mention the car crash? It was bad.
Other Notes- has created a fantasi world called "Nimea", often wishes it was true. Has suspicions, but cannot prove it. Robyn is very lazy and forces him to do everything for her. His old family was abusive too.
DID taco MAKE GARY SUE?
TELL MEEEE!